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Yrusonvs on November 13

omg, it seems like nobody is consistent anymore. hope everything is going UP in yo life. Hit me up whenever, you're on my myspace so don't be a stranger.
Blac-sol on July 28

how have you been ms poetess..
cgirl0410 : Hey girl! on January 9

How have you been? I've missed you. Ain't talked to you in a while. Hope all is well.
Ms Raneika : wow on October 18, 2008

Aw your just so wonderful for saying that! Thank-you! I try lol glad that I could be of assistance in inspiring you! I just wrote this poem about Obama... I'm trying to spread the word about my poem... so here it goes here in your g-book! enjoy! love ya!

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Poem: Barack Obama has Already Won!
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More then just a democratic candidate...
He's an inspiring leader...
A confident hero of our time,
If Obama can't proudly draw
non-supporters in,
I can take them on!,
by first having them as my victim of this stanza last rhyme.

Obama's "non-supporters",
have their say about his
inexperience availability,
some even question his integrity and loyalty,
disagree with his running for presidency,

but see...

We, the people of Obama supporters,
know the underlying truth.
If he wasn't fit to help run America,
he wouldn't have been qualified
for the position.
Like a convicted felon job application,
he would have been dismiss,
diss to never be discuss,
So to all that don't believe,
can't look at what he has achieved,
That's your blind eye that fails to see,
with all of McCain extensive history,
He still less qualified for president to me.

Of course McCain is older, wiser,
and his background is impressive,
but I'm half the age of most men,
and a female at that...

Question A.
Does that make me less capable in having a strong-driven ambition about politics?

or

Question B.
Does that make my "judgementer", if you will, not in realization of the inner self, the mind as a whole, the inner spirit that comes through?

For your wonder,
Question B is the right question,
Answer Yes makes it correct.

Obama is an extraordinary individual,
The modern Martin Luther King Jr!
and It haven't felt this good in a long time
to stand for something as great as this
Obama for 2008!
I can hear my fellow supporters
chanting in bliss.

That millions of people can come together,
From different backgrounds meet on a common ground,
with hope in improving the world,
makes Obama a hero!

November 4th
might be do or die for this election,
but to all of Obama movement caregivers...
in our minds, that's fix, he is a born winner,
The care, concern, and courtesy
from this wholeheartedly individual
name Barack has won us over,
So the presidential race for like-minded people as myself is done!

BARACK OBAMA HAS ALREADY WON!
Kooler-Den-Ice : guess whose bizzack??? on June 4, 2008

yo sexie i kno u missed me...i missed u 2...so holla bak i jus wrote a new one gimme ya feedbak
Yrusonvs on May 14, 2008

Hey jus passin thru to let u kno i'm still alive. alittle shaken but never fully stirred. Stay eternally BLACC!!!
secberm : Hey there lil bird... on December 29, 2007

Just wishing you a Happy New Year... God bless sister!
Kooler-Den-Ice on December 3, 2007

loooooooooooong time no talk!! jus stoppin thru readin poems and gettin inspired. holla bak sexi blac
Blac-sol on November 2, 2007

ms blacc..

its been too long since we spoke.. lets not make that a normality..

blac.
zexzgal : hey ma! on October 31, 2007

Damn, I've been mad busy. I have definately been slackin' in the poetry department, I guess nothing really hit me lately, jus been focused on school. You know, tryna get my career together and all, lol. But it is nice to hear from ya and it has been awhile. I'm glad you keep in touch!
K-JiO on October 2, 2007

Hello Sexie Blacc. I just wanted to stop by and show you sum luv I'm going to take my time and go through the poetry ... it's best enjoyed that way. Keep scribbin'

K-JiO
Yrusonvs on September 3, 2007

thanx for the comment, yea it was a personal poem. jus been under a bit of stress lately i don't know i've been real up and down, happy but definitely chemically imbalanced
bowsmami on August 27, 2007

now u know fam always got ya back and they always following u lol. i think wait i know you're a great poet so keep up the excellant work
Blac-sol : blac on July 17, 2007

ms poetess..

i had missed your words..
Ms Raneika : Hey! on July 7, 2007

Thanks for reading my poem well-appreciated!
I was wondering do you have a MySpace Account?

If so could you add me
http://www.myspace.com/raneikavalentino
Kooler-Den-Ice : wooooooooow! im touched!! on June 15, 2007

lol if i was a white person i think dat i would be blushin or somethin! thanx for puttin me on ya page like dat. real talk...i don kno wha to say so thanx again
Yrusonvs on February 7, 2007

hey jus passin thru 2 say wassup, long time no hear for real. if i didn't know any better i would think you packed the old pen and pad. anyway, i was jus leaving everyone that i liked messages cuz it seems like everyone is done writing. anyway, gimme a shout one of these days, if not to say you have new material then jus to say you've been doin ok.
Romanee : Thankyou on November 21, 2006

I just want to say thankyou for all the wonderful comments that you leave, I havn't been on for ages and it was lovely to hear from you, of and famous poet, I wish! LOL
UNDErNEATHthaSTARSz on November 15, 2006

))It's wateva chula!! Stay focused and do wat u gotta do to get ahead!! That's wut lYf is all about!!

Rememba tha wise words of Wu-Tang:

"CASH RULES EVERYTHING AROUND ME. C.R.E.A.M. GET THA MoNEY. DOLLA DOLLA BILLS YA'LL!!"

LOLz!!

NEWAYS, TAKE YA TIME MAMA. ii'MMA BE HERE 4 MyNUTE =]((

**MUCHoS BESoS!!**

[x]->.JESENiA.<-[X]
Edited on Nov 15, 9:24 p.m. because ''.
zexzgal on November 14, 2006

hey mami...long time no see. jus wanted to get at cha n see wutz up wit cha. hope to hear from ya soon.

~Lia
Edited on Nov 14, 1:14 because ''.
Mentally Speaking on November 12, 2006

Mentally Speaking... nvm, look you know who this is Rayvon. My name isn't a secret anymore. Or you can call me sexy and talented. All the same. Get at me. Send me a message.
secberm on October 31, 2006

Hi cutie. Showing love. DEZ
UNDErNEATHthaSTARSz on October 27, 2006

Hey mami!! I've been gon for a minute...but now i'm baq with tha jump off....sike!! i'm playin!! but really though, I missed your poetry and kind words while i was gone!!

It seemed like forever since i read anything from you and once i did, it was like a breath of fresh air!!

Anyways, just droppin through to show your page and your poetry some love!!!!

*___JESENiA___*
secberm on October 6, 2006

Just showing love. One.

DEZ
Blac-sol on September 29, 2006

i was jus reading our letters back and forth.. damn.. those four pieces are pure class..

anyway, bless up..

Blac
Blac-sol on September 25, 2006

no doubt..i'll lace one jus for you chica.. real soon.

blac
zexzgal on September 24, 2006

Hey girl, I just wanted to let you know that you didn't win my contest because your my girl...you truly did have the best poem. Everyone's poem was so morbid and depressing and all were along the cliche lines, but I found something unique in yours and I thought it deserved a gold trophy. You got a gift girl, keep writing.

~Lia
zexzgal on September 23, 2006

I created a new contest. Feel free to enter! I want to see you writing again!

allpoetry.com/Contest/2246445
zexzgal on September 21, 2006

Yo chik, wutz good wit cha?? Girl, u ain't tha only one who's got a lot on thier plate. School jus started for me too and that college shit ain't no joke. But it's nice to hear from ya none the less, n I'ma do my best to keep in touch too. So, keep ya head up girl!

~Lia
Yrusonvs on September 19, 2006

Hey, sorry I've been ghost, I appreciate all the comments you've left me. But I gotta agree with the above, WHY AIN'T U WRITIN?! WHAT'S THA DAMN DEAL?! LOL, it's like you fell off and all you wanna do is chill while everybody else is making moves. I expect a lot more from you, LOL... But for real, it would be nice to read something with a feel that is reminiscent of fresh ink spilled by someone wise and witty with her words. Real talk though, I hope you saying something amazing because I know you've got so much more to say. Anyway, I wanted to pass thru, let you kno' I'm not dead, but until next time, stay UP, later on...
Mentally Speaking on September 18, 2006

check this, ive been gone for a long ass minute i kno............ butttttttttttttttttt why have u not written a poem n like years????????? whats really good wit chu ma.. thats odd, but it said u logged in a couple hrs ago, well 19.. so i hope that mean u check in daily.. u shud holla at me lata.. u kno how to get at me otha than this site.. use tha sources!!!! aiight 1..lol
CrazyBeauty on August 31, 2006

thanks for the wonderful comments .....thanks so much.....im glad you liked it.....
UNDErNEATHthaSTARSz on August 14, 2006

hey mamita ,itz wateva!! i really enjoy ur writin anywayz!! itz madd intersting!! i appreciate the love that you show my poetry more thatn you can imagine. your insight is so deep. i kno that i only comment your works sparingly but i'm always busy lately....but ur poemz r wats poppin and its like i'm missing out when i dont read them!!

♥Jesenia
Jeezus niece on August 9, 2006

thank you for all the love you show me on my writes! I will be catching up on yours very soon. I'm finishing a book that takes most of my time.I definately want you to peep it when it drops.Thanks again and keep scribing!
TripleR on August 4, 2006

Thank you for your comment That write took alot from me
Blac-sol on August 4, 2006

Jus passin thru to show ma gurl sum luv n noticed the comment you gave me, yu made a dude blush lol.. thanx 4 that miss Sexie.

blac..
Emosie Vloei on August 3, 2006

Just passing thru checking out new poets.I will be back to dig deep into your soul.peace for now
zexzgal on August 2, 2006

Hey girl, trust me, u aint tha only one whose been busy, lol! School, work, and even friends will drain ya. I've been slackin too But anyway, I'm jus droppin thru to say wut up. i'm goin away for a week so hopefully I'll talk to ya later. Take care!

~Lia
Mentally Speaking on July 29, 2006

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm what's good ma, i jus woke up so I don't know how this comment gon sound. Makin sure you ok, see you still postin poetry so it look like you still holdin up fine.. I know i was gone for minute, lemmie jump right back in. My poetry thing been alittle off i guess, or not really i jus been lazy. I don't know. sumthing. But holla at me when you get tha chance. I'm still tryna advance..
Yours Truly
NubianQueen05 on July 24, 2006

thanks for your comment and i never got one from a person i didn't knoe either but yeah that would be nice also lol

*Monique*
Edited on Jul 24, 9:32 p.m. because ''.
honeybrown on July 19, 2006

I just want to say thank you for the true feed back you gave me... and also that i love that poem you on this page! its amazing and it shows that you have true skill and unmeasurable talent. i hope to read more of your work
luv always
~Jenae
Yrusonvs on July 12, 2006

Ay, jus passing thru 2 wish U a sincere HAPPY BELATED 21st BIRTHDAY!!! Hopefully, you had a good time, maybe a drank to an oblivion (I don't kno' what you're into so maybe not LOL)! Jus' hoping it was fun because after this b-day there is not much to celebrate but growing old. LOL!!!!!!

Your poetic soul sis,
Dana AKA Tha ATLHustlaGIrl
UNDErNEATHthaSTARSz on July 10, 2006

AWWW!! I INSPyR3 U?? THAT'Z P0SSyBLY TH3 NIC3ST THyNG THAT ANY1 HAZ 3V3R SAyD 2 M3!!

THNXz MAMi!! U'V3 JUST MAD3 MY 3V3NYNG!!

¤J3S3NIA¤
Jeezus niece on July 3, 2006

I love your writes and thank you for all the love you have shown me!!! you are a very intelligent lady and i love your work all your work as well. holla atcha lata!
NubianQueen05 on June 26, 2006

thanks for the comment
on June 26, 2006

Just got on here and I wanted to drop you a line. I'm still working on getting my work on here but I will do it soon. Love ya!
TripleR on June 24, 2006

Thank you very much for the comment, encouragement is always really... nice, and getting it from someone other than people I know is really really great.
geminiblacc on June 22, 2006

Thank you so much for saying that, you and ATLHustlaGIrl, ya'll are like my strength on here. Plus I notice talent when I see it and you have just that....talent. Thankyou so much for the rose and the hug I really appreciate it. I'll be sure to return the luv soon...I promise.
Edited on Jun 22, 11:03 p.m. because 'left out the word and'.
zexzgal on June 22, 2006

Hey gurl, just droppin by to check out ur profile. I love the poem in the beginning of the page, that was hott gurl! Thank u so much for ur comment on my new poem, ur always sayin such nice things, it keeps my head up, lol. So here's to u a rose for turning 21 and a hug Best wishes girl, hope to hear from ya soon.

~Lia
Yrusonvs on June 21, 2006

I jus' wanted to drop a line and send you a very belated Happy B-day!!!! I jus' wanted to let you kno' your constant encouragement has meant a lot more than you know. It's great when people can see past what you convey in your opinions and read the content for what it is. I appreciate the love and the free promotion LOL, it's nice to know that there are people out there that feel what I'm saying. I hope you get the same from people who read your poetry as well. I know that you and I don't exactly relate on everything considering the slight age difference but at the end of the day, we're both young, black, female and vocal. It's that reason alone that in my eyes we're really one in the same... Thanx, Dana

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