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  • Netsubo on September 30, 2002
    i appreciate your comment on my poem 'Lucid Contentions of Inspired Sacrifice' and the criticism. however.. the joke (although put aside) i do not find humorous. if someone happens to write a poem on their praise of whatever god or goddess they believe in, i do not judge by that simply because of my views. your time and energy is appreciated, as well as your opinion on my poetry, but your opinion on my opinion? i would appreciate it if those thoughts were kept to yourself. thank you, hope to see you around again
  • willdabeast on September 21, 2002
    long list o' writes wow
  • dfragment on September 21, 2002
    infinity imposes ambiguity
    alleviating susceptibility to stagnate
    converting confusion
    into streams of useful consciousness
    the gentle hand of fate
    I drift towards this constellation
    interpreting the hieroglyphs
    you scrawled in my palm
    following the pulsing quasar
    the luminosity of your mind

    [:o]
  • Shaitan on September 18, 2002
    'But you can never grow if you don't know you're small here and there.'


    will grow weather small or large ... black white gray tints tones shades
    nothing can stop us/me
    from Evolution in the shape of our
    mymarrow

    the ignorant words of yOur wisdom
    stay~ have gone

    will go
    Undeniable
    but the wisdom of my ignorance will go
    will stay_______Unstoppable
    oXXXo
  • Sprocket on September 17, 2002
    chocolate custard
    slipping sweetly past my tongue
    your smile on my mind


    had to express this thought or it may have invaded me and overthrown my concentration for the rest of the day

    :P
  • trippin boogie on September 16, 2002
    Dead cats, dead rats
    Can't see what they were at, all right
    Dead cat in a top hat, wow
    Sucking on the young man's blood
    Wishing he could come, yeah
    Sucking on the soldier's brain
    Wishing it would be the same
    Dead cat, dead rat
    Can't you see what they were at?
    Fat cat in a top hat
    Thinks he's an aristocrat
    Thinks he can kill and slaughter
    Thinks he can shoot my daughter
    Yeah right! Oh yeah!
    Oh right! Yeeah!
    Dead cats, dead rats
    Think they're an aristocrat
    Crap, now that's crap!
  • indigo on September 15, 2002
    Your writing really intrigues me. I've found what I've read to be very edgy and thought provoking. I try to look at something else each time I get a chance to pop in here. Thank you.
  • sonrisa on September 8, 2002
    you are crazy and i want to read your work. but im exhausted and they wont make sense...*yawn*
    goodnight :)

    ~Jenn
  • neurosine on September 4, 2002
    Know any publishers I can query?
  • Ava Noire on September 3, 2002
    If you ever have a chapbook or book published of your poems, lemme know cause I will def. purchase a copy :)
  • neurosine on August 30, 2002
    Shaitan: I love your writing. I'll probably continue giving advice. But you don't have to listen. I understand art as an artform. But you can never grow if you don't know you're small here and there.
  • neurosine on August 30, 2002
    Sprocket. Let me know when you need servicing.
  • neurosine on August 30, 2002
    Wingless butterfly...Read To Sail Beyond the Sunset. it's another really good write. maureen is there. The cat who walks through walls is also very good. Thanks for the comment. I grok it completely, though i am only an egg.
  • neurosine on August 30, 2002
    Haven't visited my own homepage in awhile. Umnnn....Scat...no...you're not that cat...I like the bizarre...but..no. I like the licking relationship idea though.
    Edited by neurosine on Aug 30.
  • Shaitan on August 26, 2002
    speak in tones... soft ones to yourself.. the only one who needs to listen...

    your advice is meant for only you~xxx
  • Zez on August 23, 2002
    good meetin ya, happy reading!
  • Sprocket on August 21, 2002
    so what does a Sprocket have to do to get a bit of attention around here - I think I might need some oiling and a little tweaking to keep me in good running order - you know it's not like I am high maintenance or anything - just a bit of regular servicing to keep me fit and gliding smoothly for optimum performance ;)
  • Cecilia Rose on August 6, 2002
    'TANSTAAFL' Robert A. Heinlein ' i didnt wuite get that one, only thing of his i ever read was stranger in a strange land, which was awesome,
  • scatcatblu on August 5, 2002
    Hi *smiles softly and flutters my eyelids at you*

    hey um in your above comment what's with the dead cat and am I the cat in question 'cause that doesn't sound very friendly and I might get mildy offended at the insinuations here :)

    and I dunno about this threeway stalking thing - doesn't really have the clarity in it unless there was a lot of blood and screaming and psychological distress - that I might be able to get into - otherwise I was kinda hoping for more of a sensual teasing tempt me chase me watch you lick me kinda relationship here - but hey I am open to suggestions *wicked smile* :)
  • neurosine on July 17, 2002
    If I ever get to Australia Gecko, Scat and I could both stalk you for a bit. We'll call then hang up when you answer. We'll ask your friends if they've seen you around. We'll take pictures covertly, then send them to you in letters, asking how you could do that to us. Why didn't you invite us? The usual neurotic denials. Dead cats on your doorstep. (as a gift.) Pretend like we just happened to show up. Well. I'm volunteering Scat here without her express permission. Stalking's hard work you know. We're already stalking each other. Fixations are hard to segment, y'know. Obsession is often a singular, linear thing. But hey, if you can't be dynamic, you'll never get through even the most uncomplicated projects. (sorry...couldn't stop writing....(sound of screeching brakes.)
  • Manicmuze on July 3, 2002
    Just wanted to drop by and say 'your poetry kicks ass'... :-)))
  • gecko on June 30, 2002
    what??

    but I wanna be Scats victim

    sobs uncontrolably

    hey maybe if I change the colours on my author page she will pick me instead

    lol

    i like hiding in the backgrounds nuero
    :)
  • scatcatblu on June 6, 2002
    hmmm I've decide to become a stalker - wanna be my first victim

    ;) your cute and interesting and talented and fun and I'm gonna have me some lol ;)

    sorry in mad mood of demony delight :o] xx
  • Bigmammajen on May 29, 2002
    Hi :)

    I just wanted to extend an invitation to come be a part of the Allpoetry Survivor Challenge.
    Its a great way to get your work read, as well as challenge yourself and push yourself to become
    a stronger poet in the process. You will also get your work seen more, and meet a lot of new
    people that you might not normally meet.

    I would like to say its not really a contest, its more like a lot of people having fun
    writing poetry, sometimes in styles they dont normally write, and discovering what they are
    capable of. I am personally inviting you because I have read your work, and think you are
    one who will do well through out the game.

    If you are interested, please go to this link
    http://www.allpoetry.com/get.cgi?id=71215&l=m


    IM me or email me at feelingloopy@hotmail.com with your answer, either way.
    I do hope you join us, and come have some fun writing and role playing and having a good time
    :) If you have questions, please let me know.

    Write ON
    and PS.....this is generic, its the same on all peopls pages lol sorry for not being more
    personal, but im lazy and too tired heh.
    Jen
  • scatcatblu on May 26, 2002
    wow when did you post so many poems - gee I'll never catch up - but I'll go square eyed trying :) xx
  • on May 22, 2002
    pokin my bill in to say hi :P
  • on May 13, 2002
    Nuero, thanks for your comment on my 'What a lovely perfection you're wearing.' When I wrote it, I had that uneasy feeling that I stole the metaphor .. or that it was somehow cliche .. but couldn't think of where ..
  • on May 9, 2002
    Just stopping by to let you know that you are a hell of a poet .. enjoy reading your stuff ..
  • nallelu on May 7, 2002
    Just wanted to let you know that you weren't 'overdoing it' at all with your comment--I really appreciate your thoughtful analysis! Thank you very much :)
  • Jareth on April 26, 2002
    Psssst!! Neuro!! Wanted to say that Judge Not was EXCELLENT. Do keep up the master work--- I guess I can send the TeleTubbies home now. :o) --jareth
  • Jareth on April 24, 2002
    Thank you for your comments on #116. It's short, true-- I like your stuff. Keep producing, or I'll hunt you down and make you watch endless hours of TeleTubbies. :o) --jareth
  • TillyMay on April 23, 2002
    I am so pleased to have stumbled upon your work. Your insight into the human condition and all that makes us tick is mind blowing. Your combination of poetic sounding language and every-day-in-your-face-feck-off-sort of stuff is so well chosen. I'm definitely a fan. Will be adding you to my ever so short favourites list. Keep them coming!
  • scatcatblu on April 12, 2002
    in Australia (mate) treacle is actually like molasses - very thick, heavy and sweet syrup - produced from the sugar cane refining process - so I hope that broadens the imagination ;) xx
  • scatcatblu on April 12, 2002
    ok it's 8pm, I've got treacle and I'm wearing a smile . . . :-D
  • scatcatblu on March 5, 2002
    the cat came back - often - leaving a great big *grin* for you to share ;D
  • Naz on February 27, 2002
    just wanted to let you know i love your work .. youre a great poet and i will be reading more of your work
    :)
    thanx
    ~NAZ~
  • Bigmammajen on February 9, 2002
    thanks for stopping to say hello on my page....
    Your words lifted me this morning, and I appreciate you taking the time to think of me....

    Jen
  • VocoKool on February 7, 2002
    Crux...I think that will the name of my next poem. Thank you for the response, it was greatly appreciated.
  • scatcatblu on February 4, 2002
    tired . . come back later . . read more . . like your stuff . . zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    Edited by scatcatblu on right now because 'not so sleepy now :)'.
  • Kiah on February 2, 2002
  • catz on January 28, 2002
    I surely like your poetry. I'll get around to reading it all, in between all the other stuff I do (have my own business.. very time consuming) You have a lot of poems but I'll get to them all. I've enjoyed what I've read so far.
    Dee
  • Ava Noire on January 23, 2002
    thank you for commenting on my poems! i appreciate it! I really like your style & will soon be reading more!


    ~peace >:}
  • San-d on January 6, 2002
    Just wanted to stop by and say Hello. I have been reading some of your work and will definitly be reading the rest..I like your style, you are talented.....Smiles gain :o) >>Sandy/San-d
  • on January 3, 2002
    Very interesting writing. Keep up the good work!..Love ya S.
  • nell on November 10, 2001
    Hi there,
    just wanted to say that i think you are a wonderful poet,
    and that i love your work and would like to read more...
    Nell
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