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mushroom king : 3 months early! on January 3

What a toppsy turvey life this is. Always a going to and fro red light green light looking for something, somewhere, someone... Fumes inflate my nostrils as spider legs poke out trying to find a foot hold while my eyes try to digest the complete everything, the profound divinity that expresses itself tangled in tubes and wires and so fucking strong comparatively in this situation. This breath of god as a friend might say is bigger than everything... How are you?
magdelene on March 1, 2008

love your name.
modest mouse/the lonesome crowded west = amazing.
JohnWaynePalsy : im so miserable on October 10, 2007

niggers have yet to feel so bad.
butv we both want ton get away
mushroom king : I miss our little chats on October 9, 2007

damn my ever losing battle with time! Well hello! er taLK TO YA later I guess
JohnWaynePalsy : It was there on September 22, 2007

And almost like a circle
Radiating out in ripples
Headed for certain death on stony shores
Whispered like secrets
from the back of the Loch Ness Monster.
mushroom king : I had a friend once on July 5, 2007

who thought he was a fire engine... Whats good my little corporate whore.
JohnWaynePalsy : Just one of them days, is there any other kind??? on April 29, 2007

i was reading some shit and considering the author i was reading i thought of you and decided to share..

almost dawn
blackbirds on the telephone wire
waiting
as I eat yesterday's
forgotten sandwich
at 6 a.m.
an a quiet Sunday morning.

one shoe in the corner
standing upright
the other laying on it's
side.

yes, some lives were made to be
wasted.
mushroom king : Mourn and remember on April 23, 2007

Mourn and remember the great late Henery David Thoreau...
JohnWaynePalsy : oops on April 1, 2007

i guess i forgot the T in thought. Cubs Opener is tomorrow!!!!!!!! 110pm on WGN. be there or be square. i wish i had some mushrooms.
JohnWaynePalsy : social diseases on April 1, 2007

Yesterday I though I got the Clap.
Turns out my cock just itches.
And my dog wont eat Cheez-Its.
But she eyeballs my Old Style.
Go figure.
mushroom king : Good God (is hard to find) on March 30, 2007

I've missed you!!! How are things? Whats good? Whats bad? I've discoverd the joys of flying a million mph down the unforgiving pavement path on a wodden fucking toy! I suppose longboarding is popular there after all its mock surfing
Sew in Dark Matter on February 7, 2007

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Sew in Dark Matter on February 7, 2007

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Sew in Dark Matter on February 7, 2007

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JohnWaynePalsy on November 12, 2006

i need someone ambidextrous to braid my butt hairs.and someone extremely oral to tug on my heart strings.and a few midgets.and someone drunk to not think twice about any of this nor have any problems with them.
roused on October 19, 2006

thanks
LunaStar13 on September 28, 2006

nona, just a thought, have you heard UGLY CASANOVA? it's the singer for modest mouse and some guys in another band, called TWO GALLANTS. both are fucking amazing....
naked roots on September 25, 2006

Stops by your page and finds that you have wonderful taste in music as well as being a great writer!
I love Modest Mouse too!
purple wings on August 22, 2006

i dont know you but i really want to kiss you right now.if you have a man i am sorry but it had to be said!
mushroom king on July 28, 2006

I bet you have a nice texture....aah....I would like to roll you between my fingers.....and ....ah....place you in my pocket....I will take you out and place you on my finger and we will sample the sunshine dust in the backyard and note the variances in flavor ...mmmmmm
mushroom king on July 17, 2006

Man now my phone is on the fritz but I'm gunna try to go with my "fiance" to gay day in san fran. Shes triing to rekindle her lesbian roots, its sooo cute (yeah I just gagged too) we're triing to find a nice girl for her, or...us };-)
mushroom king on July 12, 2006

Ahhh appreciation, careful one of my best traits is my humbleness dont stroke my ego too much *smile*
mushroom king on July 7, 2006

oh yeah have you read the Sirens of Titen by vonnegut? Best book ever!
mushroom king on July 7, 2006

If the doors of perception were cleansed everything would appear to man as it is, infinite." —William Blake. Whoa, William blake said that huh where did I get Thomas Carlyl? So I'm gunna be in Cali with some friends in a couple of weeks, and I was wondering, not to seem like some creepy dude, but I get the impression that you would be a great partner in the crime of fun! =) so would it be a possibility to cross paths? I have some friends in Cali and I'm coming in with my friends Morgan, Cristina, and Jimi (he's tall with a mohawk, thats just what I tell everybody). What part of Cali do you live in? If you dont mind my asking. I think we will defanitly be going through san fran but we are just taking a random road trip, the world is our oyster and you are the pearl I'm cracking the shell can I have you? Again not to be a creepy dude or anything. But hey lemme know *winks* I'll show you what a lazy drinking apathetic artist from Salt Lake City is, I warn you though, it aint pretty tehe
Sew in Dark Matter on May 29, 2006

all set miss. im gonna go wash my car now FINALLY. call me laters if you want to, i miss ya.
Sunday Rain on May 29, 2006

Thank you for your comments, the poem, everytime it says cut that's what she's doin' and the other word's are sopposed to be her thoughts, but thank you for letting me know what you think,
Blondita on May 28, 2006

Hi,

Just wanted to thank you for the insightful/useful comments you left on my latest effort. They were most helpful.

Sonia :-)
Sew in Dark Matter on May 26, 2006

cloudy and wet
here's to today!
have a good one coco
on May 23, 2006

i just wanted to say thank you very much 4 your comment it was extremely nice of you to read the whole poem im not much on commenting on poetry cos i dont really know what to say sometimes but i will read yours soon, so thanks thanks again..
Sew in Dark Matter on May 12, 2006

what up coco. i started a new account for my lyrics. i don't really have anything special up yet but...just check it out.
slaughter on May 9, 2006

Thanks for adding me to your
favorites. It's much appreciated.

allpoetry.com/poem/1952264

Above is a group I've recently formed together in conjuction with jaunty pill for writers we believe are talented and deserve to be part of a community of other inspiring and creative poets.

We hope you decide to join.

- Kenneth
mitimse on May 4, 2006

I agree that we can live for the now. The complexity of simplicity is our insanity ie "A Word Form God" (my write, of course)And yes, it is best to embrace the moment, not the day
ps; it's "beams" not "beems"
Joe
on May 2, 2006

im thirsting for some anon action! help a dude out.
Night Hope on May 2, 2006

A belated welcome to AP...Thank you for your comment...A Gift, then...Be well, Poet... Wanda

www.duirwaighgallery.com/inspiration_trailer.htm
Glenda L Hand on April 28, 2006

When I read my poetry, it's like looking in a photoalbum or watching a home movie; I see myself in a light shown from yesterday while still standing in today.

WOW this is great. Do you have a poem with it???
Kspoet on April 11, 2006

Thanks a lot for your comments on my pieces. They were not only insightful but inspiring. I will be sure to return the favor
~KS
jaunty pill on April 7, 2006

Hello. Recently I have decided to hold a
contest as an " Invite only ". I have been reading
your poems for quite awhile and thought this
would be a good way of getting to know you better
as a writer. I would very much appreciate an entry.
It will aid in the hope to extend my commenting
on other writers , Such as yourself.

allpoetry.com/contest/1932350

Thanks for your time .
James

P.S. If you would not like your name
included on the contest list , Please IM me
and I'll remove it. I don't want to offend
anyone by this contest or make anyone
uncomfortable.
MissPhoto87 on February 28, 2006

thank you very much. i cant even believe that i wrote it. lol. i usually have better pieces of work when i'm listening to music or somthing. and i was listening to evanescence and it just spilled out of me lol

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