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BermudaHighway on August 1, 2008

"Life in Reverse" is amazing. I'm not sure I understand what you mean by "Life's gate would need great girth." Maybe you could explain that line to me?

"Linger lastly
at our birth,

endure death's
degredation first."

Damn that's good.

Lot's of clever poetic devices used here but I'm sure you know what they are. A lot of poets have a hard time finding a midpoint where meaning and aesthetic can intersect, but this piece is perfectly balanced. You said something I'm interesting in knowing and you did it in a way that kept me rapt and left me impressed. You should try to re-post this one so more people will be likely to comment because it's just great.
drumdog79 on January 23, 2008

This computer sux and the internet won't let me submit a new poem so I'm putting it here.

Life in Reverse

I wish we could live
life in reverse;

make up for the fact
that we cannot rehearse.

Linger lastly
at our birth,

endure death's
degredation first.

Old age would not be
a curse,

though we would forget
how to converse.

Life's gate
would need great girth,

and surely the poet
would alter his verse.

But still I have
an unquenchable thirst

to begin life
in the back of a hearse;

kick open the doors
and out I'd burst

unwind my life line
in reverse.
lost-in-yesterday on August 23, 2006

thanks for your comments
drumdog79 on August 16, 2006

thanks for the reply, I realized you weren't my friend when I went to your myspace link. But hey, maybe we'll end up friends anyway.
xXblackenedXroseXx on August 15, 2006

No quite unfortunately I do live in NC, and I'm not the person your looking for. I'm sorry. Good luck in finding them though
BloodRoses on July 17, 2006

Just showing sum love!
again, love in that bloody bucket
BR
BloodRoses on June 26, 2006

Hey you! Get your ass on here or check your email and hit me back!
Love in that same old bloody bucket
BR
BloodRoses on April 26, 2006

Oh you bet! I will totally stop by!
and why dont you email me sometime?
love in a bloody bucket
BR
BloodRoses on March 10, 2006

HEY! WHERE YA BEEN?
HIT ME BACK!
love in a bloody bucket
BR
drumdog79 on February 14, 2006

I left you a comment on yer revised "Hot Days" poem. Hope yer doin good, bye for now,
~J
Jag on January 23, 2006

Hey babes....
well i have finally finished one of my ..posted..unfinished poems....hot days..will you check her out and let me know what you think....
i dont know...im not feeling it..but im feelin it...i think part of it has a flow..the other half...written later...has another flow...but ....it may work...a bit...lol
i hate unfinished writes...ugh..
loves
JAG
BloodRoses on January 17, 2006

im here, i swear, and i know! i have been too busy to write much! damn life! lol
ill get some up soon
love in a bloody bucket
Blood
drumdog79 on December 29, 2005

POsted the newer one of the two new ones, older one comming soon.
~J
BloodRoses on December 26, 2005

yeah get on your job and post me some stuff here! LOL, and xmas was ok, not enough alcohol involved! hahaha i spent it up in the mountains! yay!
mwah
-Blood
drumdog79 on December 26, 2005

Hey, I know I haven't posted the new one yet, but now I have two new ones and hopefully I'll get to post them soon. How was yer x-mas and all that shit? Mine was alright. Got very drunk.
Jag on December 15, 2005

thank you thank you
for the...poet thing =)
Merry Christmas darlin
hope you enjoy the new year....with your family....
Best Wishes
Jag
BloodRoses on December 9, 2005

bout fucking time!
drumdog79 on December 9, 2005

I finally wrote a new fucking piece, it'll be up some time next week.
BloodRoses on December 7, 2005

hey good to know youre alive! im too busy for the world too! miss ya too! take care! bye!
~blood
drumdog79 on December 7, 2005

Sorry I took so long to get back to ya, I've been in Michagin and busy as shit, bla,bla,bla. Anyway, to search for poets, at the top of the page is a tab that says "poetry", put the cursor on it and a list will come up; one of the options says "find author", that's the one you want. Later,
J
Jag on October 17, 2005

Hello there sunshine of my rain
lol
whats up
hmmm
i have a question for you..
perhaps you can give me an answer...
how do i search for an ap poet that use to write here a couple a years ago??
i cant figure it out but im sure you can do it?
oh yeah...i revised one of my old poems to enter it in to a contest come check it out
kisses
jag
Jag on October 14, 2005

Well you know....same ol computer shit....
lol
what have you been up to?
not much here.....
some more taining for hire paying job...more responsibility.. you know...the usual shit life brings us....lol
other than that....
meh..
loves
JAG
Jag on October 12, 2005

Hello there stranger

Jag
BloodRoses on September 23, 2005

Dogg, what the fuck is going on!?! lol miss ya! im okay i guess, things are alittle "turbulent" but im okay
take care of yourself babe!
BR
drumdog79 on September 23, 2005

BR,
what the hell is up? How are you. I ask these things, then I won't be able to get on line for at least a week. My office will be closed down all next week so I'll be S.O.L. But I hope all is well. Take care,
J
BloodRoses on June 28, 2005

hey drum yeah im good im at a college thing for 3 weeks so ill talk to you as soon as i can take care
love in ah bloody buckey
me
BloodRoses on June 3, 2005

hey you good to hear from you sorry to hear your stretched so thin make sure your takin care of yourself...you can run dry really quick. thanks for your support in Rape Chronicle..its amazing the outcome ive gotten in like 3 or 4 days huh? and thanks for letting me put your comment up on Fists..you rock
take care
love in ah bloody bucket
_Blood_
BloodRoses on May 13, 2005

hey dogg
babes you so need to be gettin on here
im so dead these days
ttyl
love in that same ole, bloody bucket'
Blood
BloodRoses on May 4, 2005

hey garg-e-o-u-s
anyway yeah you n i so need to be collabing.
my juices ain flowing and your one helluva muse
whaddya say?
hehehe
LOve iN a BlOoDY bUcKEt
_Blood
BloodRoses on April 15, 2005

somehow someway someone got into my AP name and changed my shit around and changed my password to 'shiela'
i had to get it sent to me...im FUCKING PISSED
but i wanted to tell you that if you recieved anything that didnt sound like me, than it very well may not have been

love in ah bloody bucket
Bloody
BloodRoses on April 12, 2005

hey thanks for reading
i know your busy hehe
ttyl
love in ah bloody bucket
Bloody
BloodRoses on April 7, 2005

oh hey i need your opinion on grey rock n roll, its not long
and its right up our alley
when/if u get time
ttyl
love in a bloody bucket
BR
BloodRoses on April 7, 2005

hey you, im sorry that ur life has been so crazy, so has mine. i feel ya babes. anyway sorry about the jesus freak and i, but he eventually gave up and quit trying to defend his 'superior way of reasoning' lol...anyway i had to go back n read shit i hadnt read and i fuckin loved it. i like my old shit seldomly i like the new stuffs...anyway hope your doing okay
Love In That Same Ole Bloody Ass Bucket
_BrinneyBlood_
BloodRoses on March 23, 2005

hey gotta new one, you so gotta come by and tell what you think of it-right up yur alley lol
TTYL
Love in ah bloody bucket
_BrinneyBlood_
BloodRoses on March 19, 2005

oh hell i went to audition for GSA today
eh
it was nerve raking, shakin like a fiend...hehe
anyway ttyl you need to be pumpin out something new...need some
muse
Love In Ah Bloody Bucket
_BrinneyBlood_
Mickie27 on March 15, 2005

LOL to clean up my damn dirty house. LOL. Thanks for your comment on my poem.
drumdog79 on March 8, 2005

That's cool Morrowind, I'm not into magic or all those card & RPG games, but I'm an absolute video game freak. I like to think I'm pretty mature, but VGs are something I just can't see myself leaving behind. I work my ass off and support my family, breaking my back in the real world all day, and I like to come home and remove myself from it for a little while. The cool thing about Morrowind is who indepth it is. You can do so much freakin crap it's insane. The world the developers created is absolutely HUGE spilling over with tons and tons of characters, weapons, spells, locations and objectives. On top of it all, the graphics are top notch and the game play is incredibly addictive. Anyways, thanks for letting me remble here, TTYL,
~J
Morrowind on March 2, 2005

Hey, drumdog
Yes, my Son would agree, he's the one that's into the game Morrowind.
I liked the name and thought it would make a nice nic on AP ..
My Son and his friends also play Magic the Gathering and Dungeons and Dragons.
Edited on Mar 02, 2:35 p.m. because 'oops.. forgot a 's'.
drumdog79 on March 2, 2005

Hey B, my first time on in a while it seems, busy as hell and going through hell. Had all 4 wisdom teeth pulled then got sick as shit a week later and still feelin it. I miss being on so much too but this hectic game of life is gettin the best of me right now. I'm, doin myt best to keep my head above water. I hopw you're doin great. Hopefully I'll get caught up with everything and be on line more offten in the near future, take care, much love,
da dog.
BloodRoses on February 27, 2005

hey i just wanted to stop by and say hello
miss talkin to you so much
love in a bloody bucket
_brinneyblood_
BloodRoses on February 7, 2005

hey you dirty dog
i thought id come back while i had the opps to and send you another nice lil message
i hope all is well in your lil world
talk to you soon
Love much in a bloody bucket
_brinney blood_
BloodRoses on February 6, 2005

hey u durty dog,
remember me?
ya know, barely ever hear from you anymore,
how have ya been holding up?
i guess evrythings good here
slow moving, just kinna rolling about ya know?
im sure you do
shit just gets better and better huh?
love in ah bloody bucket babes,
_BrinneyBlood_
BloodRoses on December 22, 2004

hey buddy
im sorry
but i feel ya
i hate this time of year
oh and theres bout 2 inches of ice on all the roads round me so im stuck here in hell without my man,
shit cant get better can it?
anyway
talk at ya l8er
love in ah bloody ole bucket full of christmas cheer
*sarchasm*
_BrinneyBlood_
drumdog79 on December 20, 2004

ugh...
sick...
hatin shit....
BloodRoses on December 11, 2004

hey Dog,
im sorry your having such a shitty time
what the fuck's up with the mods? i mean damn, if we dont have free creative and artistic reign then why bother? i hate that
and i feel you on the xmas thing i always hate the holidays...eh i hate the way it feels to think of em anyway...i am sorry, i hope your gonna get better...talk to you later take care of yourself
~BrinneyBlood
BloodRoses on December 4, 2004

hey where the hell are you lol
anyway ive been out for a while hope all is well
ttys hopefully
love in ah bloody bucket
BloodRoses on November 7, 2004

hey shits cool just been busy as shit...you?
hope all is well with you
the cycle is a Honda shadow VLX
2005 pimpin huh?
anyway hope all is well...
ttyl
*Brittany
drumdog79 on October 25, 2004

sorry, I haven't read it yet, but soon, I promise!
-theheartofme- on October 24, 2004

didja read it yet..huh huh did ya did ya did ya?
-theheartofme- on October 21, 2004

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