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Thank you for stopping by my page and commenting on my work. as i said before i am overjoyed to share my feelings in the written word with my peers. i am honored to have a writer of your calibre enjoy my expression. i look forward to reading more from you in the future. At the moment my feelings are too convoluted to understand well enough for me to write bout them but as soon as i am able to do so again i hope you enjoy my future works as much as i am sure i will enjoy your's.  
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I just saw my poem on the spotlight list....I was all like woo hoo!! thank you for doing that. It really means a lot coming from you!!
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Thank you so much for the comments that you have given on some of my writes. Truly it is flattering to get that kind of response from one of my works. I hope that sometime soon i will have something knew up. but i do not have anything as of yet.
But i really appreciate the comments and thank you again!
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Love your incredibly eclectic playlist and most of all your great poetry.
ivoire
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When are you going to write something young lady?
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ok I just barely made it throught the second stanza of "a trap of madness"
had to stop and add you
quite a delight to discover a new read with such mastery of the language that shows a sense of discipline. Look forward to reading more.
love, peace, and chicken grease,
A>
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whoa... that was weird
and timely
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I like the new picture. Very comically punk. I'm high on insomnia! Passing around some "what's up". While I'm here, I should thank you for being awesome. So, thank you for being awesome.
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bluewho : Hey my friend on December 29, 2008
So y ain't ya writin nuttin? It's time ya be letten the words flow....
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I know a mouse and he hasn't got a house
I don't know why I call him Gerald
He's getting rather old but he's a good mouse
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she had that camarillo brillo
flaming out along her head
I mean her mendecino bean-o
by where some bugs that made it red
she says she was a magic mama
and she could throw a mean tarot
and carrued on without a comma
that she was someone I should know
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hi darlin'
you have earned a back stage pass
for being my number one fan
I'm gonna rock you to the core
with a beating base
make your vocal strings sing
finger you like an eclectic fiddle
with a hard body
and a hum-bucking pick-up
stamp your ticket
smother your wind wood
reed in spit
and when you beg for more
I'm gonna turn you on
and turn you over
and play you an encore
you will never forget
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like a rolling stone...like arolling stone...like the F.B.I...or the C.I.A...or the B.B.C....BB king and Doris Day dig it, dig it, dig it
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and it's one, two, three what are we fighting for?
don't ask me,I don't give a damn, next stop is Iran
and its five, six, seven, open up those pearly gates
ain't no time to wonder why, whoopie, we're all gonna die.
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and if you ever come across us
don't give us your sympathy
you can buy us a drink or just shake our hands
and you will recognize
by the reflection in our eyes
that deep down inside we're one of the same
we're clutching at straws, still drowning
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hey there mama,
screw me with your seduction
that tingles like cocaine,
insane this game that disappears.
shoot this soul unconscious
as slits cascade down the sewer,
whores in the gutter guide
the dead sperm into the abyss.
kiss me hard and wait,
sail through the tragedy.
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zochit2me : Hey East Texas Chick! on June 9, 2008
I am dancing across your page and leaving you a couple of   as well as 
You rock!!!!
Becky 
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teddybare : dub the beautiful soul on May 26, 2008
the world is a better place with you in it .. glad to know ya .. ap friend 
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It wasn't very largeThere was just enough room to cram the drumsIn the corner over by the DodgeIt was a fifty-fourWith a mashed up doorAnd a cheesy little ampWith a sign on the front said "Fender Champ"And a second hand guitarIt was a Sratocaster with a whammy barWe could jam in Joe's GarageHis mother was screamingHis dad was madWe was palying the same old songIn the afternoon and sometimes we wouldPlay it all night longIt was all we knew and easy tooSo we wouldn't get it wrongAll we did was bend the string like...Hey!Down in Joe's garageWe didn't have no dope or LSDbut a couple of quarts of beerWould fix it so the intonationWould not offend your earsAnd the same old chords going over and overbecame a symphonyWe would play it again and again'cause it sounded good to meone more time!
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lets have a ball in a biscuit sugar, and take our sweet little time about it...we'll tell everyone to just get out and get clean together and I'll find me a soap-box where I can shout it...I got one or two things to say about it, now listen...do, do, do, do do, do, do do do do do do...
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Thanks for the birthday wishes on myspace. Your friendship is greatly appreciated always.
You rock! East Texas girl
Becky 
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cheaphotlesign acrostic
cruise along dimensions with
heart and smile theatrical dreams -
easy dreams as the stage beckons
a poetry performance,
pleasing to the ear as the eye
hops imagery - beauty that
opens the spirit
to the world's stage,
everything dances here in love,
like wings of angels in heaven,
so let the music set you free,
in the mind there are soft gree
gardens that flourish,
now is the time to laugh life.
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I fed myself
promises,
laughed wine
down the front
of my feelings.
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She stood in the doorway the ghost of a smile
haunting her face like a cheap hotel sign...
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scoff : Nice place ya got here! on March 30, 2008
Thanks for the welcome and the comments on my poetry.
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I'll be back later to comment on your stuff 
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i love ur name!! >.< 
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NO! GIVE ME HUGS BACK NAO!
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Hello Fish Bowl 
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Happy Birthday Cuddles...Wishing you a wonderful day filled with goodies...love and kisses from Alice.
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Your poetry is not crap hon... I absolutely love it!! 
You should enter more contests and see what response you get... I believe it would be a great one!! 
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Harmesmur : Thank you for your comment on February 18, 2008
I read through some of you "crap" I really like it. Not crap at all, really quite amazing
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zochit2me : Is there anybody in there... on February 15, 2008
Just nod if you can hear me.
Is there anybody home?
I love Pink Floyd!!!
  
Becky 
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Yey!! I love Pink Floyd!!
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Random question... if your screen name from the song "Wish You We're Here" by Pink Floyd?
Sorry Pink Floyd is one of my all time favorite bands! And your screen name appealed to me!
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I just dropped in to say thank you for your kind comment that you left on my poem "Out of Sight"
I am glad it could help you...it is also a personal poem for me as well. I lost someone I dearly loved 6 yrs ago and still I think about him and sometimes find myself talking to him as well...
I am sorry for your loss
Becky 
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running over the same old ground...what have we found...same old fears...wish you were here
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love and hope in the new year sweet beaver
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Someone near, someone far
Memories created
Inner rainbows
Lovely treasures
Explore new horizons
Thank you for the gold!  I have to go to work, so I hope you have a beautiful day!

Silent-O
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Hey! I haven't talked to in a while, and I wanted to stop in and see how you were doing. 
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Who Loves you baby!!! I do!!!
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♥I really want to say thank you for adding me as your AP sister! You are the only AP family member I have. Also, thank you for your encouraging words in reply to Silencing Heartstrings. It really made me feel better!
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I really like your work.
I also added you to my favorite list.
I'll be reading more here very soon.
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Hey! I just thought I would drop in and see how ya were doing.. Are you enjoying your summer?
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