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  • winterbound. on May 22
    you are invited to the next round.
    http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2447573
  • Isaac Bailey : ITS your BOooyeee ! on April 24
    So you went an got married Huh i wish you the best in life and GOD Bless !I JUST STOPPED BY TO SAY HELLO ! P.S. COULD THROW ME A TOPIC FOR A NEW POEM !
  • deadcolor dreams on April 1
    Come on, post me some poetry. :3
  • Alilly on January 22
  • Dienush on May 29, 2008
    Wow, I haven't been to your page in a while and I was wondering about you. Just read about your marriage and pregnancy, that's all great news! Congratulations!
  • deadcolor dreams on March 30, 2008
    It's been awhile. i hope you have been well.
  • Mykeee : welcome back on January 12, 2008
    I'm still pushing your picture and poem

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/3237042
  • Whispered Devotions on December 27, 2007
    With such and incredible poem
    it simply could not go unnamed
    this truly; would be insane

    Agoraphobia-
    now that's an idea
    wouldn't you agree
    readers would genuinely
    be intrigued

    passing by thousands of poems
    just waiting for one to spark
    even a little hint of curiosity

    Agoraphobia?
    what a unique hook
    I think I'll stop
    and take a look.

    Another perfectly acceptable route
    "Bars of Psychi"
    an eye catcher- no doubt

    Humans are naturally curious beings
    on the mental state of other things
    interested in the souls of other creatures
    studying their minds or merely their features

    with bars of psychi to make them think
    they would simply just have to click the link

    Playing War with Solitar
    would make a reader
    want you to take them there
  • Celticmoon on December 24, 2007
  • Frodofan on December 24, 2007
  • Ryno on November 21, 2007
    AMY!!!!!!!!!!?
  • Airborne Ed on September 4, 2007
    I am currently at work, will you be online later tonight so we can write the collab?
  • Isaac Bailey on August 22, 2007
    ( Candle Light Interludes )
    As the candle light caresses
    very part of your anatomy .

    With every beacon of light
    my heart seems to keep pace .

    With every rhythmic motion
    of the flickering light .

    As stream of nectar
    runs down my inner thigh .

    As I try to Inhale to keep pace
    with the over whelming urge .

    Of seduction which unveils
    my inner most thoughts .

    As the glare from your eyes
    begs for more then just .

    The warmth from our bodies
    pressed against one another .

    While our senses begin to multiply
    beyond belief .

    As our mind & souls intertwine
    as we drift towards ecstasy .
  • Celticmoon on August 19, 2007
  • Isaac Bailey on August 18, 2007
    Just stopped by to say hello
  • Ryno on August 11, 2007
    Congradulations to the new Teen Idol!
  • Isaac Bailey on July 13, 2007
    Guess What im finished with you r poem
  • Kristen Corpse on June 28, 2007
    *creeps in, sneaks up behind you, hugs you then runs off!*
  • Dienush on June 25, 2007
    Hey, you're invited should you like to enter http://allpoetry.com/contest/2355591
  • Tangled Angle on June 18, 2007
    Haha- i know that song. Katherine McPhee.
    It was on the radio the other day.
  • Dienush on June 12, 2007
    I love the lyrics on your page. Did you write them? And, if not, do you know who sings them?
  • Dienush : group invite on May 16, 2007
    Hi. I'm trying to send this message to all my favorites. I just created this new group, and it's just supposed to be fun and help everyone come up with and express new ideas. If you're interested, I'd be glad to see you in it. http://allpoetry.com/group/show/Collaboration
    Thanks and have a nice day.

    ~Diana
  • Whispered Devotions on May 1, 2007
    "Here and now I lay the creativity pass,
    to save me from what was written last.
    May this add 10 points to my score,
    so that the air of this challenge:
    I will continue to soar!!"


    Congrats on your wonderful job this week!! I wish you the best!
    Always,
    Mel
  • Summer Dawn on April 26, 2007
    beautiful background page.
  • Kari on March 16, 2007
    omg I LOVE LOVE LOVE your name...it's wicked awesome. Great name..one of my favorite names on AP!!!
  • flight on March 7, 2007
    Thanks for bronze!
    I look forward to next round.

    peace to all ~flight
  • I write art on February 22, 2007
    Plenty of trophies
  • deadcolor dreams : Oops.. on February 7, 2007
    Pasted the wrong thing. LOL

    Let's close our eyes and walk across the sky (x4)

    Whatever comes don't lead apart from you
    Whatever happens been so close to you
    All I dream is to stay and dream
    All I want is to say I'm fake
    All I need is that you believe
    All the rain will fall to the sea

    Let's close our eyes and walk across the sky

    What will you say as the rain fills up your mind
    And whatever you do see that rain fall down
    What will you say as the rain fills up your mind
    And whatever you do see that rain fall down

    The feel of you surrounds me tonight
    Like the dawn you bring light to my dark night
    All I dream is to stay and dream
    All I want is to say I'm fake
    All I need is that you to believe
    All the rain will fall to the sea

    Let's close our eyes and walk across the sky

    What will you say as the rain fills up your mind
    And whatever you do see that rain fall down
    What will you say as the rain fills up your mind
    And whatever you do see that rain fall down

    (Rain by Brainbug)
  • deadcolor dreams : I love this song. lol on February 7, 2007

    Softly my heartbeat sings,
    seeking solace and love-
    such simple joys it brings,
    softly my heartbeat sings;


    (Rain by Brainbug.
    Just being random. I love trance.)

  • Frodofan on January 21, 2007
    Just thought I'd check in. I'm sorry you missed the last round of the contest. Hope life is treating you ok.
  • Obsidian Words : Damn Girl on December 20, 2006
    The FUCK poem on your profile is just.. wow! Great job girl! Though you know you can talk to me. Love you!
  • BlackBloodyRose : did on December 13, 2006
    man where did u get that shit?

    Fuck It
    Fuck love, Fuck life
    Fuck happiness, it never survives
    It's over, I'm done
    Are you happy, you won
    Fuck it, I give
    Not a damn reason for me to live

    Fuck optimism, I refuse to smile
    While I'm dying inside all the while
    Fuck my heart, it always breaks
    There is no more of me to take
    I try and I try, all in vain
    I'm only left in the shadows of pain

    I give my heart, I give my all
    How much further can I possibly fall
    Chained and alone in all my fears
    Left to drown in a million tears
    Fuck honesty, it's never really there
    Fuck everyone who claims to care

    Fuck regrets, fuck mistakes
    How many more can I possibly make
    Fuck this time, fuck this place
    Memories and stress always in my face
    Fuck home, and fuck my phone
    Lectures and judgement, never leave me alone

    Fuck promises and fuck dreams
    What in the hell do they even mean
    Taken for granted, and toyed with
    Fuck confusion, Fuck all this shit
    Fuck comfort, and fuck you
    None of it was ever true

    Fuck this poem, fuck this rhyme
    It's just some more wasted time
    Another worthless attempt to escape
    As life chokes me- a noose of pain
    Fuck this world, fuck the games
    A misused shell, buried in the remains

    So Fuck love, Fuck life
    Fuck happiness, it never survives
    It's over, I'm done
    Are you happy, you won
    Fuck it, I give
    Not a damn reason for me to live
  • Frodofan : Hey on November 30, 2006
    Hey, I'm sorry everything is going so wrong for you. But I have to say that the poem featured on your page is amazing! I really like it, I must say. And I could say that I understand, but I doubt you'd believe. It is only to an extent anyway, but at least you're not alone. The world really isn't that great and that's the reason I am the way I am. Optimism never got me anywhere, but other people got me optimism. I just hope things look up for you. If you ever want to talk, I'm here.
  • Endeavor on November 15, 2006
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    For my best friend`s Grand Daughter

    allpoetry.com/Poem/2333089

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  • Endeavor on November 15, 2006
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    Glad you fixed your page honey, I hate to see you down. Please smile

    You must be forgetting all the gifts God gave you at birth.

    If you ever want to talk, you need only ask.

    Also, I pray each night at 2:00am

    You can join me, it`s free

    I wish you well

    Lovely Poet

    Rick

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  • BreatheNoMore on November 9, 2006
    Thank you so, so, so, so, much for that comment! You seem like a very amazing writer yourself!

    ~Quinn~
  • uziphiel on November 7, 2006
    is this a song cause iI feel it is it has anice ring to it
  • leander on November 5, 2006
    Very glad you've made links to the poems you wrote for the champion I couldn't participate due to too much work, but as I'm one of the jury-members,I'm fullfilling my duty

    going off to read yours now
  • Lady Ireland on October 31, 2006
    Hi Amy just popped in to tell you that i have changed my name so as from now i am no longer (tsol) but now to be Lady Ireland. so if you need to change it on your contest page go ahead. god bless xxxx
    Edited on Oct 31, 10:22 p.m. because ''.
  • Summer Dawn on October 25, 2006
    please check this out. you might find it valuable
    here is something I found to be very interresting:www.firstwriter.com/writing_tips/
  • Isaac Bailey on October 19, 2006
    whats up devotion
  • Nicole Cudworth on October 15, 2006
    Hello Frankfort... I am from Lafayette! I too really enjoy Nickleback and Far Away is one of (they have a few) their best! I am also a big country fan and love to write on this site. I look forward to checking out some of your works... feel free to do the same!

    GO COLTS!!!!
  • Whispered Devotions on October 11, 2006
    Hola! Como Estas? smiles I speak some Spanish.. I wouldn't say I am extremely great at it.. I just took the class for 3 years so I do ok. I Aced the class though. I would gladly help you with what I can.

    "Far Away" Yes, I absolutely adore that song. Your guy has good taste I would say. Anyway we should chat sometime, and I will go check your page out now.


    Amy
  • Endeavor on October 10, 2006
    Please give my place to someone elce in your contest. I will never get to this. Forgive me, Rick
  • flaed on October 9, 2006
    hey i saw that u speak spanish and im in spanish 1 and i would love some help/practice. then i saw u have that song that my guy loves so i was like i like this person.
    hi!!!
  • Isaac Bailey on October 9, 2006
    whats up there arent you supose to be at work
  • deadcolor dreams on October 1, 2006
    Your page is awesome. ^^
  • Whispered Devotions on September 29, 2006
    smiles sweetly well you have a right to feel honored because you are awsome.. but I did give Tyler props to just himself too.. Yeh my page is long.. I am such a rambler. I have never had a problem with communication.. but to be honest I always have a hard time describing myself so it took me awhile on this page.
  • wakingdevil on September 29, 2006
    I just read your whole author page before giving that reply I don't think there may have been a thing you left out about desribing yourself.And thanks for the great words You din't give Tyler any wonderful words only his contests So thats an honour!it was a pleasure reading your page and it's the first long author page that I read and liked.Others (Mine included)just seem boring.Best of luck
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