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  • ViolentSerenity : Sweet Dreams By Luna-Midnight on November 6
    Drifting away
    minds release
    conciousness leaves
    humanity sleeps

    Listen to minds
    whispering away
    sweet nothings again
    to comfort her heart.
  • ViolentSerenity : one of the most amazing poems I've ever read by one of my favorite AP authors MindOverMatter on August 28
    My Fire.
    Captivating words you bring,
    you're everything I'm not.
    Taking sudden hold of me
    Is the rush I once forgot.

    You've placed a lock around my soul,
    a flutter in my heart.
    Little nothings down below
    that rip it all apart.

    To painful of a phrase that I can't
    bring myself to say.
    Feening for the way and how,
    you take my breath away.

    I see the sparkle in your eyes
    that many overlook.
    A story now unfolding there
    like pages from a book.

    The truest friend I've ever had,
    my diary, my fire.
    Setting flame to all I am,
    this uncommon desire.

    To be there in your darkest days
    a place where we can be.
    Lost inside the songs that play,
    the love of you and me.
  • poeticcaresses : Take her pain on November 1, 2008
    I just don't know what to say
    To alleviate her pain
    Inside wasting away
    All I do just seems in vain

    I see and feel her tears
    Way too many for her years
    But there's nothing I can do
    To show my thoughts are true

    When she hurts it makes me ache
    All her pain I want to take
    But I can't take back the years
    That have caused her pain and tears

    The mistakes that I have made
    That have left her, oh so jaded
    Now she trusts nothing I say
    Because we both have lost our way

    I just want to hold her close
    Eliminate the ghosts
    That haunt her day and night
    And contribute to her strife

    She can't even see the love
    That I hold for her above
    My own life and all else here
    Please, God, take her pain and fear

    Author notes

    For my beautiful daughter, Mariah, how I wish I could take all her pain.
  • ViolentSerenity : by passionatepromise on October 10, 2008
    Passionate flames engulf our bed
    as I lay teasingly
    Red rose petals are widely spread
    around me pleasingly
    You fuel my fire with your warm hand
    and I jump command
    You fuel my fire
    You fuel my fire
    I will follow every demand


    Passionate flames engulf our bed
    as mouth to mouth we link
    Hands on waist, no other words said
    and in the bed you sink
    On top of me you gently slide
    between two breasts you hide
    On top of me
    On top of me
    Please love, guide yourself, deep inside


    Passionate flames engulf our bed
    and with each thrust I moan
    With such heat, all my needs are fed
    by the best ever known
    My sweet lover, I love you so
    and on my knees I'll go
    My sweet lover
    My sweet lover
    Upon silk sheets our passions flow


  • ViolentSerenity : by one of the AP memebers effin amazing on September 19, 2008
    Played By Default
    The chase through life
    And its winding roads
    Bend as if turning the wrong way.
    I don't know whether I should turn back
    Or whether I should stay.
    This place is New York without people
    Like a bird without a nest.
    Turning, just staring, unable to hault
    A chase without running,
    Played by default.
  • ViolentSerenity : by walking oxymoron on September 18, 2008
    Oblivious.
    You're beautiful,
    But you don't know it...
    You're genuine,
    Afraid to show it.
    You're strong,
    But don't work through it...
    You're free,
    But you don't do it!

    You're a friend,
    And you need it,
    You're loved,
    But don't believe it.
    You're wanted,
    But don't know it...

    I will always show it.



  • ViolentSerenity : Predator (poem by another AP poet that saddly i can relate to) on September 13, 2008



    I detect your intent, it's there in your scent,
    carnal boldness I used to resent.
    If I give my consent, we'll begin our ascent
    on this flight I've fought long to prevent.



    The black hole in your soul might just swallow me whole,
    it's a force far beyond my control.
    Time is taking it's toll, you are nearing your goal,
    my inner child's getting hard to console.



    Dark are the days as my innocence frays,
    and my whitewashed enamel decays.
    Locked in your gaze, black and white become grays,
    as one touch sets my future ablaze.

  • poeticcaresses : Hello baby on August 28, 2008
    Hello, my beautiful daughter. You are becoming quite the great writer. I'm so happy that you are following in this creative direction. I have a feeling that you are going to outwrite me in no time! I love you!
  • ViolentSerenity : i got this by one of my faviorite writers bloodfader off of AP on August 23, 2008
    Safety Trust
    Take my heart in the plam of your hand
    Please don't hurt it among strangers land
    I'm trusting you- its been smashed before
    Thrown with force and trampled into the floor
    The pain never left me, just manifested
    Into a breath that left me cold and empty chested
    However, the past can never be changed
    Yet the future a building block for the estranged

  • ViolentSerenity : YAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! on July 10, 2008
    I JUST GOTTTTTT AA NNNEEEEEEEWWWWWW PHHHHHOOOOONNNNEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • ViolentSerenity : thankyou athena and nathan on March 31, 2008
    i love you sissy and as for you my love best of luck on the poetry vladimir
    truely urs poetic lover
  • vladimir-black : hey love on March 31, 2008
    great profile.
  • XxBrokenheartgurlxX : IDK on December 2, 2007
    because she has a lot of emotions and she isn't afraid to show the world how she feels.
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