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erasing0180 : What happened to the zine? on April 25, 2007
Hey - you should email me and tell me what happened to that zine you were making, that you were going to use one of my poems for - I never got it.
I tried to email you, but I got a bounceback from your gmail address. Has it changed?
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did you get my emailed poem?
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Look at all this stuff. Holy smokes.
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Hello. Recently I have decided to hold a
contest as an " Invite only ". I have been reading
your poems for quite awhile and thought this
would be a good way of getting to know you better
as a writer. I would very much appreciate an entry.
It will aid in the hope to extend my commenting
on other writers , Such as yourself.
allpoetry.com/contest/1932350
Thanks for your time .
James
P.S. If you would not like your name
included on the contest list , Please IM me
and I'll remove it. I don't want to offend
anyone by this contest or make anyone
uncomfortable.
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i seem to be critical today, so I'll let it go, but i sure was glad to have such a range of material.
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'i was a kaleidoscope' is one of my favorite songs.
yay.
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Hey, I usually don't do this, but I have this contest going, and I was wondering if you would stop by and write something for it. I love your style of writing and I just think that it needs a little pick me up.
Let me know, thanks.
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woo hoo, woo hoo,
i commented on you.
and thrive on attention.

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I love 'somewhere i have never travelled' too! I intend to keep reading your stuff, now that I've found it. 
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hello!
wow that's nice of you.
another binge before halloween.
better that I take a day four times a year than an two hours a week right now.
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Wow! I just wanted to say that your poetry is the best that I ever read on this site!!
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you wrote so many comments. it's wonderful. i'm always so happy when once in every few months I click on allpoetry and there are so many commment boxes from you at the top of my screen that I have to scroll down. anyways. i appreciate it. no one says that enough.
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such a long time it's been. well, the period of no-time-for-AP-ness is hopefully about over. I can't catch up on everything, but thankfully no one's going hold it against me!
oh and that is a wonderful lyric. Never heard that expressed before. Edited on Jul 24, 12:10 because ''.
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I understand where you think that's going too far, but to each his own, I say. If you don't like it, don't read it. Thank you for your input.
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I see we share the same favorite poem, that's great!
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me here hoping to make time to comment binge on you in medium rnage future. (which is, like, 10-20 days. oh well.)
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wow. five in one week. that really sucks! I am almost done my exams, I have one tomorrow morning for historical theory and method, I'm kind of nervous about it because I had a whole lot of reading to catch up on. oh well. i just can't wait to be done!
congrats on moving in together, that is fantastic. trust me, the first few months are nice, the second months are shitty, but it all evens out afterwards. it's nice. So you are staying out there for the summer then?
that would be cool to be a police officer. you will get a gun. that could be fun. and the possibility of a fancy car and outfit, umm..uniform. i'm a nerd oh well. where would you be going for school?
anyways, off to study. nice to hear from you!
mel.
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Hey Mel,
Life is pretty good, in general. I'm not too sure about the whole arcaeology thing now. It is really interesting and all, but job wise after...my chances of getting the job I want are slim...sooo....I think I'm going to apply to become a police officer...wooeee, haha. We'll see how it all goes. I can't wait til May 1st, that's when Trista and I move in together.
I have been totally screwed for exams. 5 in the last week, my last one on April 30th. Argh. Oh well, I'll have LOTS of time to study for them.
Anyway, take care and TTYL.
Kyle
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Hey Mel,
What's shaking? Not much here. I haven't talked to you for a while, I hope you're doing well. Things here, well, let's just say they could be more concrete. How's Ryan doing? Good, I hope. Anyway, I hope to talk to you sometime soon. TTYL
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lol, thanks. what on earth made you pick monkeyspank out of allllll my work? lil wierdo!
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heck yes to the cursive lyrics!
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Chupachupachupachups.
Thank you kindly for your applause.
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Umm...I am absolutely hopeless. My heart contracted when I recognized the lines from one Thom Yorke. How unflaggingly pathetic am I...commenting, not on you (which I shall do shortly to make up for this) but on Radiohead. Can't escape, me little pig, shan't even try...
He's so fucking special (all apart from that song, what can I say...hmmmm)
Anyway, read much more of your work than I comment on. Finally decided to admit to it.
Keep it up. For me if for nothing else.
Oh, and golly! thanks for listing me on your list of elites! I feel famous. 
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Props on the radiohead lyrics!
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join Rollercoaster Riders
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you're used as an example in my recent contest. so be delighted, why don't you.
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ummm,
to you:
thanks for paying so high a compliment to my work.
i
really don't know what to say in a time like this.
it's nice of you.
it really is.
hopefully i'll be back to writing poetry again soon,
and back to
this site
much more.
then i can repay all your kindness.
thanks again
amen
meow
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Hey Mel-mel,
Well, I thought that I'd let you know that I won't be leaving until Aug 25th. I hope you're here by then so we can hang out...and play chess...and whatever else. Anyway, I hope things are going well there. I haven't found a job yet, and I'm still looking. Oh well, soon enough.
Take care and TTYL.
Kyle
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i'm enjoying the movement (though ever-so-subtle) from interpersonal imagery and toward...
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so good to see another work from you here. (you'd think i'd comment on it... i can't do anything halfway and now is not the time...but i will!)
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Well, happy birthday, even if it's a little belated.  My b-day is less than 3 weeks away....wooo 21. Scary.
Anyway, yeah, I'll be gone by August. I'll definitely try and make it up there to see you sometime before I go. I think I'll make some time to do it. I know I'll get sick of home pretty quickly.  So, I guess we can kinda try and make plans sometime.
I have one final to go and I'm done. I can't wait. I think I'll do fine on it.
TTYL
Kyle
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Hey Mel,
Well, I'm almost done school....yippy. 2 exams to go and I am home Thursday. I cannot wait. Anyway, think you'll be in Sarnia anytime soon? I'd love to just hang out....and play some chess, haha. Well, I hope things are going well for you there. I can't wait to finish and be home. But, I better get to bed. Gotta wake up nice and early for my 9am final...woohoo, haha. Take care.
TTYL
Kyle
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Well, Mel, looks like you're having fun here. Well, the job you have there sounds super cool. I wish I could do something like that. Well, whenever you get back to Sarnia and/or wheneer I go to Ottawa, we have to place some chess. You just might beat me this time around. I actually wouldn't doubt it. Anyway, I hope things are going well there for you. Things here are pretty good. No real complaints. Well, time to meet my prof, haha, to talk about the final exam. Fun, fun.
TTYL
Kyle
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hey. hopefully no hard feelings?
I've got mine and generic's first contest ever and would be privledged if you wandered down to my site and told me what you think.
I know I mangled the idea in explanation, but hopefully it's salvageable.
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I don't know why, but I love that picture..anyways..I'm off to read your poetry..and that wonderfully long piece of hate mail.
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Hey Mel,
I was just wondering when you were done your finals and would be back in Sarnia. I don't finish until April 28th, bleck. Anyway, let me know. TTYL
Kyle
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Was good to get the commentsm high marks for sincerity, intelligence, and having a recognizable voice. I can't give this place the time it needs right now, but I'll be back to return the favor some night when I can't work anymore.
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Contrast and Compare would be the one I'd liked on Letting Off The Happiness... Difference In The Shades is alright... but after going through their music so much, you get repeats of the "t.v.'s and radios and phones" references and you just seem to want to beg them to do something different.
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yes indeed.I love the center of the world, it's almost my favorite song by bright eyes, however I am very partial to the difference in the shades.
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The Center of The World... Bright Eyes... One of their finest.
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Your photos are cool. Even though I've never been a big fan of colour. The town. Mood. Sublime.
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Hey Mel,
I'll be home the 21st. I'll be there until the 29th. I'll be flying back here that day to spend New Year's with Trista and a few other people. I'd love to hang out with you sometime in there. School's ok. I'm really looking forward to next term. I get the classes I really want to take.
Well, take care and ttyl.
Kyle
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Hey Mel,
What's up? Nothing much here. I just thought I'd stop by and say 'hi' Hope things are going well for you in Ottawa. Things are great here.
Well, ttyl. Take Care.
Kyle
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yes, i too have just
begun to discover the joy of
death cab for cutie!
i'd also reccomend downloading 'coney island','a movie script ending','why you'd want to live here' and 'we laugh indoors'
(right now, i'm downloading 'styrofoam plates')
if you like this genre, i'd also recommend
a band called owen
and another called american football
rock.
yes.
(*shuts up*)
meow Edited on Nov 08, 2:16 because ''.
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The Weakerthans and NMH are fantastic. Bright Eyes, I'm working on. Do you like The Mountain Goats? Daniel Johnston? Built To Spill? Others? Thoroughly impressed with your poise and even-handed approach to both poetry and comments.
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Hey Mel,
Now that's a great pic if I've ever seen one ;).
Anywho, just stopping by to see what was new. Oh, I got to see The Weakerthans play here last week, I think it was. They're really good live.
Well, hope to talk to you sometime soon.
Take care.
Bye
Kyle
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mmm....just writing here to make sure i come back later and have a look... im sure your good if fire... says...well see ya round
-Tate
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