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Heisthe light on March 31, 2008I just thought I'd finally comment you on here & tell you that some of your poems are really good.
I can't decide which one I like the best, though. The one you wrote about me and you is really beautiful. I also like the one dedicated to Victoria. Even though it's not a poem, I like when you just wrote your thoughts. It showed a deeper side to you. Write more, soon.
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xXblackenedXroseXx on February 20, 2007I love you<3
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xXblackenedXroseXx on September 1, 2006You don't go on here anymore
but I'm still leaving you a comment.
Isn't it amazing what changes?
How we grow and become different people?
But at the same time there's so much that doesn't change.
Like me and you..
two years ago I was commenting on your poems
two years ago we were like best friends
and now here we are..
and though our lives have changed so much
I love you to death still!!!!
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sxylilpunk on September 11, 2004hi miachael it is i the all mighty amanda uh im bored and my mom says i only hav 10 more mins on the comp. so this may b short, i went 2 monroe mall 2 day and met these 3 hot guys and we were talking and hanging out 4 like an hr. then my mom saw us and just happend to mention to them that i had a boyfriend. so much for those phone numbers. i am totally impresses w/ ur poems who would have thought a hated and discriminated negro could write stuff that deep. check out some of mine. u so hav got 2 tell me more about why u were suspended from herr. i find that very comical ooh thats a big word com-ic-al 3 syylables k well i'll ttul c y monday email me sxylilpunk14@yahoo.com
Laider
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maybe slightly here on June 28, 2004well i guess the mottos better now... at least it doesn't depress me to read it!
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Yesterdays Feelings on June 27, 2004love rob zombie..................love that line................
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maybe slightly here on June 24, 2004, and my motto is my life is pointless and yousless.
NO IT IS NOT!!!! IT IS NOT IT IS NOT IT IS NOT!!!! I WILL YELL AND SCREAM UNTILL YOU GET IT IN YOUR HEAD THAT YOU"RE NOT POINTLESS AND USELESS!! YOU'RE AMAZING AND YOU NEED TO LEARN TO SEE IT IN YOURSELF!!! YOU ARE NOT POINTLESS AND USELESS!!! YOU ARE NOT, YOU MAY THINK YOU ARE... BUT YOU'RE NOT!! YOUR SUCH AN INCREDIBLE PERSON WHEN YOU'RE NOT BEING HATEFULL AND SAD AND SCARED AND YOU NEED TO LEARN THAT YOU WERE PUT ON EARTH FOR A REASON!! sorry for "yelling" but you need to learn that you are here and instead of calling yourself pointless and useless you need to learn to love yourself for everything you are. because the world is entirely made up of ppl who are only who they are... some of them except it and become happy and some don't. you have to except yourself and your limitations and step into the unknown of LIFE to find what the point is. "when we come to the end of everything we know and have to step off into darkness we will either find something solid to stand on or be taught to fly." well you need to fully step into life with all you are and learn to fly. you are not pointless and useless. -
maybe slightly here on June 23, 2004yay you changed your motto!! yay yay yay! i'm so happy for you!!!
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xXblackenedXroseXx on June 20, 2004awww u deleted the poem about rose. ::sniff sniff:: so sad. you didnt have to delete it. you could've just changed the name rose to something else. you could've changed it to lou and made it about ur dog or changed it to yaa and made it about ur sister. hehe j/k. that would be kinda scary if you wrote a love poem to yaa. later
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maybe slightly here on June 19, 2004o yes she is definately your friend. u got suspended from the site? hahaha
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xXblackenedXroseXx on June 19, 2004Hey buddy. Wow this is like the 3rd time i wrote here. hehe I'm talking to you on the phone and writing u a message! cool huh? well lalala wut to talk about......wuts new? i can't believe you got suspended off this site. ur such a retard yet its pretty funny. but that movie troy is really good....Brad Pitt is in it!
he is so hot and so is jacob and rob and hot guy from carowinds. You kno that movie The Rundown? my sister rented it and I'm gonna watch it tonight. And i bought my dad League Of Extrordinary Gentleman for Fathers day. That movie rox! I'm sry again that i left you t carowinds. You were at the water park and michael marx is hot so i just kinda...vanished. hehe well we need to go to carowinds again someday.so did that hot guy from the mall ever call you again? hehe we really are like will and grace. I'm so happy i got my 2nd ear hole. I can't wait til HS! New ppl, Hot guys, no mrs blevins...you cant get much better. lol. i wish the guy i was hangin out with is goin to a different school. wow i was so hyper last night/this morning that i stayed up til 7 AM rearranging my room. It looks totally different now although u've never seen it before. But now its almost clean, compared to how it was in the pictures i showed you. i'm tired i havent slept much today cuz i had to go out with my dad then with my sister. lalala i bought this cd Children of Bodom's Hate crew Deathroll and i havent listened to the whole thing yet but so far it rox. Everytime i get to the 3rd song i fall asleep or my mom comes in and i have to shut it off. I'll ask my mom if i can go with you on friday though.well i'm gonna go. later
SAVE THE FROGS!!! -
maybe slightly here on June 19, 2004hey what about that black roses girl? how could she NOT be a friend of yours?
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SecretWispers on June 17, 2004Thank you for adding to my addline, you can add more than two lines if you want, I don't know why they say two maximum. *shrug*. I edited the spelling a bit but I didn't change anything, again, thanks
VwwV
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deathboy
fuck your mom u bastard
Can you please say how this is a response or a critique of a poem, users like you who have no brains also get AP a truly bad name and mar the reputation of the forum over all.
My mother died many years ago, this is offensive damaging and deliberately insulting, and is "NOT" a critique or a comment at all, You should be banned and reported to your ISP too.
Please remove this vulgar offensive reply immediately, I have already reported this to the correct moderators too. Thank you -
DeAtH bY sUiCiDe on June 5, 2004why did you call me a little bitch?
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NeNi on June 4, 2004um....
hi...
you asked me am I black or white.....
....well I have a question for you.....
.....what do you think?
~*Whitney*~
AkA
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deathboy on May 30, 2004hi whats up y are u sleeping im not verry good at typing for a long time but ill try. i love ur im bord song.lol. im at this ok barbiQu my sisters all left to go swimming but mt mom would not let me go. it is kind of strang i dont thank any one hear likes me and thair out of mounten dew but its all going to be ok or that is what my mom says lol i hope ur having as much fun as i am having.byebye
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xXblackenedXroseXx on May 27, 2004HEHE guess wut!I am signing ur authors page...again!!! WOOHOO! wow i am hyper! anywayz...::sniff sniff:: i was gonna spend sometime with u n stefan today but when i came to ur house...u were gone!!! so sad!well i think I'm gonna go cry now.hehe j/k. I AM SO HYPER!!! I'm gonna make this comment really long, k? well i dont care what u think cuz i'm gonna do it anyway! MWAHAHAHA! well anywayz...ur poems r awesome n u should post more.THEN we have to use them as songs for our beautifully untalented band! WOOHOO again!!! guess wut again! I went swimming in jessi's pool today n now the chlorine dried my hair up n i should go take a shower to wash it out but i'm too interested in boring u to death with this authors page. HEHEHE!lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalallalala <- my I AM BORED song. Isn't it great. i think i should win a grammy! HAHAHA HEHEHE!u should decorate ur authors page more. like mine describes my horrible self n names the bands i like n has song lyrics n stuff and urs has nothing. Make it prettyful! lalala! N u should start commenting on other ppls poetry so u earn points. COMMENT ON MY SUCKY POETRY DAMNIT! ok well i'm finally gonna go now....or mayb not. i cant decide. hm....i think i will. byebye
save the frogs!!!
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Barbara on May 25, 2004Hi there deathboy!
I would like to welcome you to Allpoetry. This is a wonderful place to share your writing with others, and to enjoy the variety of works posted here by those who share in your love of poetic expression. Allpoetry is an interactive community, which means you should comment on 4 poems for every 1 you post. The more poems you read and leave a comment on, the more your name will be seen and the more people will want to read your work.
Help - The Help link will give you more information about the site. It is an excellent page to stop at, and will answer most of your basic questions. If you have any questions about the Help page, or the AP Policy, allpoetry.com/special/policies , you can ask any of us for help. The Moderators are highlighted in blue, while Site Greeters are in green. Click on the (IM) beside the name in the poet list, type your question into the small box that will appear just below the chatterbox, and send!...
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Membership - As a note of thanks from the site, all new members are given a free four-day trial preferred membership when they join. This allows you to post pictures with your poems and on your author page. Once the trial is over, you will no longer be able to enjoy these special benefits unless you purchase a membership for yourself. Although a membership is not required in order to post poems or comment, it does make the AP experience a bit more exciting. Further details are in the Store link at the top of the page.
Contests - Each month the Site Greeters host a contest for new poets, and allpoetry.com/contest/609652 is the one for May. At the top of the screen you will notice a Contests link, where different AP poet-hosted challenges will help inspire your creative talents, and allpoetry.com/Column/307514 is an interesting column that describes contests and how they are judged.
Emoticons - You may have noticed the emoticons, or 'smilies' that people add to comments, and the chatterbox. A list can be found here-> allpoetry.com/Column/306041
Promoting - Two options to promote your work are the Shameless Promotion section, and the Feature section. Please do not promote in the Chatter Box, Instant Message, or the Bulletin Boards. A moderator or greeter will ask you to stop, and you could be 'fined points'.
I hope you enjoy yourself here at Allpoetry, or at one of the sister sites: Storywrite, Allphilosophy, and Oldpoetry (links at the bottom of this page). If you have any questions you can IM me and I will be happy to help in any way I can. Please stop by our page, allpoetry.com/poets/AP%20Greeters , for various helpful columns. -
xXblackenedXroseXx on May 25, 2004Hey Michael!!! Wuts up homie? I'm glad u joined AP (allpoetry). Well now u gotta post all those songs u read to me. Well i g2g now. W/B and read my poems. later
SAVE THE FROGS!!!
Edited on Jun 24, 5:48 p.m. because 'it had i love stefan and stefan sux!'.
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