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you are invited to the next round.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2447573
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So you went an got married Huh i wish you the best in life and GOD Bless !I JUST STOPPED BY TO SAY HELLO ! P.S. COULD THROW ME A TOPIC FOR A NEW POEM !
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Come on, post me some poetry. :3
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Wow, I haven't been to your page in a while and I was wondering about you. Just read about your marriage and pregnancy, that's all great news! Congratulations! 
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It's been awhile. i hope you have been well.
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Mykeee : welcome back on January 12, 2008
I'm still pushing your picture and poem
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3237042
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With such and incredible poem
it simply could not go unnamed
this truly; would be insane
Agoraphobia-
now that's an idea
wouldn't you agree
readers would genuinely
be intrigued
passing by thousands of poems
just waiting for one to spark
even a little hint of curiosity
Agoraphobia?
what a unique hook
I think I'll stop
and take a look.
Another perfectly acceptable route
"Bars of Psychi"
an eye catcher- no doubt
Humans are naturally curious beings
on the mental state of other things
interested in the souls of other creatures
studying their minds or merely their features
with bars of psychi to make them think
they would simply just have to click the link
Playing War with Solitar
would make a reader
want you to take them there
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Ryno on November 21, 2007
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I am currently at work, will you be online later tonight so we can write the collab?
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( Candle Light Interludes )
As the candle light caresses
very part of your anatomy .
With every beacon of light
my heart seems to keep pace .
With every rhythmic motion
of the flickering light .
As stream of nectar
runs down my inner thigh .
As I try to Inhale to keep pace
with the over whelming urge .
Of seduction which unveils
my inner most thoughts .
As the glare from your eyes
begs for more then just .
The warmth from our bodies
pressed against one another .
While our senses begin to multiply
beyond belief .
As our mind & souls intertwine
as we drift towards ecstasy .
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Just stopped by to say hello
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Congradulations to the new Teen Idol!
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Guess What im finished with you r poem
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*creeps in, sneaks up behind you, hugs you then runs off!*
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Hey, you're invited should you like to enter http://allpoetry.com/contest/2355591
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Haha- i know that song. Katherine McPhee.
It was on the radio the other day.
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I love the lyrics on your page. Did you write them? And, if not, do you know who sings them?
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Dienush : group invite on May 16, 2007
Hi. I'm trying to send this message to all my favorites. I just created this new group, and it's just supposed to be fun and help everyone come up with and express new ideas. If you're interested, I'd be glad to see you in it. http://allpoetry.com/group/show/Collaboration
Thanks and have a nice day.
~Diana
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"Here and now I lay the creativity pass,
to save me from what was written last.
May this add 10 points to my score,
so that the air of this challenge:
I will continue to soar!!"
Congrats on your wonderful job this week!! I wish you the best!
Always,
Mel
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beautiful background page.
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omg I LOVE LOVE LOVE your name...it's wicked awesome. Great name..one of my favorite names on AP!!!
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Thanks for bronze!
I look forward to next round.
peace to all ~flight
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Pasted the wrong thing. LOL
Let's close our eyes and walk across the sky (x4)
Whatever comes don't lead apart from you
Whatever happens been so close to you
All I dream is to stay and dream
All I want is to say I'm fake
All I need is that you believe
All the rain will fall to the sea
Let's close our eyes and walk across the sky
What will you say as the rain fills up your mind
And whatever you do see that rain fall down
What will you say as the rain fills up your mind
And whatever you do see that rain fall down
The feel of you surrounds me tonight
Like the dawn you bring light to my dark night
All I dream is to stay and dream
All I want is to say I'm fake
All I need is that you to believe
All the rain will fall to the sea
Let's close our eyes and walk across the sky
What will you say as the rain fills up your mind
And whatever you do see that rain fall down
What will you say as the rain fills up your mind
And whatever you do see that rain fall down
(Rain by Brainbug)
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Softly my heartbeat sings,
seeking solace and love-
such simple joys it brings,
softly my heartbeat sings;
(Rain by Brainbug.
Just being random.  I love trance.)
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Just thought I'd check in. I'm sorry you missed the last round of the contest. Hope life is treating you ok.
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The FUCK poem on your profile is just.. wow! Great job girl! Though you know you can talk to me. Love you!
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man where did u get that shit?
Fuck It
Fuck love, Fuck life
Fuck happiness, it never survives
It's over, I'm done
Are you happy, you won
Fuck it, I give
Not a damn reason for me to live
Fuck optimism, I refuse to smile
While I'm dying inside all the while
Fuck my heart, it always breaks
There is no more of me to take
I try and I try, all in vain
I'm only left in the shadows of pain
I give my heart, I give my all
How much further can I possibly fall
Chained and alone in all my fears
Left to drown in a million tears
Fuck honesty, it's never really there
Fuck everyone who claims to care
Fuck regrets, fuck mistakes
How many more can I possibly make
Fuck this time, fuck this place
Memories and stress always in my face
Fuck home, and fuck my phone
Lectures and judgement, never leave me alone
Fuck promises and fuck dreams
What in the hell do they even mean
Taken for granted, and toyed with
Fuck confusion, Fuck all this shit
Fuck comfort, and fuck you
None of it was ever true
Fuck this poem, fuck this rhyme
It's just some more wasted time
Another worthless attempt to escape
As life chokes me- a noose of pain
Fuck this world, fuck the games
A misused shell, buried in the remains
So Fuck love, Fuck life
Fuck happiness, it never survives
It's over, I'm done
Are you happy, you won
Fuck it, I give
Not a damn reason for me to live
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Hey, I'm sorry everything is going so wrong for you. But I have to say that the poem featured on your page is amazing! I really like it, I must say. And I could say that I understand, but I doubt you'd believe. It is only to an extent anyway, but at least you're not alone. The world really isn't that great and that's the reason I am the way I am. Optimism never got me anywhere, but other people got me optimism. I just hope things look up for you. If you ever want to talk, I'm here.
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Glad you fixed your page honey, I hate to see you down. Please smile
You must be forgetting all the gifts God gave you at birth.
If you ever want to talk, you need only ask.
Also, I pray each night at 2:00am
You can join me, it`s free
I wish you well
Lovely Poet
Rick
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Thank you so, so, so, so, much for that comment! You seem like a very amazing writer yourself!
~Quinn~
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is this a song cause iI feel it is it has anice ring to it
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Very glad you've made links to the poems you wrote for the champion  I couldn't participate due to too much work, but as I'm one of the jury-members,I'm fullfilling my duty
going off to read yours now 
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Hi Amy just popped in to tell you that i have changed my name so as from now i am no longer (tsol) but now to be Lady Ireland. so if you need to change it on your contest page go ahead. god bless xxxx Edited on Oct 31, 10:22 p.m. because ''.
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please check this out. you might find it valuable
here is something I found to be very interresting:www.firstwriter.com/writing_tips/
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Hello Frankfort... I am from Lafayette! I too really enjoy Nickleback and Far Away is one of (they have a few) their best! I am also a big country fan and love to write on this site. I look forward to checking out some of your works... feel free to do the same!
GO COLTS!!!!
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Hola! Como Estas? smiles I speak some Spanish.. I wouldn't say I am extremely great at it.. I just took the class for 3 years so I do ok. I Aced the class though. I would gladly help you with what I can.
"Far Away" Yes, I absolutely adore that song. Your guy has good taste I would say. Anyway we should chat sometime, and I will go check your page out now.
Amy
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Please give my place to someone elce in your contest. I will never get to this. Forgive me, Rick
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hey i saw that u speak spanish and im in spanish 1 and i would love some help/practice. then i saw u have that song that my guy loves so i was like i like this person.
hi!!!

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whats up there arent you supose to be at work
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smiles sweetly well you have a right to feel honored because you are awsome.. but I did give Tyler props to just himself too.. Yeh my page is long.. I am such a rambler. I have never had a problem with communication.. but to be honest I always have a hard time describing myself so it took me awhile on this page.
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I just read your whole author page before giving that reply  I don't think there may have been a thing you left out about desribing yourself.And thanks for the great words  You din't give Tyler any wonderful words only his contests  So thats an honour!it was a pleasure reading your page and it's the first long author page that I read and liked.Others (Mine included)just seem boring.Best of luck 
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