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scribbleheart on August 14OMG you did it again. You picked the only bmth I actually like. and thank you so much for the amazing comments you leave on my poetry. makes me feel better when other douches comment just to tell me its shit.
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scribbleheart on July 22'llo! was reading some of your poetry. your really good. maybe we could chat sometime.
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lauracorry : hey waz up on June 12im new trying to make friends
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chained-death on June 3faggot..
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chained-death on May 27Nvm.. Scorn.
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chained-death : shadow charm on May 26Who is valor-girl name again? I need to add it on my page, and it would be cool if you did chapter one, Or let me update it for you?
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chained-death on May 26Dude.. You said xxVampira(n)xx.. Wth..
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valor 715 : slayers right XD on May 26yeah dude fuck that ur the best poet out of all of us so get on ur shit
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chained-death on May 19Dumb shit.. Fix your rock pinkey.. Use another underscore..
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chained-death on May 18Dude you need to start making your VKA song's man.. Lol
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Cannot.Be.Forsaken on May 14your awesome

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chained-death on May 14Oh crap nice update.
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Emoforever on May 12Oh my god i am like so into system of a down i love them.
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chained-death on May 11Mofo lol, i got that soad thingy from youtube.
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chained-death on May 9Damn you read it? I thought no one would ever read it and I'll tell you at school. Haha

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chained-death on May 9Man that sucks, i can't view "see I'm dumb as fuck."
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Sky Prince Ireland : Hello Lawrence on May 7hey Lawrence. Just wanted to stop by and offer you a hug.
I hope you're well and keeping up with your writing. Best wishes in all you do, my friend.
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chained-death on May 4dude u suck, why you loged out?
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chained-death on April 29dude you should enter a contest man, shit.. you should lol.
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Aurielle on April 26wow I read your poetry on your page I thought the site took me to your poems and whilereading it I was like "woah" long. Now I know it was your author page. I do love that poem It was emotional. The feeling was miraculous. The one thing is a hyming poem has to have the same rhyming scheme meaning repition AABB yours seemed liek AABBBAAABBAAABBAAAABBB it was a little messy their. That's the excellence of rhyming when writing to be consistent. I will read your work though.
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Aurielle on April 6hey thanks for comenting on my poem called "Wind upon"
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Short but cute on January 21aww thanks
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Short but cute on January 20I'd say all of them sweetie. I can never choose a favorite. I'm so envious.
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Short but cute on January 20Your poetry is always fantastic
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Midnight Ghost : I like the opening poem on December 23, 2008well... the title is kind of a dead giveaway.
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Andiness on December 19, 2008Merry Christmas
I love the poem n the top!! Did you write it?? You also have an awesome user name!
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life-endz : dude on December 16, 2008lol teacher. that was to plain, just act like u act around me, say i suck, say im fat, say im lame, say im a sht stick, say what the freaking ever u want lol.
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Trapped Under Glass : Thanks on December 9, 2008Thanks for stopping by my page. You comment is greatly appreciated.
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XXWolfOfInsanityxX on December 8, 2008Thanks so much for your comment =]
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Sin with a grin on November 28, 2008I love ur page
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DyingOmega on November 25, 2008your poetry is great ill comment more later on the stuff i havent read
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For You. I Cry. on October 21, 2008hi. just wanted to thank you for your comment.
and your poetry facinates me.
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Sky Prince Ireland on October 6, 2008I'm sorry if things aren't so well for you right now Lawrence. But do your best to listen to your heart because that's the root of all optimism. You're a great guy with a great heart who writes some great poems. Never forget that. Know that you've got people who love you and you've got yourself. Take care buddy.


Your pal Brian -
Short but cute on October 6, 2008O I see
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Short but cute on October 3, 2008I'm so sorry!!!
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Short but cute on October 1, 2008Everythings fine. I'm actually happier right now. Everythings been great and yet weird.
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Short but cute on September 26, 2008yeah drama is overflowing and I want to just shut everyting out.
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Short but cute on September 24, 2008I'm fine going through alot of bullshit.
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Short but cute on September 22, 2008I havent talked to you for awhile so whats up?
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Sky Prince Ireland on July 2, 2008





Some big hugs for you Lawrence. It's been a long time since I did so. Hope you're well; take care, buddy.
Brian -
Short but cute on May 20, 2008Hey whats up?
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Sky Prince Ireland : Hello Lawrence! on March 15, 2008Hello Lawrence. I know you're not on right now but I thought I'd drop by to give you a hug
and hope you have a nice St. Patrick's Day. Take care, buddy. Be the best you can be.
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Sky Prince Ireland : Lawrence, you poems rock! on February 25, 2008Lawrence I'm gonna be totally honest with you. You know how to release your feelings through your poems and it shows. You should be proud of yourself for that; counting your blessings. It's never easy for people to say what they feel but writing is a healthy way of doing it. Heck, I've been here for three years and the things I say in my poems, good and bad, are things I have the most difficulty saying to somebody face to face. Don't be concious of rhyming or flow and don't dwell on other people's opinions. It's great to have support but don't think other people have the final say in whether or not your poems are good because they're yours. No matter what ignorance or negativity some people may throw at you from time to time, push it all aside and be proud of what you can put in to your writing. Above all else, be proud of the fact that, like everybody else, you're someone who's special in your own way and the decency in your heart is what causes your writing to come out in the way it does. Your writing is special in ITS own way too. Best wishes with your poetry and remember . . . be the best you can be.
Brian
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