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Flowering Star on August 14, 2007Hi, Maurveen. How's it going? Just dropped by to say hi.
Wow-I'm speechless by your author info. It's so poetic and wonderful. Your poems amaze me. They're great! Who cares if it's not Shakespeare? Your poems are really breathtakingly beautiful. -
October. on June 27, 2007I have to skip out on Thursday, but what are you doing Saturday, after 6?
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October. on June 27, 2007I have to skip out on Thursday, but what are you doing Saturday after 6?
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Shadow of a Crow on December 14, 2006Thought I'd drop by your page since all I ever do is click the 'new poetry' links. Actully, I've been meaning to do more of that. My, my you age so fast..up to the 200s now. You are truly a wiser soul than me. How did you get that "Poems I am Focused On" thinger on your page? Anyway, I'll try to drop some more comments, hopefully before I start back to classes again!
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disparate on November 11, 2006I never got it, and when I was reading through the poems again today for final judging, I saw it and it was most appreciated.
Thank you heaps!
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Cherokee on November 11, 2006Wow! You're too generous!
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cherche -d -ame on November 10, 2006I replied to your comment on my poem, but I am not sure if it came dirctly to you. If not, just go back to the poem and the reply should be right under your comment Thx again
reenie
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October. on October 30, 2006Hey, you're miss green eyes again!
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October. on October 12, 2006Hey, are you and I still going shopping on Whyte this Saturday? If so, LET ME KNOW. Where and when am I picking you up? Is it okay with you to take the bus? You have to help me pick out the rest of my costume - And we should still check out a couple bars while we're there.
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October. on October 6, 2006So, what are you going to do about the Starlite, then?
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October. on August 22, 2006Brandon. The poem was about Brandon.
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October. on August 3, 2006Love the new username.
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October. on June 27, 2006lol. I like "RedNeck Poet"'s comment.
When are we getting together? It's your call. I'm home at 6 on weekdays, and I usually have Sunday free on the weekend. You still have my number, right? Give me a call sometime and we'll figure something out. -
fusaoufh on March 4, 2006thank you for correcting me. i corrected my get away poem ASAP and didn't realize that i made those typos. thank you for pointing it out.
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Rele anmwe on March 4, 2006I can't thank you enough for the great comment, and most of all, I admire your sincerity. The mistakes shall be corrected
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RedNeck Poet on January 21, 2006Dude you are deep. This is very creative, and i am scared but I LOVED IT!!
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Shadow of a Crow on January 1, 2006Hope you will join my new contest!
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Shadow of a Crow on December 29, 2005Just dropped by to tell you that you're great!!! !
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October. on December 7, 2005Alright. Time for my replies... Muahaha...
Just for the record - For some creepy reason, I absolutely love getting feedback on any poems I've written, whether it's praise or criticism. SO, feel free to bombard me with comments, any time.
I didn't know you enjoyed my writing so much. I know how arrogant that sounds, but for almost every comment, you told me how "amazing" my work is, or how great I am with words. No sarcasm here, but thank you. Thank you so, so much. In the past, my writing may have been - alright. Not pro, of course, but not horrible. But through the years, I believe my writing has gone downhill. It's not as good, or as "pretty", or whatever. *sigh* I hate that.
Alright, now, I'm not looking for pity or anything, just explaining the obvious. I've always been sad, and bitter, and angry, and self-loathing, and my esteem sucks, etc. etc. And being all that has, and always will, affect my writing.
Yes, my mother smokes, but that poem wasn't for her. When I can, I'll go through and make a list of everyone my poems have been written to/about, and then I'll let you know. Yeah... You know who a lot of them are about...
She treated me like that because I let her. I hate that I let her, but now I don't, and I'm glad. It's a relief.
"You know, if you ever do write a book, you could incorporate a lot of your poetry into it. As songs and tales and lore, whatever you want." I was thinking that, and I'm really glad you pointed it out, but... I don't know if it would work.
I've actually been thinking about the "book" subject. For poetry. But not just for me. I would ask a few friends - namely you and Bee and Russ - to contribute, but, yeah... I think it's a good plan. "Teen Angst Free-Verse".
My outlook on life is pathetic, and yet... I'm changing. Even now, I'm changing.
"I remember the day, when we were outside, talking about it, you said you were only comfortable wearing t-shirts, or having rolled up sleeves around your closest of friends. Then you pulled your sleeves down. I think I'll remember that for as long as I live." -- I remember that. And I can't tell you why I did that, but I promise you now, it's not because I didn't/don't trust you. You're still one of my closest friends, whether you like it or not, and I knew you had scars too, but... I don't know why I did that. I'm sorry if it hurt you, but believe me when I say it, I would show you my scars any day.
I agree, absolutely, with the comment about the Earth that you left. We're killing her, and because of that, we're killing ourselves.
Every comment you sent me made an impact.
I just want you to know - Everything you said about me, about my writing, implies to you as well, perhaps tenfold. And I'm not just saying that.
Thank you. So, so much.
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Shadow of a Crow on December 2, 2005Awww!! awesome job! I love it. Also cool name change. !!
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Shadow of a Crow on November 24, 2005Just decided to drop a note in your guestbook. You have amazing talent! Keep writing! PS...I think you should post a little biography about yourself so ppl can know a bit about you as they read your poems like crazy! Tis only a suggestion tho..they'll still read your poems like crazy anyway. I shall return to read more poems soon!!!
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October. on February 11, 2005I found you, I found you!!! Scared yet? Cuz I loooove you!
I plan on checking out your work ASAP.
Midgets forever.
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