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horus8 on October 2, 2006

You see an eigth of what I want you to see, believe in a sixteenth of what they let you,
and rely on a thirtieth of what actually matters. Not only are you
predicatable, angry, and befuddled, but no doubt plain looking, stoid
and perfectly resentful. But only in a predicatably jealous way.
A very American thing to be, perhaps you are what you hate the most, and just assume I'm right up there with you. Because unless you've read all 1500 of my comments and all 600 pieces of my poetry and 5 albums, 2 books, various essays and prose, or even half way followed my career, talked to my wife, children, friends and students, only then, could you begin to remotely have a realistic opinion. Otherwise? You sound like a trogladite. I don't claim to know anything about you other then the obvious. You are swinging at the wind, and it's funny to watch.
Fug-azi on October 2, 2006

Ah so you lie as well as have an inflated ego, I should have guessed you weren't really a Mason, failed the entrance exam I expect. So your not American, yet you live in that country, take that countries money, pay them taxes (maybe), in my mind that makes you an American, but for your sake I'll refrain from mentioning it again as it so gives you a problem to associate with the country that pays for your life.

As to batting below average, .... well maybe, but it's still a higher average than yours.
horus8 on October 2, 2006

You are still batting way below average.
I am not American, and I'm not a freemason.
You certainly believe everything you read.
Fug-azi on October 2, 2006

Hmm .. I thought I'd better come look at your page and some more of your work after the wonderfull comments I have been recieving from you (not).

Its a shame that the majority who come here seem to more interested in your smile, biceps, cock (delete as necessary) that your writing, which by the way, I find fairly interesting. You certainly do have a talent .. but .. it is such a shame that your personality is only out shone by your ego. Maybe you feel you are the only person who has had problems in their life, I really can't say .. because I don't know you (thankfully).
Have you ever thought about actually helping people here and posting constructive critique ... remember that word .. constructive. I'm not saying you should pander to peoples ego's as much as you pander to your own, but at least give them some advice .. and no I don't mean stop writing.

I know being from the US does leave you a little disadvantaged, due to the lower expectations of their "artists" and so having a caustic personality means you stand a little higher than the crowd. I'm sure your self-inflated esteem will far out live your success.
As you so rightly pointed out to me I have no literary achievments, nor am I likely every to have any .. but I really don't give a fuck about literary achievments, I write because I enjoy it, some people like what I write, if they don't its easy to turn the page or click on another link.

Your Mason teachings really must mean nothing to you or is it that you have yet to pass the first level of this honerable society, Hiram Abif must be turning in his grave at the thought of such as you attaining higher understanding .. but I suppose money talks every where now, but some how I think your resurrection will not occur. (not even US Mason's are that dum .

Enjoy your fame, such as it is, but like all things fame is nothing without Humility.
horus8 on September 28, 2006

I'd be happy with a grammy mammy.
symitar on September 27, 2006

good luck with your upcoming commercial, Jeremi - I hope to see you on the red carpet at the Oscars one day. I know you are in a tough business, but so glad to see you are hanging in there and glad you are able to find work. Take care, I know you work hard and you deserve to be noticed.

Becky
E t e r n i t y on September 18, 2006

Yes I have trie it... I figured since it was a short poem I would add a little to it with that.. Its just a way of bringing out the emotions to me.. It was to a guy you've never met.. But Ive never met him either so were good. Thank you for commenting! [By the way I luff your page.. its bewtiful] <3

-Syns
horus8 on September 18, 2006

be my friend

www.myspace.com/horus8thewerewolves
NurseHayley on September 18, 2006

Cool beans! Bet it doesn't get to the UK Everyone I've known to ever be remotely famous is either the recluse type or only works in another country!
horus8 on September 18, 2006

Indeed, I'll wait forever if I can.
I booked a nissan commercial last week, yay.
NurseHayley on September 18, 2006

What's that at the current exchange rate??

You'll need to wait til my first pay check
horus8 on September 18, 2006

Awesome! An income is great, especially when it involves helping people.
Congratulations, now you can buy my book and cd's for my 'new' friend
special, get a book and a cd mailed to you, signed by the great J (that's my friend Jimmy, jk.) and then mail me back 25$ to the return address upon arrival of your
package.

merely send your address to horus8j@yahoo.com
NurseHayley on September 18, 2006

Hey there stranger. How goes it? Guess who qualifies as a nurse on 25th September
horus8 on September 18, 2006

Be sure to check out some of my pretentious links, as you can see they're all about me

You'd might make a difference
If you weren't getting fat on bad TV
And celebrity bullshit, and Jesus.

www.unicef.org/

Don't be a pathetic self centered fairy
Help the fucking homeless,
and quit shoving pie down your trap.

www.fanniemaefoundation.org/

Are your Ugg boots, cell phone, and Paris Hilton
Come fuck me pants boring you to death?
Then inform yourself, and spare us
the trouble of watching you indefinitely puffing ass
Wake up to a real cause

www.pedaids.org/

Will the real heros please step forward

www.childrenofthenight.org/

I figured you missed all of this at the the top
while you were staring at my package and claiming that
I was pretentious without really doing your homework enough to
find out that I do more for sick people than you, or
Jesus..

Edited on Sep 18, 2:56 p.m. because ''.
horus8 on September 18, 2006

You get my award for having the most solopsistic username I've ever had the displeasure of mouthing, I'm sure Jesus can't wait to put you on his lap.
Mad Pastor Grovell on September 18, 2006

You get my award for the most pretentious author's page here. Well done, there is a lot of competition out there.
Iohagh on September 12, 2006

Darling Commentor

Be gentle with her
your lover you refer
for happiness is great
but not entirely fate.

I like you page
all passion and rage
and one steaming look
like covers of books.

So guy I fly
and say babies cry
no they're not erotic
but silly and idiotic.

Yet, I am both
a poet who quotes
and a baby girl
with that defiant curl.

Smoosh

Janet
Abscessed on September 3, 2006

look at his muscles bulge

>jumps around like a crazy teenager
Suzanne Dia on August 30, 2006

hiding I suppose. I'm around, though, at least from time to time.
horus8 on August 30, 2006

Hi, where've you been!?
Suzanne Dia on August 30, 2006

How ya been, J? I haven't stopped by in a while. You're still gorgeous, but thats no surprise.
horus8 on August 29, 2006

that's so I don't miss with the good drugs.
bw43 on August 29, 2006

nice veins
superstarr on August 23, 2006

NYcee stuff keep it upp WOW you put a lot of hard work into it!!GReat job!!Is that a pictures of you if it is your handsome!!
horus8 on August 22, 2006

Because they're made of shale.
dsfhsdjfgsdfgsfh on August 22, 2006

hey jerry. You're so much less threatening when I call you that. Why are girls so !@#$%ing flaky?
horus8 on August 17, 2006

Very kind words, I'll be sure to keep up the good fight.
shastadaisey123 on August 17, 2006

Jeremi, reading your author's page is such a fascinating adventure...you are truly one of a kind and I hope that as I grow older and more senile, I can walk around and tell everyone, "I knew him whe he first started"...you are a delecious piece of mankind, with a mouth, a mind and the raw courage to "tell it like it is">>love ya man freda
Naughtygrlred on August 16, 2006

what up, hmmm just inquiring about ur next piece, want something stimulating to read
horus8 on August 11, 2006

Not unless I'm quoting myself. Do you quote yourself?
You'll notice that that description of said mentioning
is in quotes, meaning I didn't say it at all.
Abrielle on August 11, 2006

So are you saying that Mary & Babalon are really blood-sisters?
on August 10, 2006

Wow. I absolutely LOVE your work and look forward to reading more in the future. I hope it inspires me to write 1/8th as well........
horus8 on August 9, 2006

No, not at all... You just have to worry about rape, masectomy, and watching your children, and or family viciously murdered directly before you're shipped out into
slavery and a life of prostitution, heroin addiction, then death in some asian bordello
or middle eastern bazar tent.
on August 8, 2006

Lucky for me I'm a girl and I won't have to worry about being drafted into WWIII whenever the draft does eventually start. Try not to lose too much sleep. There's always crying yourself to sleep, or drinking yourself into a stupor so you can't remember your own name let alone how to use a computer.
horus8 on August 7, 2006

Thanks... what are you up to? Sorry I haven't rattled your cage lately. I've been helping a friend re-model his house, and well, it's become a royal pain in the arse.
loualoui on August 7, 2006

HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEET STUFF!!
horus8 on August 6, 2006

Oh dear... I hope this doesn't mean we can't get to know eachother!
I might lose sleep over that. You know, with world war three brewing, and AIDS and all. If I thought you and I couldn't trade reads? I would cry.
on August 6, 2006

I've been away from this site for awhile and I thought I would come back and give it another shot. I must admit, your profile was a bit too long for me to consider reading your poetry. I' was scrolling down just looking for an end. I doubt that's the result you were looking for, but that's a honest first reaction.
bw43 on August 4, 2006

you kinda look like a scared little kid in this pic u have put up... what happened to the one with that 'fuck you' smile?? that one was an interesting one.
horus8 on August 4, 2006

My american friends and I read your poems aloud, and cheer.
-I love my midget- on August 1, 2006

I miss you reading my stuff and telling me how great I am. You must link me when you post something new as your work is not in any order of most recently posted. Plus I am a lazy cunt. Oooops, the mods have warned me about using that word in comments. Cunt that is, not lazy.
horus8 on July 31, 2006

Good, just trying to save a buck and still eat if
you can believe it.
NurseChilly on July 30, 2006

a man and hilti should never be parted

I have a penchant for big tools

hi J.. hope life is good with you and yours
Heart Sutra on July 30, 2006

Boo!
horus8 on July 29, 2006

A woman is made of two women; a man is made of a woman and a man.

one is - . - + and the other is - . + -
If a clit is just a miniature penis and ovaries are just a woman's testicles inside their body -- Talking about one sex from the other is rather ridiculous. One is merely the other inside out and created before. women were created before men and have a closer relationship with the demigurgas.
Edited on Jul 30, 1:05 p.m. because ''.
XxGoldenxXDawnxX on July 29, 2006

Wow. .interesting perspective you have on women..!? It is thought provoking but I don't see anyone judging he nature of man on penis and testicles... though maybe thats not a bad idea.
gullionmar on July 25, 2006

I did not mean my compliment as an insult,and I may have misread read your poem,forgive me.As for being illiterate,or not being able to comprehend something.Sorry your wrong,I have finished school graduated,and I am a very smart person.As for disrespecting you,I wasn't asumming anything.Just thought from what I read you were from Hawaii.I'm not only poet who makes mistakes.I was just stating the facts that you are successful and very talented,as for looks they don't matter to me.I look at a person for who they are not what they look like.As for lacking manners sir,i didn't call you an asshat .I am not an a''
tank you and wishes fro continued success
horus8 on July 25, 2006

I guess the ugly should be in utter terror that your observations of the way I look or the way I write has something to actually do with your inabilty to properly understand either. Oh joy, what compliments. However, it's certainly not doing a thing for your illiteracy, or lack of comprehension. I'm not from Hawaii, how you came to that failed observation is indeed the crux of the contempt I have for your entire being, and possibly, generation. Please don't disrespect me by implying I'm just some pretty talented face from Hawaii, because, it's a poem not a biography. You my friend, are lacking manners, hindsight, and clarity. If you wrote a poem about a gay hot dog?
I wouldn't assume you were immediately from Dickville.
gullionmar on July 24, 2006

so much talent for a fine looking young man.congrats on your success in life but please don't call me what you did in your comment ok
Nyx Iscariot on July 20, 2006

only kidding lovey

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