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jaunty pill on June 20, 2006

Congratulations on your victory. ( Please check the link to see what I mean ). allpoetry.com/Contest/2081817
slaughter on April 23, 2006

allpoetry.com/poem/1952264

Above is a group I've recently formed together in conjuction with jaunty pill for writers we believe are talented and deserve to be part of a community of other inspiring and creative poets.

We hope you decide to join.

- Kenneth
jaunty pill on April 7, 2006

Hello. Recently I have decided to hold a
contest as an " Invite only ". I have been reading
your poems for quite awhile and thought this
would be a good way of getting to know you better
as a writer. I would very much appreciate an entry.
It will aid in the hope to extend my commenting
on other writers , Such as yourself.

allpoetry.com/contest/1932350

Thanks for your time .
James

P.S. If you would not like your name
included on the contest list , Please IM me
and I'll remove it. I don't want to offend
anyone by this contest or make anyone
uncomfortable.
ShesInMyHand on August 30, 2005

nothing she speaks and the head splits nothing and nothing but it is unbelievable

the boys are sick but the men do not look at a thing and for this time this is never and only you or nothing

we are happy maybe for the first time but we do not know it

sad for always

we finished finished ourselves and we are sad

she screams nothing and never nothing and nothing

and nothing

and never

nothing

that's the translation. FYI

-meg
honeyhannah on August 10, 2005

where's the new poetry?
angelofcleansheets on August 6, 2005

No problem. She needed it.
Four Wishes on August 6, 2005

Hah, Thank you very much for helping me out with that chronic girl. What a pain. You posted just before I was about to say something. Thanks again.
honeyhannah on July 21, 2005

I added more to the poem and titled it glass love now.
leecansing on July 19, 2005

Yes ma'am i wrote something new, or at least i posted one of the new things i wrote...but alas it was my first short story and it sucked...there were a few profound lines but other than that it had no substance...i hated it...no real loss...but i'm glad you're not mad
XkelseyX on July 18, 2005

you me meg coffee steak n shake tomorrow (tuesday)
it only seems fair that i leave one last note when a gang of homicidal assasins are creeping around my house, but you dont mind bloody bandages...no? good see ya

haha...???? who knows

love ya lover,
kelsey
leecansing on July 18, 2005

Are you angry with me? It's just i got that e-mail from you and you sounded pissed about some of the answers i put...like the one about using people - i don't usually like to explain myself but i don't want you to think bad of me, i value you're opinnion. So if it was me that prompted you let me know and i apologize ahead of time. So sorry
ShesInMyHand on July 11, 2005

enter my contest, bitch.

love ya!
ShesInMyHand on July 11, 2005

Dear,

(cheesy air guitar) FOXY!
(cheesy air guitar) FOXY!

You know you're a cute little heart breaker - Ha!
Foxy!
And you know you're a sweet little love maker - Yes!
Foxy!

I wanna get you home, haha!
I won't do you no harm, noooo.
You've got to be on me -
ALL night!
Foxy lady!

Here I come, baby. Comin' to Get-cha!

EXTREME CLOSE UP!
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

But you and I know that there is no film in this camera.

Hey, let's do the scooby-doo ending!
Cool, wicked idea!
dood-a-lie do dood-a-lie do dood-a-lie do

She will be mine, oh yes, she will be mine.

Tough night at work, huh. Everybody was kung-foo fighting!

Happy birthday... mr. president.....

Did you ever find bugs bunny atractive when he put on a dress and acted like a girl bunny?
ha ha ha - no.
me neither.... I was just asking.

GAME ON!
car.....
GAME ON!

Is he gonna spew?
i'm giving you a no spew guarentee.
hey... if you're gonna blow, blow in this (pulls dixie cup out of pocket)

Yeah, sure we'll hang with you.... with Alice Cooper....
WE'RE NOT WORTHY! WE'RE NOT WORTHY! WE'RE SCUM! WE SUCK!

lol - just for you darling.

love,
meg
leecansing on July 10, 2005

forgive my ignorance darling...

explain angelofcleansheets
leecansing on July 9, 2005

darling, i'm sorry i haven't had time to comment...i feel horrible...both because i haven't commented on your new ones and describing my physical condition...i'm run down...and i'll be commenting on your poems as soon as i get time and i've written a few more due to post anytime - but not until after i comment on yours
-cj-
puddeloftears on July 9, 2005

Please let me know when you change your name. Seriously ... it confuses me. But anyways ... hugs.
~Vicky
Trisha Militia on July 8, 2005

Now I'm gonna sing for you:

Don't shake, I hate to see you tremble
Trembling, you've lost your touch
Trembling, I find you so addictive
addictive..or something like that..its an underoath song..i dont know the words exactly because the dude is screaming this part..i can scream just like him..so i just make vowel sounds that sound like the mystery words
ShesInMyHand on June 26, 2005

Hey!

POST SOMETHING!
leecansing on June 24, 2005

i miss you and you're comments...
PaleSeptembeR on June 16, 2005

I know, Fiona Apple is very tslented, I agree. I love the song Pale September, It's my favorite. Tehe, thanks for writting.
ShesInMyHand on June 12, 2005

hey hon.

I'm glad you're ok.. or semi-ok, at least. Hope Aaron and the whole crew are alright too.

on a lighter note - we have to give my poor baby cricket earmite eardrops. Yeah.. THAT'S a trip. Everyone at my house calls her satan cricket now. She's NOT happy and she's bitting and clawing everyone. (except me... heh heh)

on a not so light note did you know that our 'resa' is having... ern... 'fertility issues'. you know... her maybe being TOO fertile (i don't want to just say it) She's been throwing up and stuff.

not good.

erm.... on another light note that bitch who I had the falling out with on allpoetry (the one that wrote the cigarette poem i bitched about a weekj or so ago) has been im-ing me lately.

ha ha ha.

ok... that's all I have to say. I hope you're ok. Really. Smile. It's ok to smile.

love you ma columbe.
meg
g r e y i s m on June 10, 2005

thanks for all of your kind comments.

~Lea
ShesInMyHand on June 2, 2005

dude, i left the most horrendously honest comment on this kids poem:

http://allpoetry.com/poem/1299306

read it and then read this:

i am a smoker - and I hate it when people do things like this. It is an ADDICTION and a lifestyle. Everyone get's to chose the way they live and I hate it when people walk up to me when I'm smoking and say "you're killing yourself. those give you cancer" NO SHIT?!?!

not only did this annoy me, but it was a terrible poem. I will place the issue of context and style aside to correct your grammer.

1. one breathe at a time
you mean "breath" you take in a BREATH when you BREATHE

2. but slowly your dying
'your' is a CONTRACTION so it should be spelled 'you're' (you are)

#1 is wrong FIVE TIMES.

onward.

'you don't know
but slowly your dying'

WE DO KNOW! Its just people who are too immature to accept it that don't know it.

what I'm trying to say is...

grow up.
and use spellcheck before you post for the love of god.

hee hee.

they wrote back in broken/chatspeak english.

hahahahaha

how have you been?
hope it's all good.

-meg
Trisha Militia on May 1, 2005

You're a nerd!!
leecansing on April 30, 2005

YES! My darling brenna loves my songs of the day! I know about the Chris Carrabba comment...i swear next to Conor he's one of the best writers of this century! Plus he's so freaking cute...gosh!

Yes yes love is cute...i love cute people! I am in love with a really good friend of mine, but you see it's not that i don't want to take a chance to see if it'll work, i just think the love i have for him is the deep cute friend love, but i'm not sure...but yes i actully have been in love or pretty close to it before and it's nice...i wish i could have held on to that one...but like my calculator, i seem to lose most things...yes...have a wonderful day...er or evening...ish
-cj-
XkelseyX on April 27, 2005

Thanks for th amazing comment on crushed(byflaws). i didnt know how to post a comment on yer coment and applaud you so this will do...haha...the dude, marcus, seems pretty cool..i've only talked to him a little bit, but he has no idea i have a teensy crush on him. yeah the poem was inspired by him and his stage performance...but im not COMPLETLY in love with him...of course if he said that stuff to me, i would jump in his arms and runaway with him..or anyone who said that...so obviously desperate...aww chelsea is at a taking back sunday concert in arkansas and im talking to her and im SO SAD!!! but then again im happy cos I GOT A JOB AT THE FARMINGTON MOVIE THEATER!!! YAY!! you should apply too if you're looking for a job cos theyre hiring only like 4 people. also i downloaded 'here in my room' by incubus for my phone...

YEAH LOVE IS A VERB
HERE IN MY ROOM!!!

how very true...someday...maybe...it will be an emotion...
who knows?

well im done taking up space...LATEr!!!
Forgotten Heartbeat on April 25, 2005

yea i agree nick is amazing...ahh it was like one of the best days of my life when i went and saw them b/c i talked to them too..haha....i dont play..i wish i did....but music is pretty much my life anywayy..later
love always.sarah jean
Forgotten Heartbeat on April 23, 2005

ahhh i love spill canvas too! they are so amazing in person too..have you seen them?......*yay i'm your favorite person lol*
love always...sarahjean
ShesInMyHand on April 17, 2005

It's 11:22 and I'm unable to sleep.

The tree's will be alive for 44 more minutes.
43.
dammit.

ahh, look what I found...
Every time I look into your lovely eyes,
I see a love that money just can't buy.
One look from you, I drift away.
I pray that you are here to stay.

Anything you want, you got it.
Anything you need, you got it.
Anything at all, you got it.
Baby!

Every time I hold you I begin to understand,
Everything about you tells me I'm your man.
I live my life to be with you.
No one can do the things you do.
Anything you want, you got it.
Anything you need, you got it.
Anything at all, you got it.
Baby!
Anything you want
Anything you need
Anything at all

I'm glad to give my love to you.
I know you feel the way I do.
Anything you want, you got it.
Anything you need, you got it.
Anything at all, you got it.
Baby!
Anything you want, you got it
Anything you need, you got it
Anything at all, you got it
Baby
Anything at all
Baby
You got it

that DAMN movie!

Do you know how long it's been since I cried that hard???
well....

It's been a LONG TIME!!!

:sigh:

well, i'm going to kiss the tree's goodbyr for a month os to and go hit the sack.

carpe carpem.
never forget who we are.

we are the lll's.

night.
angelofcleansheets on April 12, 2005

Yes, you're right.
invested on April 11, 2005

The picture is back that's good
ShesInMyHand on April 11, 2005

TREE'S!!!!!!!!!!!

i just finished boys on teh side
ShesInMyHand on April 6, 2005

'the poetry club will be the 13th

the short story club will be the 27th'
ShesInMyHand on April 4, 2005

BREEEE!!!!

I still love you

my columbe
I so spelled that wrong.

poetry club NEXT WED!!!!

Everyone needs to come.
carpooling is a necessity.

bring your favorite poem (don't bring "but I love"
and a poem that needs work.

we're going to road trip to the little parkish area by the library.

ta ta!
ShesInMyHand on March 23, 2005

BREE!!!!!!!!!!

I love you
Trisha Militia on March 21, 2005

Hey I'm planning on publishing a book with kick ass poetry in it...including yours..so what poems do you want in it..and you can buy a book too its 10 dollars
Trisha Militia on March 21, 2005

I like ICanMakeAMessLikeNobodysBusiness yay!
ShesInMyHand on March 20, 2005

Hey - you started a name changing trend!

lol

I'm still looking for that perfest fit, but this is better than Konstantine.

kiss kiss, my love.
ClarinetNut2006 on March 14, 2005

BANDGEEKS FOR LIFE! Lol. Clarinet's do kick!
Trisha Militia on March 13, 2005

oh my goosh...thanks soooo freakin much for the comment...you won't believe how cool that makes me feel..you are like...the god of writing...and you kick ass..and you said that mine was good..and you were in awe...YAY! ///thanks so much man
trustworthy213 on March 3, 2005

hey gurl finaly someone knows what that is! Im am super excited! thanks and congrats to yourself! well difinatly have to exchange info. im going in june so i hope itll be fun!!!!!

PrInCeSs
ShesInMyHand on February 27, 2005

IT'S BEEN 18 DAYS SINCE A NEW POEM! EIGHT-FUCKING-TEEN!

FIX IT!!!!!!!

on a lighter note, isn't kelseys comment sweet?
ShesInMyHand on February 20, 2005

still trees!

......

ummm..
XkelseyX on February 18, 2005

hey brenna its kelsey...i just wanted to thank you for that comment you left me. when im around such marvolous (sorry abvout the tacky word usage, its been awhile since i used that word though)i feel insignificant. i think you and meg are super duper writers (super duper as in prodigious, not sarcastic like) and i feel inept. you girls are the kind of writers people try to be like, im the kind trying to be. you gals set the standards, my writings just there. you have awesome context and format, and what you write can be seen on so many different levels, you have so many different angles to perceive it from, and meg has stupendous imagry. im glad i have inspirations like you two around cos otherwise i would be floating towards the similarities of common writes. i try to set myself apart real hard, yet my writing still has an air of the typical teenage angst. you and meg have originaility. CONGRATS on yer awesome brain....haha...later
puddeloftears on February 16, 2005

The trees are awesome. Did you take the picture? It's really cool. Yeah!!! Snaps for the trees.
ShesInMyHand on February 14, 2005

TREES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh today is a glorious day... lol
angelofcleansheets on December 28, 2004

I think I will.
invested on December 28, 2004

It really is too bad you deleted your new poem. I read it but never got the chance to comment because I had to be somewhere very quickly. I liked it though. It was very honest. Are you planning on editing it and posting it again?
angelofcleansheets on December 3, 2004

Yes, he does!
Libellulidae on December 3, 2004

i love the first quote on your page.. ts eliot rocks.

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