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almostthesea on February 4, 2008hi dave,
how ya been these days?
still at honokaa high? are the kids gettin' any better? i'm sure none of them are as AWESOME as i was ;p
just kidding,
see you around sometime,
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passionate-poet : oi on October 10, 2007how ya been whats new hun?
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Uncle on September 10, 2006doing okay, but not writing much that would pass for poetry or such. thanks for you interest in a poem that I've always loved but think i need to change in some way. dave
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Naughtygrlred on September 1, 2006I just stopped int o read what is again...how are u?
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passionate-poet on August 4, 2006thanks for the comment on "fuck me" im glad that you liked it.. it did take me awhile to get what i wanted out but i didnt want to loose any of the readers by turning lust to passion. keeping it bare and strictly lust took me awhile although i think i may have lost it in the last couple lines lol i may change that later down the line... im glad that you liked it thank you so much for the compliment as well! ~hugs~
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passionate-poet on June 30, 2006ty for the comment on my poem!
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snipple on June 23, 2006Yeah, I've sort of been writing, but not much. Ian's going to talk to my mommy about me coming back early. I can't stand it here. I feel like I'm just wasting away; just waiting for the days to go by. And that's what I'm doing. I get up in the morning and just lie there staring at the ceiling for a couple of hours... Then I get up and I'm on the computer as much as possible talking to friends back in Hawai'i. When I have to get off the computer, I'm lying on the bed again just listening to random CD's. I'm going crazy, but I know that if I ask to go back early my granny will get upset with me.... This really sucks!
Thanks for letting me know that I passed because I haven't gotten my report card yet and I've been wondering about that. Anywho, you should check out Ian's poetry site. I got him to join up. So far all he's posted are the things he wrote for me, but he'll put up some other stuff when he finds it. His poetry name is Leprechaunsgomoo I hope you like his stuff....
-Mea -
Red Red Rose on February 9, 2006Wish I had known that when I was younger!LOL
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Uncle on February 9, 2006Yes, and hell yes.
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Red Red Rose on February 9, 2006I think Leonard Cohen is the most talented lyricst there is! Your profile is VERY interesting and mysterious. Thank you for commentiing on my poem! Do women REALLY have THAT much power???
Linda
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snipple on February 8, 2006Hey i wrote a new poem today about when i stayed at Ian's house last friday. I think it's not that great but it's decent. i wrote it when i was waiting for my mommy to pick me up from school. Does Ian's mommy really make it sound like I'm the first girl he's every been serious about? He did tell me I'm the first girl he's ever said "I love you" to. On valentine's day we're gonna go out to eat but he's not telling me where because it's a suprise. he's even gonna blind fold me and everything! He's so sweet. I really love him...
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Uncle on January 18, 2006You about got the word 'fuck' down, let me help you f-u-c-k, and if you want to add ing, well go ahead, no need to drop any letters.
There was a compliment and honest interest in your writing given by me, besides the comment of learn to fucking spell.
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axthousandxtears on January 9, 2006fukkkkkkkkkk off learn to spell phawwwww
fukin chump -
Uncle on December 7, 2005okay, yes
Good to hear your happiness in this over Chris's recovery, though I heard it in person, and for sure again, yes, it sounds like he's coming around. -
snipple on December 3, 2005Oh my god. You will not believe it...CHRIS OPENED HIS EYES YESTERDAY MORNING!!! And I'm getting back into my work routine on Monday! Now I know for sure that he's going to make it. Thank you for the gifts. I've started actually using the book. I mainly write about Chris. Do you think he'll be home by Christmas. Please say "yes".
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Kal-k on October 28, 2005website ready to be viewed...
just doing finishing touches...
www.geocities.com/chrishna21/index.htm
Kal-k
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babyalah on October 21, 2005hay i don't know who you are but you left a nasty message on my poem back off! im not in 9th gade and i think that i am to old to be. plus i live in the uk and ur usa. i think you owe me a sorry
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almostthesea on February 24, 2005Hey, Dave. Where were ya today? Strolling along on the beach in the warm sun, I suppose?
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almostthesea on January 9, 2005once i stole $1000 worth of THINGS. and also, i flew to new york by flapping my arms like a penguin would, and penguin can't fly. when i reached new york, i met a russian man with long hair and a violin. he played it and i fell in love with the devil. i am in love with the devil. i have inversed my moral playground. fuck morality. then i came back home and had a cigarette with lennon in the tall, grassy fields next to my house, in an octopus's garden, in the shade, with elephants and king arthur's beautiful knights. i like europeans.
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almostthesea on October 17, 2004It's not much of a guess, they probably know who did it. But I am not sure. I'm feeling sedated; here's a poem.
December 30
At 1:30 in the morning a fart
smells like a marriage between
an avocado and a fish head.
I have to get out of bed
to write this down without
my glasses on.
- Brautigan
I don't like anything right now. What are you again? Counselor? Schedule-changer-person? 504-related? All three? I've missed a lot of classes. I keep deleting everything I say. Guess I'm undecided of what kind of content will go into this comment. Probably none. I'll stop now. Good morrow. -
Naughtygrlred on October 6, 2004Intresting things you bow to
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almostthesea on October 5, 2004Haha, Britney Spears, very funny.
PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE NOT SERIOUS. I SAID JOHN LENNON, MAN. DON'T FUCK WITH ME.
Okay, good, you're just fucking with me. I hope. That's so not cool.
Okay, since I'm sure you're just joking... thanks for picking that up for me. =]!
As for this little site, I'll keep it a secret for sure. If you ever feel threatened by distrust, feel free to blackmail me. And I will sure do the same! I swear on my little finger, lest it be cut off if I break the promise. Hell, make that all my fingers, why not.
I think I already read most of your stuff. It's the epic stories I have yet to explore, of course. Then again, I wasn't in a very thinking mood while I read a couple of them (that were very interesting and creative, I might add) so I might have to reread. I'll try to comment as well, but I'm not a very avid commenter (though I used to be, trust me) these days. Comments from me are becoming scarce and rare. Lucky you.
Don't worry, I think you're a cool dude Mr....Dave.
I'm stopping by your office first thing TO-fucking-MORROW. How much did it end up being? I hope it wasn't over $80. Congratulations on successfully finding Byrd's.
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Uncle on October 4, 2004This works both ways, so thanks for bringing it up. I promise to not even mention that you write on a poetry/story site on the web. So swear I. Do the same. Yes you do sound threatening, remembering that point will help keep me faithful to my oath. Also don't read all my stuff as if it were confessional on my part. The confessional spill your guts po-po seems to be a style that infects and bloats this site. I got your Britney Spears blue box anthology you requested.
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Touchof1der on June 30, 2004I just have to say that your style of writing is one that I greatly admire and enjoy. I am so pleased that my friend, touchof1der, steered me towards your site. I plan on visitng again when I don't have to rush off to work. Your stories rock man and that's no bullshit!
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Cocoa Bubbles on June 20, 2004*cries uncle*
Sorry, I couldn't help but be corny for a minute cuz well...being corny is what SDs do best -
stephanie sunshine on June 19, 2004oops. for a minute there, i confused leonard with leonard nemoy. isn't the 2nd dr spock? sorry if i've muddled up your page with nonsense. i just came here and wasn't in the mood for either a story or erotica. but maybe some other time. i just have this habit of always leaving a mark.
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poltroon on June 7, 2004i'm kind of shell shocked by your writing!
it's not often that i find a writer on this forum that grips my interest as honestly as you have!
bravo uncle!
i shall return at a later date to comment on your art, in the meantime i'll try to catch my breath and regain strength in my knees! -
Redstormy on June 7, 2004Uncle I like Leonard Cohen's music and poetry as well.
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rufina caraid on May 17, 2004Hello Uncle,
Welcome to Allpoetry
Please take the time to read this message, it contains important information for you, the new AP member.
This is the site where you can nurture your own writing talent by reading other poets work, perhaps entering challenges which may be a new style of poetry for you or just by experimenting with new forms.
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Please carefully read the criteria as any poems that do not comply cannot be considered
We are an interactive site and thrive on comments made to others which in turn bring viewers to your own work, many lasting friendships have been forged on Allpoetry this way, simply by commenting on four poems for each one you post really does pay dividends.
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