Guestbook entries for Withered-Soul

• Draven9967 on March 8, 2006

  I did. I dont normally listen to punk rock/emo type music, but there pretty good
• Draven9967 on March 7, 2006

  Jenny says Hello as well, my family is just fine, How is kevin and your mom?
• Draven9967 on March 6, 2006

  Im alright, you?
• Draven9967 on March 3, 2006

  Well I hope you have fun then, as you know it is an exciting place.
• Draven9967 on March 1, 2006

  Im sorry, I cannot say I am.. but I will try to make it for a day.
• Draven9967 on February 28, 2006

  Nay, I am good for now. How about yourself?
• Draven9967 on February 27, 2006

  Thank you very much, Lauren.
• Draven9967 on February 23, 2006

  I cant say its getting any better, but im fine. you?
• Withered-Soul on February 22, 2006

  Yea i know what you mean...well i wish you could see the light because you know deep down in your heart that it is there...somewhere but its up to you to keep searching for it...you know?...yea i know what you mean...im sorry that someone did that to you but your not the only one...keep your faith because God will keep putting people in your life like that just to make you stronger....
• Draven9967 on February 21, 2006

  Wish I could be as optimistic as I used to be, but I do not see this so called light people keep telling me of..It hurts when you felt so real with that special someone, and you were nothing but a toy they decided to play with..
• Draven9967 on February 21, 2006

  But things cant be perfect
  all the time, that I know..
  Sometimes we just have to let somethings go..
  
  I wish I could say life is going well, but its the worst its ever been for awile..Please pray.
• BrianWoo12 on January 5, 2006

  Wow I havent been on this in a while (been on vaca). I really like your poetry too. its cool talking to you.
• hard soul on December 23, 2005

  sup lauren get on myspace some time ok so we can talk ok.
• jervin123-999 on December 18, 2005

  Omg its Me lauren I like so dig you lol!!! !!! YUO YOU DO OWN MAH CHURCH!!! sT.jAmEs Is NoW pROpErTy OF LaUrEn MaLoNe
• Casen on December 18, 2005

  Hey, I really liked your stuff. Great musicality. Do u play nething? Sing? My names CJ btw.
• gothicchic373 on August 15, 2005

  yea umm i have it on my other comp but i will get it to u i promise well ttyl
• gothicchic373 on August 11, 2005

  hello im julie i absolutely love ur poems but i think i might tell u that sum1 copied ur poem "When tom. starts w/out me" im a big fan of that poem and i was shocked that i saw those words w/ut ur name by it soo yea ttyl
• Little Willow on August 4, 2005

  Hey Lauren come check out some of the new stuff i added...i think you'll like it more soon lots of love
  
  Ashleigh
• hard soul on August 1, 2005

  lauren talk to me plz I just want to talk to some body you know and by that I mean you ok got to go now
  Edited on Aug 01, 11:05 because ''.
• hard soul on May 6, 2005

  do you ever feel like you love every body but you are love by no one it drives me crazy what whould you do? oh did i tell you
  caydie is a hottie wow she gets hotter every time i see her.
• hard soul on April 20, 2005

  hows it been going i have been wondering
  i miss having you around you know right across the street
• velveteen on March 13, 2005

  Oh my God. Finally someone who has actually heard of Hawthorne Heights. I love them. I have the album and a t-shirt, but I live in Middle of Nowhere Arkansas, so no one knows who they are. You sound awesome!
  Erika
• hard soul on February 12, 2005

  thank you
• AngelGiggle on February 10, 2005

  OH look who it is, LAUREN!! lol I just want to stop in and say HEY! so..um... HEY!!! lol, bye bye now! lol
  Edited on Feb 10, 1:59 p.m. because 'OH not Ho... ops....lol'.
• on January 13, 2005

  Hey again that is awesome you are in a band now...just leaving a quick comment saying i talked to that Draven9967 kid...jon i think...he is really cool and you guys seem to have a past...i told him he should talk to you...well talk to him!
  
  ~crystal
• on January 12, 2005

  Hey i like your page and stuff! seems you know alot of people here... well talk toy ou later...
  
  ~crystal
• AngelGiggle on December 30, 2004

  God, I'm not even going to say anything to you like "I hate you" or anything. I just want to say by doing all of this, and causeing all this drama, you are hurting him more then you will ever know.... If you love him, let him go...
  
  ((p.s. you are not the only one that loves him the way you do, trust me, I've known him and seen him grow over that time period, and he has been through too much. I love him with all of my heart, and I will always. But instead of doing what you do, I face the fact and deal. I'm here as a freind to him, trying to stop all the shit like this from bringing him down. Think about what I said))
• IHeartFatBoyz on December 3, 2004

  Interesting author page... I just thought I would drop by and say hello
• Draven9967 on October 14, 2004

  Lauren,
  
  I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!I LOVE YOU!
  
  I Love You, (Sorry I had too)
  Your, Draven
• Withered-Soul on October 12, 2004

  you know what...i don't care what the hell you think of Jon, he is amazing and just because you can't see it doesn't mean i can't! He loves me and i love him why the fuck don't you all get the hell off our back and just let us be! for God sakes you are wasteing your fucking time! Your right he is not a good soul he is an amazing soul! he has been thru alot of shit and he can't really help not always being happy! i have been thru alot os shit too! and i'm sure everyone has but we have been helping eachother everyday! we are growing together! and NO i can't find better cause he is the best! So as i said before get the hell off our backs and stop worrying cause it ain't your place to be in our business! so LET IT GO!!!!
  
  Peace Out! Mrs. devils advocate (cause you really are!)
  Lauren
• kristafaus on October 12, 2004

  Jon is not wirth your time, i hear that you are an awesome girl... I am warning you against seeing Jon.. He is a loser and will not have you for a long time. If your looking for a long relationship, its not in him, he is too young and immature for a realtionship. He is not anything besides a bruised and crying soul hidden behind a hard 'immortal' shell... he thinks he can do anything.. he cannot. He cannot make aanything good of hhimself.... He says horrible stuff... He is not a good soul.. you can find better. and yea, Your poems are good. I like them You are a good poet, and also, too good for Jon.
  -The Devils 'Advocate'- (as im called by jon)
  Ta`
• Withered-Soul on September 24, 2004

  why thanx i think mine are quite good, yeah i have been thru alot so i write what i feel
  
  Yeah i know i have been thru alot like i said and i know i write about the but i don't worship them and yes i am very christian why?
• serene darkness on September 24, 2004

  from reading some of you poems you seem to be doing quite well in your writing. though your rhyme structures are a bit unflowing and smooth, it has a great feel behind your words! writing more will only improve you ability!
  
  i am curious though, in a few of your poems youve mentioned satan and the devil, etc., and then people accuse you of worshipping them..i was just wondering if you follow a Christian faith at all??
  
  keep up the great work take care!
  
  Jen
• Withered-Soul on September 22, 2004

  Well don't worry me about that me and Jon are in love and he has told me tons of times he only has friendly feelings about her i don't mean to sound mean but please stop bothering me with these kinda issues if Jon was doing anything like that he would tell me and trust me she ain't taking him from me NOONE CAN!! I don't mean to sound like a jerk or anything but please don't tell me stuff like that ok i'm sorry if i sound rude!
  Lauren
• AngelGiggle on September 22, 2004

  Hey sorry to bother you again, but I think that you should watch out for Jon and Bev. You don't have to worry about us, we aren't talking or anything. I just thought that you should know, that you have someone trying to take him. Hope everything turns out good.
• IHeartFatBoyz on September 6, 2004

  You were offended by what I said? Wow I really didn’t mean to and I just want to say to you thank god that you don’t know Bev! Seriously I didn’t mean to upset you or anything I was just really pissed at what Jon did... seriously I cant help but speak my mind when it comes to my friends being hurt cause I would do anything for them and even though we aren’t friends if Jon hurts you ever even though I don’t know you I would stick up for you but yeah I got to go hang out with Lauren
• Withered-Soul on September 6, 2004

  Hi, yeah i am glad we are doing well also! Uh...yeah i guess he does?? Well it is ok but she needs to learn not to speak what's "on her mind" to a person she doesn't know cause i was really hurt by her! Well Jon said your "benifits" were like a month and a half ago so i don't mind but i don't wanna be mean but i kinda don't like that i mean hugs and everything that's great but kissing i mean thats a lil too much! (i know i sound like a real bitch!) But on the cheek is cool to but if it's on the lips i would be hurt by that! it's ok i know you must have been upset i would be too if i was you! But please don't hate me from taking him (if that's how you feel) i am coming over again in oct. so maybe we could meet eachother? and be really good friends?Well this girl Bev i dunno her at all but she really needs to stop it obviously hurts you and me so yeah just talk to her...yeah i just sounded like one but if it wasn't it's cool...I wouldn't kill myself i just say it when i'm depressed (don't we all?) Ok i guess that is cool that you love him but...Iono you should be the one to have him ...not me i live so far away but he is my true love and if anyone took him from me i would be devistated! Ok i am sorry too! and i eccept! I would love to talk more! My s/n is angelcutielala@aol.com but i don't have iming so email me or something! yeah i don't want "bad blood" either! It's fine
  
  Much Love Lauen
  (ok!) P.S Great poems keep it up! !
  
• AngelGiggle on September 6, 2004

  Well, I'm glad that you two are doing well, he needs someone that he can stay with for a while, like, more then 5 months or what not. Sorry about Ashley, she just says whatever comes to mind, and how she feels. That's why I get along with her so well. But anyways, just benefits like kisses, hugging, cuddling, but I don't think we will anymore because of this, and thats fine, whatever he wants. Sorry to upset you, but I was upset over this whole thing, my sister made me feel better yesterday though. Bev says she is my friend but I'll be talking to her wenesday or sunday about that. I know how you feel it bothers me, but you have more of a right to be bothered. I didn't mean for it to sound like a threat, everyone sees them that way, I was just saying. You're depressed? Like Ashley said, join the club, maybe I should make a real club...Sorry sonetimes I think out loud. Don't kill yourself, no one should ever. Then again I am the biggest Hypocrite that I know... I still do love Jon, the same way that I always have, if not more then that. Sorry for all of this drama, I really am, I swear. If you would like to talk more, give me your s/n, if not, whatever, your choice. I don't want there to be "bad blood" as some say, between us, for if you two do stay together, that wouldn't be good. Again, sorry for all of this.
  Sign,
  Nikole
  (I go by nikole sometimes, it will make it less confessing with the names)
• Withered-Soul on September 6, 2004

  Go ahead roll your eyes you dunno me and dunno you! I love him with those " " things cause our love is real! And i won't loose my life cause i won't loose him! Stop talking to me ok you've hurt me enough!
• IHeartFatBoyz on September 5, 2004

  yeah your right i did roll my eyes and just because you "love" him dosent mean it's worth your life if you loose him...
• Withered-Soul on September 5, 2004

  Ok i dunno what to write right now! i am lost! i am not a mean person i dunno you girls but you seem cool! And i do give two shits! I don't know Jon as well as you guys but i fell for him just like Lauren did! I don't want to hurt anyone! I don't know wha Jon's intensions are! but ive been through hell in my life! and i can't handle this and NO i won't kill myself over a "guy" i will kill myslef over JON cause he is the love of my life and i know you'll roll your eyes at that! But i love him and i hopehe loves me and i'm sorry for anything i did to hurt you and Lauren! i am hopeing to meet you guys when i come back down i was there last Sat. but i didn't see you guys! but i am truely sorry about everything!
• IHeartFatBoyz on September 5, 2004

  OK! I am Laurens best friend I have seen what she went through with him supposedly he” loves" her or did and if he ever did love her he wouldn’t have slapped her in the face by going out and falling back in "love" and hunny if you were goanna kill yourself you wouldn’t be talking about it and you would have done it by now and let me tell you something Lauren dose not threaten people and she hasn’t said enough dose it hurt you knowing the guy you "love" has done that to you Jon i hope your reading this cause you need to he has hurt Lauren really bad more then you will ever know or even want to know and you know this yourself Jon and hunny the truth hurts face the facts and if your goanna "kill" yourself over a guy or what someone said then that would be just about the dumbest thing anyone could ever do! No I’m not calling you dumb either I have no room to judge you so don’t take that in offense Lauren was telling you all that so you wouldn’t get hurt when you found out later about it she was doing you a favor and your "going back into your depression" hunny were all depressed JOIN THE CLUB and Bev can stop? Well from what I here JON! Is going along with it but yeah I just want to tell you that the truth hurts and if you think this is hurting you try having a guy tell you he loves you and when you break up he goes out and says he loves another girl (speaking of Lauren) and this is for Jon cause we all know he’s going to read this go ahead and cut yourself I know you will I’m sick of feeling sorry for you... your bringing this onto yourself I love you with all my heart yes Jon but Lauren is my best friend in the whole world I will not sit back and see a guy hurt her like that and same with the girl your "with” now I don’t know her but you don’t do that to people you really upset me but whatever if you don’t respect my friend then I will NOT respect you oh one last thing Lauren. Lauren loves your” man" more then anything she would do anything for him and I’m not trying to make him feel different about her and go back to her cause honest to god I don’t want them back together! But yeah there is a lot of girls that wants your man and when you have a man that wants them back your going to get depressed but anyway I’m sick of writing I just wanted to step in and let you know how I feel I know you probly don’t give two shits but I do
• Withered-Soul on September 5, 2004

  Uh ...hi...I do know you , you are Jon's x-girlfriend or something like that i suppose...Things with us are great! I guess not i have always just called him Jon or Ian, Yes that i weird about our names! Well we kinda in a way i think are going out, We love eachother very much! Well what kind of "benifits"? And no i didn't know that! I am very upset now...No i don't know of Bev,Well this Bev can stop that cause he is mine! (not to sound all possesive or anything!) Well you kinda are hurting me! i had no clue about this and i love him and he loves me so i'm not trying to be mean or anything but i am going to have to talk to him about this cause i thought i was the only one! ut if these "benifits" are strong i will really be hurt! And i'm not sure but that sounds like a threat to me! you don't know me at all and i won't be like anyone else who has hurt him i am here to stay! so no need to worry! and he won't hurt me! i know it! I don't know what has happened between you and him but that is none of my business and i really don't want to know but we love eachother and if anyone does anything to change that i will never be heard from again i tried sucide before and i'll do it again! Not scaring you or anything but i love him and i should be the only one with benifits but i'll talk to him i am just really upset! And you have said enough! here i go again back into my depression! And we will last! with the grace of God we will1
  Sign
  Lauren
• AngelGiggle on September 5, 2004

  Why Hello, you don't know me but I know you. So how are things with Jon? He doesn't go by Draven anymore does he? If you look at my sight you will see that you do the same thing as I do. Weirder yet is our names. As Lauren meets Lauren, wow. Listen, if you two are going out, just to tell you, me and him are friends with benifits, I don't know if you know that, he will be pissed at me but you know, right now I'm pissed so we'll be even. Do you know of Bev? Well, she has the hots for him and flirts ALL the time, she pisses me off too. I'm not trying to be a b*tch, but I just thought that you should know these things and if you already do, good. If not, you have the right to know. And if you hurt him, you will have to deal with me, but IF he hurts you, then we can talk anytime, with that I have a lot to say. But i have said enough, if you don't want to write back, you don't have to. Again, sorry to take up your time and I just thought you have the right to know. Hope you and him last, good luck!
  Sign,
  Lauren
• Withered-Soul on September 4, 2004

  Hey girlie,
  I kno but it is cool! Awww wow that is so sad it sux loosing people to accidents! I feel so bad for her! Yup Felicia was my only best friend too! ok cool i hope we can relate! Lol ok ttyl! and no i don't have msn i have aol...sorry...Bye byez for now!
  
  Much Love Lauren
• Whit-08 on September 4, 2004

  heya chicky,
  lol we just keep writin back and forth back and forth, lol well yah my sis, it was a like a day b4 her b-day when he got killed with the car accident, he was her only best friend, i cried somewhat cuz i knew him, but i felt sorry for my sis the most!!! well, i will tell her ur sorry, lol when i get to see her, cuz she just left, lol well i'll talk to u later... oh yah do u got msn? ttyl
  LULAS!
  ~whit~
• Withered-Soul on September 4, 2004

  Heya girlie,
  Lol...I love skateboarding! I got better at it by Jon i went to his house last sat and he tought me some tings...cool i hope you do good! yeah loosing her was like loosin my sister! it sucked! very painful! tell her i'm sorry! lol i love your comments! ttyl!
  
  Much Love Lauren
• Whit-08 on September 4, 2004

  Heya girl,
  thatz pimp, i wanna learn how to skateboard, see when i go to Michigan to see my b/f, his friend is gunna teach me how to skateboard! lol YAY! lol, but ummm im sorry about ur best friend, i don't really know how to lose a best friend, but my sis, does, and i see it hurts! well i'll ttyl chicky!!! lol just another comment, dealy lol i guess ttyl chick!
  lulas!!!
  ~whit~
• Withered-Soul on September 3, 2004

  Hey Whit,
  Nm just chillen (just got done skateboarding!...lol) Wassssup with you? Your welcome you comment on mine i must return the favor you know?...lol... Well no matter where that bitch lives just fuck her up anyway...lol...she sounds alot like that one girl from my old school i hated her, her name was Felicia and my best friends name was Felicia and she died of cancer about 3 years ago..and she made fun of me and said that my friend was a bitch (and she didn't even know her) i wish i would have killed her for saying that about my dead best friend@ but i only smacked that jerk! Ok i hope you like them! i really like yours!...lol...ttyl!
  
  Much Love Lauren
• Whit-08 on September 3, 2004

  Hey Lauren,
  wassup? well lol thanks for the compliment on "I Hate Her" which really i wish i can fuck this girl up, but she betta be lucky that she lives in Kansas and i live in Missouri or she would be dead by now! lol well hey thanks for commenting on that one and well ima check out the rest of urs, lol ttyl!
  ~whitney~

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