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Hey i looked through some of your work and its really good. Your the first person on this whole poetry thing whose stuff i actually like. I love it. I've marked you as a favourite 
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new to the site and havent figured out much im writin this in hopes of having something to link me to you so i can read your poems when i get online again
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Your choice of words is incredible, where you pull them from is a place of curiosity for me. ^^ Read your myspace page (although I don't have one)...."the cameras are always rolling", genius.
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guess what? I heard the babies heart beat it is at 145
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Cheater!!!
You can't add me as a favorite! The contest is supposed to be anonymous =]].
Hahaha.
Hi. I'm anthony.
Let's be friends.
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I'm actually in Portland right now, I came down to go to Powell's books, I haven't been in so long. And the even stranger part, I'm a 20 ears old Sagittarius. What's your b-day. (hope that questions not too intrusive. Do you have a myspace?
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lol Well it's good that you're doin good. That's so you. You like things to get a little crazy. But that's okay nothin wrong with gettin a little crazy now and then I do the same thing. 
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hey how are you? I haven't heard from you in a while how have you been? By the way if you are wonderin who this is it's Heather. Just wonderin how you've been doin lately.
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I think I love you. Thats all I have to say about that. But seriously, everything on your page and your poetry is fanatastic.
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I will read those, but not in the space I'm in...it's not the best for reading/critiquing poetry. Actually, I think I should go talk to my bf, apologize, you know the drill...*sigh*
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sry ta hear that. Hey wanna read and give me your opinion on my write "Sanctuary"?
You know what's weird about this site, or at least it has been my experience so far. Most people will chat it up on this site ....when it comes to exchanging m.s.n links most are scared ta...I dunno, I find that kinda funny,lol. Hope things work mout for you
oOMAZZOo
Oh ya , I was hoping that you could read "etched imprisonment" as well...hope that's not alot ta ask,lol.
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Hi midget,lol. Hope yur doing good
oOMAZZOo
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LOOK! LOOK! We're on at the same time! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOK! I WIN! AHAHA I BEAT TIME!
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Hiya, thanks for giving me some points! those are always lovely in the eye of the beholder  Oh, and thanks for giving my piece and honorable mention...i really didn't think it was THAT good but hey, i'll get over it  Thanks again....
Madison
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One hour ago! OUR LOVE IS DWINDLING AT TIME'S HAND! WOE IS THEE, WOE IS I, WOE IS ME, WOE IS THOU!
I bet tomorrow we'll be on at the same time. <3
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ah, love, don't worry. it may not be amazing..
ive lost my muse momentarily. i wrote something last night..
and its not quite as amazing as i want it to be.
so you might have two entries of mine.
i still have two days, derr.
and yes, you must love me. because if you dont love me then you dont love yourself and im you so i wouldnt love myself and the world would end in a big pit of fiery doom-shake. *angst*
but yes, ima try to write tonight as well. sooo. DONT PUSH ME. YOU CANT PUSH THE MAGIC. AHHH. *die*
oh yeah. name. london.
ANYWAY, im going to go write. JUST FOR YOU. so you better feel spectacularly special. *cough* maybe i'll post my stupid bad write tonight.
wow, long message. anways, talk to you later.
bye! __shelly.
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Woo Hoo! I was looking into writing something for your contest, and came to your homepage to perruse some of your poetry (which I'm about to do any second now) and found the lyrics to my favorite Garbage song ... which just inspires me to listen to it again and again. I love computers! I was just excited by seeing it and thought I'd give you a woo hoo!!
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"Yes, I am alone, but then again I always was
As far back as I can tell, I think maybe it's because
Because you were never really real to begin with
I just made you up to hurt myself"
That song is fuck worthy For lack of a better word Fuck fits though <3 A devious pooka Oh my That word is going to drive me into manic giggle threats If that makes sense I meant to say fits but threats works like fuck. I can switch the words around and it's all the same. Har har har I don't make any sense har.
BUT WHAT REALLY MAKES ME SAD IS THAT...
It says you were on 2 hours ago which means I could spam your page with you reading it if I could go back in time to two hours ago and rewind my insomnia to then and then I can spam and right well ok.
So does your best pieces of work thing go from low to high or high to low cause I want to read the best of the best y'know? I should just take out all of the periods and question marks so it looks like the way I'm thinking. Nah I stopped at when I said fuck for the second time. Why? I don't know. ;-;
Right well you probably don't remember who I am because you commented the poem like months ago but I just read it now so to me it seems like you commented yesterday. <3
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dood, we joined at like the same month and year on here.
you're exactly like me. everything you are
i am as well.
stalker!
p.s. did you know that Holmes never once said "It's elementary, my dear Watson."? maybe in a television show, but never in the reading..
trippy, huh? *pelvic thrust*
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Thank you for your comments. if you can , take a look at "Sanctuary" and tell me what you think. 
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Sorry about the mistakes I made… you see English is not my native language and sometimes I do make that sort of mistakes … so thanks a lot for correcting me (seriously), I really appreciate it and also thank you for your comment and kind words …
Best wishes,
Sevati
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Thank you for all the applaus.
-Cory
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Thank you for the comment on my author's page. I'm glad you understand my desire for isolation from humanity. I am also delighted that you like The Cruxshadows and NIN.
Yay for contradictory people! You seem to pick up on subtlety well.
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What can I say? lol, I love colors, especially neon.
You're not intruding at all, I like attention, as I stated several times on this page, ha. Sorry I haven't had time (til now, obviously) to answer all of your comments. They are much appreciated, trust me.  Thanks.
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That's ironically ironic that you should appreciate appreciation. ( Sorry... I'm stupid. )
Weirdly... I have no reason to be writing you. No thought as to why your choice of colors cause me to convulse on the emotional level and vomit my techno-colored thoughts onto purple shaded lines with neon-green links to highlight them.
Sorry to impead upon your privacy... I'm just lost I guess and can't see the highway from my vantage point so high in the mountains.
Nunca olvidas que alguien esta alli en la sombra... esperando que vuelvas a respirar.
 ~Pedro~ 
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My lovely child how is you? I haven't heard from you in like forever!!!! Email me the cell number again i lost the cell phone it is on. will tell you the story about that if you email me. I love you And miss you bunches!
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I just wanted to thank you for the comment you made on "Inamorato". I haven't written in a while, and I was glad to have some input on it. I really appreciate it. Thanks again!
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Well hello...left a ton of comments on your very excellent writing....I noticed you answer comments sometimes on the same page as your poem....I think few ever go back and re read comments they have made and thus may not see your reply...
Should you wish to yell at me, I am amicus on yahoo messenger and amicusveritasb@yahoo.com
regards...
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after reading the beggining of your page, all I can say is: mwaaaaa ha ha ha....be afraid, be very afraid...ha ha, I love that, awsome.
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U R still the best!!!
Part 2 is out
ck it out!!!
K?
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Thankyou for commenting on my poetry! I will return the favor !!! U R the Best!!!!! 
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i just wanted to say thanks for everything you said on my song, "crumblin 2 pieces". peace n luv
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Nice to see someone who mentions rhythm in their introduction. I'll give your poems a look over. In response to your message to me.
I quote you
“But I DO want constructive feedback. “
I’ll try to provide some over the next few days.
I quote you
“… if you ever feel like ripping into my work in the hopes of helping me learn a) how to write better and/or  humility, I'd appreciate a critique or two from you.”
I never feel like ripping into anyone’s work.
If I can point you in the right direction and help you write better then excellent.
I cannot and do not want to teach you humility. If you want humility become a practising christian or buddhist. To be a poet you need a great deal of egotism (which you seem to have). What you need is the desire to learn and the motivation to act upon that desire.
Which contemporary poet have you read this week. What did you learn from reading it?
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 Pretty page!!!
(>'_')>
Aura
Rock on!
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Wow...I love the colors!!! I use a multicolored font for my yahoo messenger. Cool!
Lorena
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hey, thanks 4 ur comments!
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i luv ur (very colorful) author page!!! i would definetly be one of those mellow boring blah persons. lol.
im still random and weird though. happy labor day! (isnt it funny that we celebrate labor day by taking a day off?)
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Actually, I'm not really the ruling-the-world type, lol...more my brother's position, there...I'm usually the power behind the throne. 
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I feel compelled to say that you rock most completely. Thank you for posting the link to my article on your page, and for putting me on your must read list. I must inform you, however, that I have already held the office of running the world and was promoted to CEO of Existence. My previous position was passed down to someone else, but I know that he is going to be in the market for an assistant/apprentice. I can hook you up - he owes me a favor...
Let me know if you are interested. Edited on Jul 03, 5:54 p.m. because ''.
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hey kendal... i have missed ya.. i am trying to be able to see you monday or tuesday... you can call me anytime.. my number is (208)366-3046.. laterz.. love ya...
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Hey, thanks for all your comments. It always feels good to hear that someone is actually getting something out of my work; someone other than myself.
I've looked over some of your work, and I love your style. Most of your poetry has a very cool, unique flow to it that I really enjoy... kind of reminds me of a few of the things I've written. I'll come by later and critique/comment on some of your work, but for now I've got to go.
Chris
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...and i dont want to see the movie cause it will ruin the book! really i think that books that are made into movies ruin the book.
lilac
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Well, I've never read the book, lol...and don't really plan on it, because I've heard it's NOTHING like the movie--and I've been watching the movie since before I can remember. If I read the book, it would ruin it for me, and there's too much history there for that, lol.
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ive never seen the moviePrincess Bride but i love the book! i live in utah witch is pretty close to idaho...
lilac
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So little sis how long are you back for this time? I have missed you bunches!anyway i am usually on msn after midnight since i am working close now. Kisses and lots of Hugs
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Someday you may rule the world but I want my turn and will overthrow you if needs be.
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