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  • LollyDaPoet on August 17, 2004
    Linkin park!! ROCK!! I love ur stuff!!
  • WildFireBird on March 8, 2004
    Thank you so much for reading my work, as I read yours constantly. A friend of mine always tells me "If you can't be the poet, then be the poem"

    You do both beautifully
  • labelled on February 28, 2004
    Thanks for commenting on "Sweet Divinity." I really am glad you enjoyed it and that you thought it was good. I've never really written that way before and was kind of experimenting with the style. Thanks!

    Trigun is a wonderful anime! Are you into any others? Disturbed rocks!! Oh yes, and I really do like your motto.
  • on February 27, 2004
    I have read a little of your material and liked it but have not gotten a chance to comment on it. No sweat though i like my dark side a bit more than my light so excuse me while i do a curtain call. (Whoosh) Hey, Shaudi is my name. I love the emotion and blood (in the sense of effort) you put into each poem. Making it vivid to the immagination and tainted to my soul.

    Thanks again,
    Shaudi BSG
  • omega hate on February 23, 2004
    thankx, and hell yeah for the headbangers that love disturbed!

    reiche
  • Ripped Vaynez on January 1, 2004
    hey...your stuff is really emotional and powerful. i enjoyed reading them...plus i can relate to it alot. gr8 stuff here...hope to see more soon!!

    xoxo
    -amber

    HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
  • finding myself 84 on November 22, 2003
    Hey it's Sonya *crazyangel34* just letting you know I changed my name! *sonya*
  • Bellissimo Volpe on August 18, 2003
    Ok well I've critiqued all your poems in some od way shape or form. You really need to back away from the fuzzy blue elf. Also away from a certain blonde, lol. Yay I am signing your authour page...

    'I am a but a shadow of what I was,
    Of what I want to be,
    A tormented demon in the eyes of some,
    A tormented angel in the eyes of few.

    What pity it is that the world cannot see,
    Beyond the shallow mask of physical appearence,
    Just like we breath we all shall die,
    But time my friend is not on my side.

    I am a tormented angel,
    Lost in the storm of life,
    A tormented angel,
    With no place to call home,
    A tormented angel,
    With a tormented soul,
    I wonder what life could be like.

    I look at the sun,
    Then the beautiful earth,
    Then the monstrosity that humans have created,
    Yet I am a tormented angel,
    With out one that holds me close,
    I wonder if anyone can see,
    Beyond the physical mask,
    And into my lonely soul.

    I am a tormented angel,
    I stand alone,
    A tormented angel,
    With out a home,
    A tormented angel,
    Without wings,
    A tormented angel,
    Waiting to be seen.'

    Ok there is my combo of Kurt and you through my eyes using your screen name. Weird no?

    ~Anika, The Gothic Blood Rose

    'We are life, We are death, We are human, We are animal, We are light, and darkness.'
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