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  • XsweetpeaX26 on April 6, 2006
    im sorry i freaked out on you - i was having a bad morning and this is pretty much the only place i go that doesnt piss me off and im really serious about my work, i wasnt meaning to give me special treatment - but i honestly didnt see that rule there or i would have done it - and hten when i read the thing about you giving warnings and you didnt give me one thats when i felt i didnt get EQUAL treatment - didnt realize it was already closed - stuff like that, sorry. didnt mean to offend you - but you know, hopefully you understand
  • James R on February 2, 2006
    Hey my friend just to let you know there is a new chapter of my story up right now take a look wen u have ther time.
  • la petite sirene on January 9, 2006
    I just read your poem, "Cute little blue eyes" and I'm DEFINATELY going to have to read through some of your work. I love your motto too! I'm glad that there are still people like you in the world!! I will definately get around to reading and commenting on some more of your poems later on, but for right now your going on my favorites! lol keep up the good works!
  • WindUpEnigma on August 28, 2005
    *slaps self* lol, guess you did use them, I just managed to hit everything that didn't have a background. Sorry bout that.
  • WindUpEnigma on August 28, 2005
    I've gone through and read a couple of your pieces. Not bad at all. Good rhyming in most. Only thing I would suggest would be to use backgrounds. It adds a little flavor.
    All in all, nice work.
  • Legend on August 28, 2005
    I have just spent a little time reading through your collection of poem I feel you have a fine grasp of rhyme Even if most of it is a little sad or dark.I love peaches nice and light. Most people write from life that is the way we all start but i have found that even at my age you can only do so much then run out of experiences.This site saved my poetry because i moved into work that others had set in contests ,and i have written more in the months i have been here than in the two years before.It is a great experience to enter contest that you don't feel happy about writing just to gain a wider frame to work with.You did a great job with the picture contest i set .you want to try a few more of them.its great to get you thinking along different line to work with.I love your work and feel you will only get even better by trying other subject well done and good luck with your writing
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