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Sunshinegf on March 11, 2006you are oozing with lots
of talent in your poetry
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melons on March 11, 2006Hi Dan
Mairi Bheag is a member of my website and an excellent literary writer. Thanks for taking the time to read some of my work, I must admit I do have your audio 'Blink' and isten to it often, having read your profile some time ago. I don't come to this site often, lack of time mainly, though I poke my nose through the screen to see what's going on. I have done some of my own audios too, without the music, I think the reading with the music in Blink works fantastically and you are indeed very talented. I write mainly erotica poetry, my own style though, not your normal run of the mill (I hope *chuckling). I have often thought I will try some 'rap-style' poetry, I'm game to try anything *smiling and have even written several songs with simple melodies.
Did you compose the music for blink yourself? I find it incredibly effective yet unobtrusively simple and it adds a really good dimension to your words, the emotion in your voice and the thoughts you express.
Thanks for taking the time to come and comment in my guestbook here
hugs,
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DanASBO on March 4, 2006Hey there.
You were recommended to me by Mairi bheag. I've read a few of your pieces and have to say I'm impressed, I don't normally critique but I'll comment on a few of these when I get the time.
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Cacho on January 23, 2006You have a talent to write from the heart. That's not something to downplay. (Not to mention your talent to communicate from you heart to that of the reader) You have the potential to be very successful in the field of writing. Pursue it. Much luck and much love.
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Moon Fae on December 24, 2005Hee hee - Your writing is incredible, thats why you get no negative critiques...and I have nothing posted here that is not at Mels. Even wrote an ode to To The Ladies at Mels...Peace and happy holidays
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melons on December 24, 2005Hey Jillian
thanks for stopping by hun. Glad you like my site....many women do
I come here to post my poetry because I want honest comments, if I post it on my own site no one gives me any negative critique *chuckling.
I'll go read some of your work later today if I get a chance, otherwise it will have to wait until after Crimble
Hugs,
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Moon Fae on December 23, 2005Hello Mel
Just browsing and saw Tropical Sunset...gets better each time I read it...though I do prefer your homepage myself
Hugs
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Faded on June 25, 2004Which pharmaceutical company do you work for?
So nice for a scientist to be passionate about poetry. Bravo!
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melons on June 7, 2004Hi Vi
glad you liked the site ...as for dipping plaguiarists in honey, tying them to a pole in front of an ant-hill and making them watch Glitter and a porn film of their parents ...well now, that sounds pretty good to me ..... (making a mental note not to get on your bad side...
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Actually, the dipped in honey and getting tied to a pole sounds pretty erotic... ..oops, I best behave...
<---smilin' innocently
Mel
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Pari Ali on June 6, 2004hello melons. I have been here reading your poetry, I have not left any comments yet because ill come back and do that and read them again, but I have loved what I have read, there is much beauty here that speaks of a burgeoning talent. it has been a pleasure.
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InxomniaXpiral on June 5, 2004Your site kicks ass! i am most impressed. I was reading what you had wrote above and think that plagerists should be taken out back, dipped in honey, tied to a pole infront of an ant hill and then made to watch Glitter, finally capped off with a porn starring their parents!
I'm glad you found out
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melons on June 2, 2004LOL, nice to know you are having fun and a little tipple, have one for me *raising my glass and saying 'Cheers'
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Lilithtornintwo on May 27, 2004thanks for commenting on Fallen One. I cannot think of a better way to explain how i feel try as i might. words are not enough so i went with a short write.
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melons on March 20, 2004Hi Gemini,
thanks for the welcome. Unfortunately I found your site whilst doing a search engine search on my own site and I determined that one of the members here had plaguiarised 3 of my stories and one of my images. This member was someone called ENIGMA, who has since (last night) been removed from this site for breeching my copywrite. The moderators AnnD and Symitar were very helpful and supportive. What was worse this person had entered one of my main stories into a competition. If you are interested in viewing my site then you may do so at www.melswebs.com.
All the best,
Mel
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rufina caraid on March 19, 2004It’s my pleasure to welcome you melons to Allpoety where you can nurture your writing talent by reading other poets work, entering challenges which may be a new style of poetry for you or just by reading the work of others. This may include some classic poetry from our ‘Oldpoetry’ sister site too. oldpoetry.com
We are an interactive site and thrive on comments made to others which in turn bring viewers to your own work, many lasting friendships have been forged on Allpoetry this way, simply by commenting on four poems for each one you post does pays dividends.
www.oldpoetry.com/special/critique – this article may be of some help.
There are a few rules to live by and if you go to allpoetry.com/special/policies
this is where you will find a comprehensive list. A list that all members irrespective of membership have to abide by.
If you need any assistance, with Allpoetry or Oldpoetry allpoetry.com/poets/gemini this is where you will find me, I’d also be interested in how you found AP. Any of my Greeter colleagues on line will also be willing to help and are highlighted in Green whilst Moderators on the site will be highlighted in Blue, you will find us at the top of the On-line box.
From the time you register, you will always be able to post your work, so please don’t worry when the Yellow Badge no longer adorns your page which comes with your 4 day free trial of Preferred Membership. That means you can customise your page with your own backgrounds, photos, and images. If you like it and want to continue as a Preferred Member, or even a Uber Member you can easily sign up ! (see the Help tab, top right ).
As a new member for this month only you have a ‘New Member Contest’ you may enter if you choose to. allpoetry.com/contest/517241 will take you there. Please carefully read the criteria for the contest as any poems that do not comply cannot be considered.
I think that’s enough for your first visit. There will always be someone on line to assist you if necessary.
Regards to you,
~Von~
Queensland
Australia
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