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  • on March 28, 2006
    as am i. wow i haven't had an interesting conversation like this in a while. happy to know i'm not the only one who believes in the para-normal and such
  • on March 28, 2006
    wow, an elecrtic shock. When I was young, about nine or so I had a poster of the pyramids and ufos were hovering above them lightning striking the tip of the pyramid. I was drawn to unexplained things even as a child. Then again I lived in a haunted hose where the lights would go on and off, doors would open and close and chairs would move. I remember reading stories of saddom and gamorem and wond wondering why god didn't do that vengeful stuff anymore like he used to. movies like stigmata, constantine and such seem to have truth in the fiction. it seems like the church hides as much as the government.
  • individuality on March 25, 2006
    Solitude Shines Starlight

    Rolling through the splendid ocean of skin
    rolling through towards sweet fired escape
    if those salted tears are captured in freedom
    then the rhythms of the heart will never break

    Here within the sighs, the sin
    solitude shines starlight on this face
    I can not flee from the depths of space;
    the chambers of my lonely dance
    and if I could soar the heaven's light
    then surely eveything will be alright

    Rolling through the splendid ocean of skin
    rolling through towards sweet fired escape
    if those salted tears are captured in freedom
    then the rhythms of the heart will never break


    Oh fractured flapping infinite desire
    coloured like rainbow's ticking rush
    wonder and beauty sweep down my cheek
    as I recall the fragrance of your trembling blush


    Here within the sighs, the sin
    solitude shines starlight on this face
    I can not flee from the depths of space;
    the chambers of my lonely dance
    and if I could soar the heaven's light
    then surely eveything will be alright

    Rolling through the splendid ocean of skin
    rolling through towards sweet fired escape
    if those salted tears are captured in freedom
    then the rhythms of the heart will never break
    Oh fractured flapping infinite desire
    coloured like rainbow's ticking rush
    wonder and beauty sweep down my cheek
    as I recall the fragrance of your trembling blush
    Rolling through the splendid ocean of skin
    rolling through towards sweet fired escape
    if those salted tears are captured in freedom
    then the rhythms of the heart will never break
    Oh fractured flapping infinite desire
    coloured like rainbow's ticking rush
    wonder and beauty sweep down my cheek
    as I recall the fragrance of your trembling blush




  • Psycho Dancer --- on March 25, 2006
    yay! i knew there were more Brits on here!

    xxx
  • individuality on March 25, 2006
    i like the new name, i was wondering who it was then who had changed their name hehehe
  • cosmicrose on March 19, 2006
    Ohhhh lord... Johnny Depp RULES!!!!!!!!!! I can't even imagine a sexier man or one I would rather spend a year stranded with than him. OHHHHH YEAH... and thanks for commenting on my write. I had to check you out.
  • waydownuponjoy on March 19, 2006
    There's alot about you written between the lines on this page. I felt that we have traveled to similar places in different wagons. So much ... so little time ... and God bless the folks that slowed us down. Your choice of songs are terrific and I'm sure within your soul there must be many more that lit that candle and made it glow. I'll look in on your poetry and see where that takes me. good luck with the soul mate thing as there's nothing like meeting the right one! joy
  • Swadhi on March 18, 2006
    Hi! I just wanted to thank you for the nice comment on Lady Brave, it was much appreciated. I don't have much time now, but I will return the favour later.
  • individuality on March 16, 2006
    The final post I did has a couple of edits, mainly commas, the words remain the same. Yes, it would make a good contest. Glad you liked the poem/song. I love that Vincent song, as many do.
  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX on March 16, 2006
    Brittle.. loved the tribute to Don McLean.. totally... perhaps my next contest should be Don McLean inspired.. I am seriously thinking about it.
  • individuality on March 16, 2006
    thanks you for the smiles then and the applause, i am glad you liked it
  • individuality on March 16, 2006
    I was inspired by looking in your author page - I thought I would write a song for Don Maclean seeing as though he did one for Vincent!


    Fashioned From Fingers; Light

    Singing
    singing songs
    let your wisdom roam the day

    you set your heart in colours; grey
    and walked the feelings that
    were brought from ages old.
    Sending shivers of thrills
    across the waves of gentle hills

    in minds that loved your skills

    in shades of spirits - grand.
    And here I am inside ovations' stand.

    Compassion's beauty you let free
    to roam the nods of - I agree.
    Your voice gave us chills,
    sent ripples down our spines,

    a story set in rhymes.

    Singing
    singing songs
    firing Heaven's feathered ways

    multicolured swirls of tones flicker in
    the generosity you Don gave Vincent,
    even though he wasn't present
    but inside the past's pain

    lost beyond despair's soft rain,
    music fashioned from fingers; light
    as breath unseen.
    And here I am dancing inside ovations' theme.

    Compassion's beauty you let free
    to roam the nods of - I agree.
    a story set in rhymes.

    All loved the tremors in your voice,
    we sat in songs that did rejoice

    and flapped rhythms through strings singing,
    singing songs,
    life was performed in souls
    while rivers wept from eyes; closed
    perhaps to your tune others proposed
    and sighed.
    Audiences everywhere
    with your words
    they too in mind composed.

    Singing,
    singing songs,
    throats were swallowing pain,

    for they felt emotions, the same
    and fell
    into the melodies you released
    for one who's now deceased

    subtle rings slipped into subtle dreams

    I wonder here, sat in moments; silent,
    how you bared your soul
    to give a passionate whisper,
    And here I am dancing inside ovations' smile

    Compassion's beauty is worthwhile,

    we roam the nods of - I agree.
    we listened,
    we heard your timeless call
    and we still sigh out
    into a starry night.


  • Elaine Robinson on March 16, 2006
    Just noticed the Don mclean thing, thats one of my all time fav songs and it is to me at least a really soothing song.xx
  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX on March 14, 2006
    Thank you Eve.. grins You had any good bites recently?
  • Eve Hayato on March 14, 2006
    Thank you my friend for your work, I like all, but my fave "The Perfect Death." Oh and the other one you showed me, Brilliant! So funny.
  • FoolishLover on March 11, 2006
    that sounds like my brother
  • FoolishLover on March 11, 2006
    thank you for reading my poem and commenting on it. i read some of your poems and they are really good. sorry the background was too bright for you. lol
  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX on March 11, 2006
    Thank you for your comments Mark - much appreciated. XX
  • Mark Rickerby on March 10, 2006
    "I love life and life loves me". Is that from Fiddler on the Roof? Great song.
  • Mark Rickerby on March 9, 2006
    Thanks very much for visiting my author page and for your kind words. I appreciate it very much. I look forward to exploring your works.

    All the best,

    Mark
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