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  • The.poet.of.hearts on November 10
    Assalam o Alaikum

    I'm Collecting and Gathering Urdu, Hindhi, And Arabic Writers and Poets and Readers Here at

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/Urdu%20And%20Hindhi%20Writers%20and%20Readers

    I was awarded by a group but now I'm changing the theme and background of this group..

    first time ever, I'm bringing some change at AP for all of Us..

    For Pakistanis, For Indians and For Sub Continent Friends and Mates.

    Love for All~

    Please Join Me, I have spent my four years at AP.. and AP has no good Strength of We Pakistanis And We Indians

    I'm a Pakistani but My Mother land is in India and My Forefathers Belongs to India.

    Also, I'm a Memon. So I have no Country to represent myself,. but I'm Global Person.. but I live and Die With My Country, With Urdu and With Languages

    Please, come and join me and bring your those friends as well, whom I don't know
    Allah Nigehbaan
  • sugs on November 5
    hi
    good to hear from u.
    donno, got lost in the material world, well m back n i hope it will be wid a bang

    thanks for remembering me
  • Why so serious : hi on September 26
    hello!
    im15 yrs old!
    More than that im Rohith!
    IF YU DONT MIND...plezz add me as yur frend!
    Been thirsty of indian poets!
  • mina nagi on July 25, 2008
    Hope all is well with you... long time no see...

    mina
  • Punjabi Putter : thanks for visiting my page on April 28, 2008
    thank you very much for visiting my page and making comments. I will surly take time to read your works. Thanks again. Pushpinder. Bye and take care
  • Punjabi Putter : Nice to see your page on April 27, 2008
    Its quite interesting to know something about you, many things are similar in our APpages for example MR Nagi is one of my best people, Amitabh ist my fav actor and Veer Zaara is the best film from SRK and Priety. I will take time to read your works. Take care Pushpinder Prashar.
  • nirmal on April 13, 2008
    its been long time since your last work.. waiting for another one of your fantastic piece of poetry ... don't keep me waiting for long
  • Sai Babas Lotus on May 12, 2007
    Hi Dear! It's really nice to stop by your page and read about you. Where are you doing MBA from? Are you studying in India? I am from Pune. And, are you a Gujrati? I'm a Sindhi-Punjabi mix

    Write back soon,
    Love,
    Charishma
  • a burnt out candle on November 14, 2006
    I actually started using this site last year =] It is growing on me, I love this site.
  • poetryality on October 6, 2006
    14071 critiques

    And that's just what I've read on this site. LOL
  • poetryality on October 6, 2006
    Hi!

    Just stopped by to thank you for reading my poem; "The Teacher" Maybe you missed the list the poem is in. It is free verse. I was not trying to create a rhyme scheme. When the heart is so touched I believe the words come from there. There was no need for poetic devices and/or metaphors...similes. Just simple words to relay how proud I am of my nephew. I have taught creative writing for 23 years. I am well aware of how to write. LOL I read more that I can even express to you. LOL

    If you care to take a look at my poetry collection on this site you will see that not all of my poetry is so simply written. This one is however, for it was not my intention to bog-down my feeling with intricate wording. Hopefully you felt the adoration and pride I have in my nephew fulfilling his dreams, and aspirations.

    Blessings & Much LOVE ♥

    Renee
    Edited on Oct 06, 3:35 p.m. because 'typos '.
  • The Anonymous on September 29, 2006
    thanks alot Gunjan

    Your comments are always inspiring
  • baawri on September 6, 2006
    Thanks for being still here.I thought I have lost you striving for some mirage.A cute wise friend regained.Take care.
  • The Anonymous on August 16, 2006
    *Pourin some suger on you*

    Mayank(LoT)
    *Livin after midnight, rockin to the dawn*
  • between slices on August 16, 2006
    mmm... read your page and i really like it. you've expressed yourself so much in such a truthful way that i've come to admire you on that.
    and HEYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! you're just 2 years and a day older than I! me bday is on z 3rd of feb!!
    Aquarians rock! have fun. bless ya!
  • theslayer on August 15, 2006
    A fellow Indian here I see.. One who writes in 'Hinglish' too! Hehe.. Rock on!
  • FlyingXDaggers on August 10, 2006
    you like bollywood?? woo hoo!! me too!! i loved the movie Black as well as Veer Zarra, they were so beautiful and captivating dont you think? have you ever seen the movie iqbal? (i dont know if i spelled that right!) its a movie i think you'd like even if you arent intrested in cricket. Or how about Khabi Alvida Naa Khehena? (i know thats not spelled right at all!!) i really want to see it, it has Amitabh, Abishake, Rani Mukherjee, Priety Zinta (my favorite), and Sharukh Khan. any ways i really like your page, we have a lot in common
  • The Anonymous on August 7, 2006
    Hey Awesome page!!

    So much to read, such much to think.
    'seems like a blow-torch burning inside
    So much to feed, so much to shrink,
    'seems like an ocean's rising tide.

    Mayank (LoT)
  • Sau on June 23, 2006
    hey nice to hear from ya... and abt trivial fights, i agree with you... it is not worth losing precious things due to small quibblings... i have had a similar experience, but i was on the other side. lol [ ]
  • Sudarshan on June 4, 2006
    Hi Shivani, I havent read any of your poems yet. But I surely like all the things you have written over here, I like the way you are organized and very opinionated, this is the most comprehensive author bio I have read so far, I will surely read your poems in the time to come, hope to hear more from you, have a good time.
  • shreyawrites on May 27, 2006
    hey Shivani ...your author's page is awsome.....and ur use of language too...
    keep up the good work


    S h R e Y a
  • nirmal on May 22, 2006
    I truly mean this------if you get enough exposure on the world fora you could be the greatest poet of this century. Your words have the charisma. every line enthralls. Its a joy to read your words. Keep writing
  • Raazi on May 20, 2006
    I also, like the rest, love your author's page. We have some similarities, don't we?
    I am an Arya Samaji too. But I am also an atheist. I am also a sufi. No fixed religion. It's all there on my Author's page.
  • coolpoet on May 17, 2006
    hi,your author's page is very emotional and i kinda love it.also,your definition of love is just great!You have written everything with a focussed mind...i'm really looking forward to acquainting you ....love,ranjani
  • abhimanyu dev singh on May 15, 2006
    do u mean me on chat frnds... or els...
  • Princess-nee on May 15, 2006
    Hello shivanirani...
  • mina nagi on April 19, 2006
    I thoroughly enjoyed reading your author's page, as if it was written using my words... with the exception that I didn't win a Gold medal for education but in cricket ... In studies I was nalaik...
    I studied Sanskrit too for one year as an optional subject...
    Ras-Malai is my weekness, though I don't share with anyone-Yum-yum yummy
    take care...
    mina
    Edited on Apr 19, 5:54 p.m. because 'forgot hug'.
  • baawri on April 19, 2006
    Dear one hope you succeed with bright colours.And always bear in mind love is the most pleasant experience one ever has and it is the greatest teacher of human attitude and behaviour.Discover yourself.Dont loose what you are.
  • baawri on April 19, 2006
    Dear no need to be jealous of me.I am one like you.the touch of pain creates man.when i was ina mental catastrophe I discovered the poetic talent like a pearl in the sea of gloom.And till death everyone is a learner.Hope you learn better and respond better to the challenges of life.
  • sugs on April 19, 2006
    u r so young n still know so many things abt life... i really wanna know u more....i hope u ll feel the same if i tell u tht i share hell lots with u...but rt now i got my xams, so may b in my post xam vaccations, i will sit n read more of ur works. it deserves to e read whn sm poet writes tht ur work make him/her jealous...

    regards n keep writing
    i have almost stoped writing, m trying to throw literature, poetry out of my life coz of a pig whom i loved ! hahahahaha


    will get bk to u, bye for now
  • Abby Catashrope on April 12, 2006
    Your writing makes me jealous, it really does.


    Thank you for your comment it made my day. <3
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