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  • ViolentSerenity : hey babe i did'nt write this poem but its rlly good and i think you'll like it check it out :) on December 23, 2007
    We'll See
    How will I tell her? What will she say?
    If I say, "I love you", will she be okay?
    Repeating the words like spice on my tongue,
    Make me feel reckless, foolish, and young.

    Should I take her hands, trap them in my own?
    Feel the sins we've created in these years that we've grown.
    As I draw them about to the scars on my back,
    And whisper in her hear ear the many hugs that I lack.

    Could I kiss her softly, and would she care,
    If I ran both my hands through the locks of her hair?
    Feel the warmth that she brings into the cold of my mind,
    As she helps me foget it's backwards design.

    Can she bring me out of this fortress I made?
    Where my hopes for heaven still sorrowfully lay?
    Scoop me up in the arms I've avoided too long,
    Tell me I'm still missed and that I still belong.

    Is she the Goddess that I seek to adore?
    Covered in tears, humbly tattered and torn,
    An ear for my secrets, my prayers and dreams,
    Listen to my puzzles, tell me what they mean.

    Will she be there, till the end of the end?
    A soul who'll bear with me, till I finally send,
    Her grace to the heavens, with the prayers I said,
    Since the day that I met her, till the day that we're dead.

    If I say, "I love you"
    Will she love me too?
    We'll see.

    End.

    -Dorick
  • ViolentSerenity on December 23, 2007
    a truely amazing soul, sometimes a bit lost in deep depression but a good soul noe the less
  • ViolentSerenity : amazing on December 21, 2007
    your amazing writer sis, hey can you get on yahoo plz? i need to talk to you
  • Sean Logue : A good writer. on December 3, 2007
    Having read some of these works, I find them
    to be well written, there is some good subject matter.

    Cheers.
  • ViolentSerenity : heres the poem i was talking about sis on December 2, 2007
    [ The nights shame thrust upon my every waking bone ]
    The nights shame thrust upon my every waking bone
    They tell me to follow, but I can't do what I've been shown

    The voice warrents the fear I express
    It becomes hard to hide all the stress

    The brusies are proof of the anger escape
    The fake happiness a display to drape

    Fight to decieve their feeble eye
    A black rose among those who die

    Blood combined with the pain
    Forgotten love sent down the drain

    Hidden thoughts escape my mind
    Lost emotions I now find

    Losing sainity by the mile
    Wipped from my face is a smile

    A dark cage incases and trapts despair
    A blood wolf marks wounds beyond repair

    The new fight I can not win
    A new life, my old life a sin

    Fight for the freedome I thougth I deserved
    Over the years I lost the heart I conserved

    Broken hearts, echoed achy screams, shattered glass
    Decieved soul, timeless painful dreams, rememberd past

    Lost emotions, deceived by your heart
    Lost in apreciations found only in the dark

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