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Emo house bunny on July 8a random "hello" from canada
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JinxyCat on February 8I have read some of your work ... I enjoy it very much ... just thought I would stop by and let you know that I will be commenting on more of them soon ... Your words speak true power ...
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VampireShadow on February 6I love the top pattern on your page. It's awesome.
Just thought I'd lay that out there.
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Ishtar on January 29"hope he has a few more pieces up his sleeveless shirt..."
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wbiro : I official attest that cloven has a gift... on August 2, 2007all he has to do now is get used to the periods when one writes into the void... I hope he has a few more pieces up his sleeveless shirt...
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Ishtar on March 5, 2007
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wbiro on November 5, 2006slowly time rolls down the hills of life...
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Ishtar on September 17, 2006Thank you once again.
-Reni -
Clovis6790Curious on August 26, 2006Hi, dude. We used to be neighbors. I'm originally from Utah, and in case you are wondering, everyone else always asks, no I'm not a Mormon. You're Cloven, I'm Clovis, hmm, a great philosophical revelation to be sure. LOL i've read a couple of your poems before and like the way you write. Hope you'll drop by my author page and check it out. Have a great day.
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Ishtar on August 23, 2006Thanks for reading and critiquing.
-Reni -
FallingSideways on March 18, 2006I know how that goes
well whenever you do, you know I'll def. want to read it
till next time be well
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cloven on March 15, 2006aye so have I, been really busy latly il try to get something new out there though hehe, hope to hear from u soon
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FallingSideways on March 14, 2006I have been a bit dormant when its come to writing and have returned to see that it may have been contagious..hmm... just dropping a hello and hope all has been well
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wbiro on January 14, 2006Hello, Cloven... (I see you have a real name!
) I hope you haven't forgotten the reason you write... many come here and it shifts to 'approval', they fail to get it, then quit. As AP says in the Help section, 'Poets are an emotional bunch...' I just had an AP sister 'leave' (for the second time!) and it hurts- I enjoyed her company... we even played online chess together... so where was I... oh yes... you and your writing... believe it or not you are getting better, though we cannot see ourselves getting better... well, enough blah blah for now... I do have your poems backed up in case you 'freak out' or something... I do it for all my troubled AP family members... not that I'm calling YOU troubled! but you being young means you will taste life out on the edge...
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Unusual Being on November 2, 2005One word may describe "Cloven" as a whole- not that of talent or handsome, but beauty. He always has an amazing message or hidden meaning within his poems, sometimes they aren't very hard to interpret and at other times you may have to reread the over and over again until you slowly pick up the pieces. Beauty makes up his talent--Not everyone has this passion. But there is a good portion who does. "Cloven" is one person all around-it may seem like he is more then one person almost-because of everything he does. IT's truly amazing how this great, wise, man can put together such masterpieces. Full of so many different feelings, when in the outcome it relates to something stronger- Anyways, "Cloven" you're an awesome, awesome, awesome poet-writer-and person overall. "I give you mad props!" haha- Take Care, and never give up such wonderful beauty. You're beyond amazing.
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Unusual Being on November 1, 2005Marlin, I love you!!! lol You're an amazing writer who inspires more then just poetic people- you inspire people who don't have the ability to write poetry very well- but even for the better you inspire me in a different way. You have a very insightful, intelligent view on poetry. You're one of the best writers, maybe even the best, I have ever met. Keep it up and one day we will get married, haha......luvvya-ME
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TaintedDarkness on October 29, 2005I am so glad that you are enjoying yourself on here!!! Well anyways im sorry that i havent gotten around to reading your poems, but i will!!! I promise, anyways...congrats on winning gold!! well i changed my myspace because i was tired of some ppl on there so if you want i can give you the link to my new one!! well ill ttyl!
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wbiro on October 28, 2005It's tough being a Greek God, I know! I'm assuming that's you on the peak there, great shot! I hope you get much God angst out on AP here through your writing, Cloven!
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