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ICULookn on December 27, 2005GREETINGS ap freind, wish you a HAPPY NEW YEAR filled with blessing, joy and peace and happy penning
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lordoftherings on December 24, 2005I just stopped by today
Hope you are having a wonderful day
That's festive and really gay
Because I would have it no other way
Champagne at midnight...bootie call,
watch out for St. Nick, he ain't that tall
Drink moderately so you don't fall
And if you're quesy--lean against the wall
What started out as a little note
Became a poem the size of a boat
My head is medically afloat
My dog has now turned into a goat
Happy Holidays Gregg
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RandomPoetGirl on May 6, 2005I love your author page! The quotes are soo cool and true.
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deathtoam on April 25, 2005you are my idol, if i could write like you i would love myself1 the guy who screwed you over should die.....you're amazing
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deadenedveins on November 21, 2004thank you for the comment on .Broken. it was very nice of you
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Madam Vixen on November 20, 2004well... i'm glad you found that amusing haha.
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----michael---- on November 19, 2004thank you for your comments, glad you liked it and I hope things get better for you and you get stronger and stronger. make sure you drop by and tell me how things are going.x
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Catressa on November 19, 2004I love this quote "Ride it like you stole it".. I take it to mean everything in life .. I saw it on a overpass on the way to Mt.Rainier..Do it all with everything you got.and your quote here? "I'm jealous of every girl that ever hugged you. Because for
those few moments... they held my entire world in their arms."
omg i love that where did it come from?? Take Care.. Cat
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and your quote here -
Anais on October 8, 2004Oh hon, you have no idea how much you've touched me. Please, please keep believing in love, it HAS to work out in the end. I have to admit I have forsaken love in the past, but recently i find myself questioning my cynicism. I have become too self-reliant and independent in the past few years to believe that i need a man to make me feel better about my life, yet i cannot deny that the idea of true love is just so damn romantic.
Anyway, i hope that you, my dear, can rise above all the bad things in your life, and above the drama of high school. Trust me, it will all seem so trivial in retrospect. But above all, i hope that you will find what you're looking for. Best wishes to you.
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The Monster on July 19, 2004You, my dear, have talent.
-Jake -
sheissounsure on July 19, 2004havent got to read any of your stuff yet but cool quotes!!!!
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lordoftherings on July 11, 2004Thank you
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I am doing fine...and that is the truth. I have spent the last two days phoning my friends and privately thanking them in their own individual way for being there for me throughout this whole journey. I have made amends with my mother and we have a new relationship starting up. I have meditated and thanked my cosmic forces for allowing me to see more of what life has had to offer. I have cried rivers over the overwhelming amount of support, love, and well-wishes people have sent to me through this website and my other poetry site. I have yet to go through my e-mails, taking the journey of recovery slowly, because I know there will be more emotions spilled over the pages inside. I have been in more pain than I ever experienced before, but this pain holds the healing process of all past pains. I am me, and I need to internalize all aspects of this journey from every angle that was shown to me through everyone else's eyes. I have a fountain of ink to spill in writings over this incredible experience. I will forever remain humbled over to those who showed me how to do this journey in peace and still survive. I am recovering. And I feel great.
s Gregg -
kay a on June 6, 2004hi, thank you for your comment on my poems...it is truly appreciated. i wanted to read your poems as well and your author's page. as i was reading it though, it was good to see that i am not alone in feeling depressed and such. i struggle with depression and other problems everyday and through writing and reading, i am learning to cope with things a bit better. one thing i read that disturbed me a bit, is the fact that you want to get married. now, i know that everyone is different but being married myself, i know that it is very hard. marriage changes everything. it is very difficult and not the best thing to aspire to. when the time comes, just make sure that the person is completely there for you no matter what. love does not always conquer everything. anyway...you are a great talent and don't let anyone tell u differently
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Poetic Fanatic on May 3, 2004Hi saw your name and I knew you knew pain. May yours rest quietly, I bet you got a story. Anyway, I like your page especially the quotes.
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lordoftherings on May 3, 2004
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F Etc on April 30, 2004http://www.allpoetry.com/Poem/602142
Glad to see you and i had the same sort of opinion on this poem, i can't believe such a horrid poem got so much applause.
Jadey xXxXx
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Yesterdays Feelings on April 23, 2004i love your author page, it's so ..........YOU. it seems so personal and like no one else could have it. i love your random quotes and the love symbols and colors. you rock.
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lordoftherings on April 20, 2004 Alright folks, I have it figured out...to learn how to post your poetry for critiquing please go to the group you are already approved for and check the posts I have just entered tonight. This is the way that I would like to see the pages run. (I have not posted in two of the groups yet 'Betty Boob' and 'Lord of the Rings' because I have no poetry that fits those subjects but if you just click on the other three , I have placed a sample of my poetry in those Societies.
I do not expect members to critique my works, especially the first poems I have placed, they are trophy winners and have already been critiqued in my library, I am just the moderator and friend here to help and guide you along your poetic journey.
There are two ways to contact an author...by clicking on the pencil beside their name you send them a private Instant Message . By adding your comments in the Comment Box , you are critiquing the poem and allowing other members to read these critiques so I would advise everyone to go to
allpoetry.com/special/critique
for the guidelines on critiquing and to use the information in that article as your textbook for these Societies.
For those who have posted links or poems for admittance to the Societies, if you wish those poems to be critiqued, please follow the instructions on “How To Post Your Poetry For Critiquing”. Good luck everyone and happy reading and constructive criticism.
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lordoftherings on April 19, 2004Thank you for that Winnie the Pooh poem, I too grew up in a room full of Winnie the Poohs..wait...I still have a room full of Winnie the Poohs, generations seldom change sometimes.
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icefire on April 10, 2004They be good words to follow my love. Umm, that is all I have to say, except I love you!
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Guardian on April 10, 2004Being a teen is rough on anyone... rougher on those though emotionally that don't view themselves as good enough or normal. It's good that someone tells you they love you, but the desire to be loved won't sustain you and by the sounds of it has left a huge hole in your heart already. Although it may sound rediculous, the only one who can help you fill that void permanantly is yourself, and the way to start that is to write down a list of things you like and dislike about yourself (and hair, albeit a nice feature, doesn't count). What I mean is personality traits: Are you smart? Funny? Have a good sense of humor? Kind? Sincere? Honest? Write that stuff down, and anything else you can think of. If you aren't any of these things, mark that too. Then plan out ways to at least once a day appreciate the good things and fix the bad things. It sounds stupid I know, but it really does work if you stick with it... I'd say after a couple of weeks you should notice a difference. It just takes a bit of willpower and determination, and believe me, if you have the nerve to cut yourself than this should be a breeze. Anyhow, try it out and see if it helps. TTYL
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Guardian on April 10, 2004Anyhow, just read your author page, sorry to hear about your hardships... something you may want to keep in mind is that not many people know how to love unconditionally, and of those that do even fewer know how to show it, so don't be too hard on others or yourself. If you are happy with who you are, then the opinions of others won't matter. Everyone wants to be loved, but until you love yourself all you will find are false leads and broken promises... trust me on that. Take care, keep up the great poetry!
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lovehateandtears on April 8, 2004IT IS SO FUNNY THAT YOU SUGGESTED I NAME THE BOOK "SHE" BECAUSE THAT IS WHAT I ORIGINALLY NAMED IT. AT FIRST I THOUGHT IT WAS DORKY BUT MAYBE YOURE RIGHT!
THANK YOU FOR READING IT, IT WAS UP FOR ABOUDN 8 HOURS WHEN I CHECKED FOR COMMENTS AND THERE WERENT ANY, AND I WAS BEGGINING TO THINK THAT NO ONE LIKED IT. BUT I AM GLAD SOME ONE DOES. I WILL BE POSTING ANOTHER CHAPTER THAT I HAVE ALREADY FINISHED IN A DAY OR TWO. THANK YOU!
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ceegeeess on April 7, 2004I have gone thro' your author's page with interest.your quotes are very fine. your narration about yourself made me to leave a comment on your page. you have got a loving mind and you surely want others to like you.I like you for simple and innocent thoughts,dear kayla, the comma girl!I have also read your latest write'she-chapter1' I think you can name it "she". It suits the novel whatever may be your theme. I feel that you want to highlight her life in your novel.In a way it may be 'undisclosed you' in the novel. I will follow it. let us see. you are a good psychiatrist, dear kayla!
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Princess Muse on April 1, 2004Hold your head high sweet one. Your "father" doesn't deserve the time you spend feeling pain over him. Life is what you make of it. When you give your heart to someone and work on the relationship, it will flourish. Remember that for when you marry and have your own family. You will have your secret desires one day. For now, remember, high school only lasts so long and then real life begins. The pain that you feel in school will eat at you all your life if you let it. Trust me, none of those people are worth that. They can only feel good about themselves by making others feel bad. Don't let them win. Be yourself, be proud of who you are and look forward to days of happiness in the future. It has been over 20 years since I've been where you apparently are now. If you ever need to talk, IM me, I'll be happy to talk. Hang in there. It does get better, trust me. Keep writing, it is wonderful therapy and a great release.
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----michael---- on March 16, 2004lol, I think I sickened him by writing about human beings having sex! Glad you enjoyed it at least! Some people!!!
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semperubisububi on March 15, 2004holy shit! i feel the same way you do and ive never met anyone who feels that way.....awesomeness....ill read some of your stuff soon
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darkwithin on March 7, 2004Hello Kayla I just wanted to take the time to stop and say thank you for your comment on Second Chance. It means a lot to me when someone takes the time to compliment me on something I have written. Anyhow I red your page and I must say that you seem pretty cool. I also am in a long distance relationship, my b/f lives in NY. He's the one who cheated on me. But he lived where I do and then moved to NY so I know him. Anyways thanks so much for you comment.
Good luck and bless be,
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icefire on December 1, 2003Come on, someone else add a comment, jeez, show some community spirit, trust me, you'll like it.
Err, anyways, I like the re-design of this here page.
Good stuff
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icefire on September 18, 2003Hmm, I failed in my mission, ah well, I'll just have to continue tomorrow or Monday, I dunno, but, I shall not give up.
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icefire on September 18, 2003No fair!!!! I can't go to your website and I can't see your picture. Damn it, ah well, I'll get over it, or I'll burst a blood vessel, either way, it will work.
Hmm, I gotta, read some more of your stuff.
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