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Jade.Butterfly on June 9HA! Loved "My Science Project"
Only if i had thought of something like that when I was going to school!
That was just awesome.
-Mandi
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AnnD on November 1, 2005
now having read 'My Science Project' you have added an extra large smile to my face this morning.
I love it and the humour.
Your style definately appeals to my sense of humour and reading pleasure.
Kind regards,
AnnD
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Shancy Fayre on October 27, 2005Oh my gosh, this is perfect. It is great. The rhythm, the rhyme, the flow, everything. A great write!!!!!!!!!!!Shancy.
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Miss Kill on January 2, 2005My Dear Sir,
Do forgive my lack of embellishment on my recent poem. I am flattered by your generosity, for I do not believe my work to be as magnificent as you see it. I will endeavour to become as accomplished a writer as you have so deemed me. As to the vampiric quality, I thank you eternally, for you have noticed. My Dear Sir, Understanding and Pondering of Things is a task to which I am well aqcuainted, but portraying my understanding in my writing proves to be a task to which i am inadequate. I thank you again, Dear Sir, for your comments on my piece.
Forever Yours,
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Xx Alice xX on September 15, 2004"My science project" is so cool, love it.
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Azolean on May 18, 2004I thank you for your comments on my poem Empty Pages. I am always open to the opinions and help of others. If I wasn't, I wouldn't be posting my stuff here. I thank you very much for your honest opinion and words of advice. I will definitely remember them in the future. I've never claimed to be a professional. I'm just someone who wrote what they felt when it was felt. Now I post it in the hopes that maybe those who need it will read it and maybe even take some comfort in knowing they are not alone. Even so, it doesn't hurt to learn how to do it right or at least in a better way. Thank you again and I hope you'll continue to give me such helpful advice in the future.
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now on May 15, 2004well hello there kind sir... i wanted to write you a hello and thank you for the most charming of writes you left on my guestbook, i hate to excuse my lack of creativity for this post but im dreadfully tired! it was completely wonderful of you to write me a poem and i was taken back with such wit and quality you scribbed! when my eyes are pulled open from the friendly fingers of mr java i shall take a looksy much closer to your poems. until then take care and have a great evening!
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dawnhall on April 27, 2004You poem about you homework is simply awesome! I love it and I don't think anyone could have written any better than you!
I thonk you so much for sharing - I needed the laugh. It cleanses the soul.
God is blessing you!
With Christian Love,
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Freelancerj90 on April 9, 2004Wrong! Look closer. It's a bit hard to catch, I admit, but once you see it, you'll be, like, OH!
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Hiraldo on February 7, 2004Captain PiCarde is da bomb!
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poetryality on November 8, 2003God bless you for your compassion and sympathy. I need you all and God placed you in my life for great things. I am surrounded by so much love that I can hardly keep from birsting. Thank you again and be blessed!
Renee
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RoseBlossom on November 8, 2003Lol I noticed your screen name is vstartrek. I'm a HUGE star trek fan
Rose
Blossom
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Cisco Kid on November 7, 2003You've lost your mind for bidding 49 points per click in the feature box. Inflation is already rampant and you're fanning the fire. You could have gotten the same results for 35 per click. I normally don't criticize people for what they do in this site, but God, man, try to help us hold it down. LOL
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silica on November 5, 2003Excellent poem on the top – I really like your blob a lot, I’ll be back when I’ve had a nap, to read the humour you’ve on tap!
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EvolvedLove on November 3, 2003You're pieces, especially the humorous ones, are inspiring and I really enjoy most of them. I can't wait to read more, and I'm happy that you also like my work.
Lol, you sounded like my parents when you said that I might feel diferently farther down the road when it comes to guys. Yea that's just what I need (note the sarcasm, lol)
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Emeraldreamer on June 18, 2003THanks for your comment on My Race...I had just gotten back from camp, and I just felt like writing it...I actually wasn't totally writing about the spectators and those who help, I was focusing on God and what He can do for mw, but thanks sooo much for the comment! I really appreciate it! An in depth poem like this is up and coming, I just have to figure out how to pen it. You ever find it difficult to write exaclt what you feel for God? It's beyond words! Love your stuff!
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georgie on June 17, 2003u asked for a poem based on true and unconditional love... here tis..... an old piece by me... but think it might b just wot u were saying.........
http://www.allpoetry.com/Poem/113893
huge hugs,
georgie,
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dittysri on June 14, 2003Thanks for your comment on From Beauty to Sin. From your comment I assume that you are a Bible scholar and maybe you can answer one little question for me. "Which of the Ten Commandments forbids nudity?" Welcome to Allpoetry, I hope your stay here will be as satisfying as mine has been. I have only been on board since Jan. this year and enjoy all the newfound friends as well as the good poetry and comments. Now let me read your first poem.....
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