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TinkyTheGreat on February 15, 2006

Dear Lord. I think it's been at LEAST half a year since I last logged into Allpoetry. Well, Honestly, in reply to your comment from December, I have never heard of such a story.

I'm still active on Xanga and deviantart. www.xanga.com/tinkythegreat and www.tinkythegreat.deviantart.com
TinkyTheGreat on June 27, 2005

I have found you...at last.

And I guess you still write poetry. I guess I stopped. I don't feel like pinning up my emotions into a pretty little bottle or box for people to annalize and say "Ohhh, that's pretty!" and all that bull that they tell every other peom that even seems REMOTELY worth reading.
Edited on Jun 27, 1:57 because ''.
MySecretDeath on June 19, 2005

Thanks for the comments on the poems. As for Sadistic Comfort...that was more about a friend than me.
kay1719 on February 3, 2005

I re-read my poem "Broken Angel", and no it doesnt make me dizzy, and yes there were a few mistakes. But they are fixed, but thanks for your opinion.
Edited on Feb 03, 9:15 p.m. because ''.
CatastropheWaitress on January 22, 2005

Hey Tjoonz, it's been awhile. Thank you for the recent comments on my poems. No they're not bitchy... I was looking for comments like that. I'm not sure exactly how I can make it make more sense and still get my point across...but ah oh well.
Tjoonz on January 22, 2005

what? what are you talking about?
TinkyTheGreat on January 19, 2005

I understand. AllPoetry has become rather boring. I can tell you feel the same way just from your entries. All contests now. lol I think I'll be quiting AP soon enough. Though I have already basically quit, I don't think I'll be checking anymore. Well, I guess it was a goodbye. So long. Farewell.
Irishfreckles87 on January 17, 2005

HAHAhAHA You found my comments! so there is a reason for that notes page in the back of that program! lol im glad you liked it
no I bite my thumb at you sir!
SangLune on January 16, 2005

QUIT MESSING AROUND WITH MY STORY
TinkyTheGreat on December 27, 2004

Now I have to ask you just one question...... Did YOU quit AP?
Mephitic ID Synergy on December 17, 2004

Sorry about the delay on the Adam Fell series. I am finished with what should be my final draft now, so I will post the whole thing. I wish you happy reading!

Mike
Cheesy Poof on December 7, 2004

I spelled it like dat cause I wanted to be differant and not to be too bored...but to bored
~Eric~
CatastropheWaitress on December 5, 2004

Heck, I'd pick that hair up with my fingers!
Mephitic ID Synergy on December 1, 2004

Hello. I am writing in response to your comments on Adam Fell chapter 1. I believe many of your questions may be cleared up by further chapters. I had no intention of making people wait between chapters when I wrote the story, but I haven't posted all of them because the story is not polished yet and I am in debate about what exactly to do with it. The second chapter is posted if you would like to read it, however. Thank you for reading.

Mike
TinkyTheGreat on November 29, 2004

No, I haven't stopped AP. I've just lost my inspiration, that's all. It'll come, but I'd rather let IT come to me. I don't like writing forced poems. Don't worry, vacation is now over, and that means that there will once again be people. As that is usually what my poems are about. Well, I have to go to school now. Talk to you later.
CatastropheWaitress on November 27, 2004

Oh, and good luck on the SAT's. Have you taken a practice SAT II? If you're a writer, which you are, you'll do fine. I took a practice one and I got 70% correct, not too bad I guess for a freshman with no Algebra II or Geometry. But anyway, I'm sure you'll do awesomely well.
CatastropheWaitress on November 27, 2004

Haha, you really think my author page made u smell the coffee? Awesome! Are you a big coffee drinker? I like THIS author page, the little name art in the background is very creative, I haven't seen that before Thank you for commenting on my poems.
Exo on November 26, 2004

wow that was interesting! pretty cool..well since I don;t know how to pernounce it I'll have to call you TJ as well

-nicci
Tjoonz on November 26, 2004

well, my korean name is taijoo. so the T and the J is from that. and i just threw in the last two Os of Taijoo. so its Tjoo. and then i decided to make is spiffy. thus tjoonz! tada.. and some of my friends call me TJ for short. or benny. (my baptismal name is Benedict). there. thats my name's history in a nutshell
Exo on November 26, 2004

Out of curiosity-what does your username-Tjoonz mean? and i like your background its cool!

-nicci
TinkyTheGreat on November 26, 2004

:sigh: I don't know.. I'm confused right now.
SERblueyes on November 26, 2004

my height?? I am 5'7 1/2....prolly taller now. maybe around 5'9
Tjoonz on November 26, 2004

what do you mean i'm not real anymore?
SERblueyes on November 25, 2004

enjoy
SERblueyes on November 24, 2004

Hey...Thanks for commenting on my stuff. Oh, and dont stop editing. Most of the time when I put some of my writings on here I never have time to correct...and I'm no where close to the best speller in the world! Well, I will get back with you. Thanks again.
Love Shannon
TinkyTheGreat on November 24, 2004

I... I don't know what to think anymore.
-very long pause filled with a look of deep consentration and though-

I don't know anymore... I just... I don't know if you are real anymore... I just..... don't know.
TinkyTheGreat on November 24, 2004

I don't want to sleep right now. I just want to sit here a while.. just sit and think... think about the nothingnesses of life, and how simple everything OUGHT to be. I do believe I am a lazy person, honest. I really do with that everything would just be handed to me. That would explain my reluctancy to do anything that is outside of my 'comfort zone'.
TinkyTheGreat on November 22, 2004

Did you realize that we have a cast system in America? When I hear that, I was like omg... what the hell IS wrong with this country?
Tjoonz on November 21, 2004

WHY AM I SO SAD...
and lost.
this is not like me.

go ahead, abandon me fucker.
TinkyTheGreat on November 20, 2004

And then I decided society was fucked and moved on......

Sorry, just had to post that somewhere. I hate society forever more. I don't want to talk to anyone at school, and I don't care to go anymore. Screw this country. We have a damned cast system and no one realizes. We are an ignorant and blind nation. What the hell is wrong with us?

I include myself in this.
TinkyTheGreat on November 10, 2004

Hey \TJ\! Your last poem was.... sad. Are you all right, man? I'm finished with layout. We are gonna have one \nice\ freakin' paper. But hey, tell me how you are doing
SoleDiavolo on November 7, 2004

not TECHNICALLY but I basically raised her. so I consider her that.. she called me mami before calling my mom mami so there u go. hehe. ciao

~Sun
TinkyTheGreat on November 7, 2004

Dude... I just noticed the lady in the background trying not to get noticed.. you are nuts...
TinkyTheGreat on November 7, 2004

DUDE!!! WE ARE TALKING ON AIM!!! CRAZY!! CRAZY!!!
can-i-make-a-comment on November 7, 2004

Haha! Dude... You're getting in my older poetry from when I was like, 13. 3 years ago... My style has developed muchly since then.. Anyways, here is a link to Silent Desperation, in case you still wanted to read it: allpoetry.com/Poem/305504

Thanks again.
And yeah... My poetry was horrible back then... (Still is, actually..) But I think my poetry now is definitely better than when I was younger..

Emy
can-i-make-a-comment on November 7, 2004

Holy CRAP, Dude! You seem to be almost as hyper-active as I am!!! Thanks for your truly awesome comment on my poem. I'm glad you liked it. I'll have to check out yours now... Nice pic, by the way. hops on an upside-down umbrella and flies away to read your poems
Tjoonz on November 7, 2004

call me TJ from now on. Well, kids in school call me Benny, (derived from my catholic name: Benedict, when i was baptised) but i prefer benny. Capisce?

so tim, wassup. your too funny. we should hang out. or you should move. or if i get into stanford, i'll be closer to you... ohhhh be afraid. BE VERY AFRAID
TinkyTheGreat on November 7, 2004

Dude, you are just to funny. If I were a chick I'd be all over you! (damn parents not having any girls((me))...) What the heck? Did I just say that????............. Geezus... Asians are so freakin' cool. I wish were asian! Then I'd cool.. And then people would steriotype ME and think that I REALLY AM a genius! lol.... derned white people! KILL THE BLOODY BAST... That's horrible.. what the heck? I'm bored.. I need to do something.

Hey, Tjoon, I was curious on how you made a calaborating poem where EVERYONE could edit it... lol.. Man, when you log in today... or whenever, your front page will be FILLED with my comments>.< Because I'm .... crazy.....
SoleDiavolo on November 7, 2004

theres nothing wrong with being asian. just saying hi

~Sun
TinkyTheGreat on November 6, 2004

Woohoo! I can finally put a name to a face!
TinkyTheGreat on October 31, 2004

Well.. I had a brother who turned into a legend. He is going to college in N.Y. right now. lol. I have given myself standards with which I, too, might become creditted as well. I feel that I have to become a workaholic in order to carry on the 'family legacy'. Well... finish, at least.
the tempest on October 29, 2004

to get the happy alien...just put an *...then the word alien...then another *....like this
TinkyTheGreat on October 19, 2004

You have disappeared again. It's all right.. Read my latest poem and you'll understand. Have a nice life. I'll just live mine away, too. Well.. I'm going to bed. I shall dream wonderful dreams of my own dark abyss.. I shall run and run and run.. and I'll notice I'm only runnin' on my own circular planet. Maybe that's why everything looks the same... Maybe that's why I can see my own back.. :-\
Irishfreckles87 on August 31, 2004

DUde where is the writing?? COME BACK TO AP!
TinkyTheGreat on August 19, 2004

Hello, Tjoons. I have you on my favourites.. lol. I don't know why I am even saying this, but I was just wondering where you've been. For the past month or so there have been no new favourites.. lol. I don't know.. Sorry. I am wasting your time. I only have three favourites including you. So... I am just wondering where everyone went..
yours truely on July 3, 2004

hello who u talking about Bro???Whoz brother??? I am just wondering man and it is a poem if u look into it. It actually expresses a lot of emotion technically speaking any word of thought can be a poem.
Irishfreckles87 on June 27, 2004

your in love.....?
con quien?
xAlLxFaLLxDeADx on June 21, 2004

hey!!.. i love all your writes.. there soo, (i dont know a word)there so wonderful?!?... yeah!.. i like them alot..

~VanessA~
bakacoconut on June 9, 2004

Hehe... You're your own favorite author... So am I. Well, not really, but I would read a book I wrote... if I were to publish one, that is. Anyway, I finished that chapter you commented on. That reminds me... Thanks for the comment on it

Love,
Sherri
Irishfreckles87 on May 30, 2004

what are those poems on your page? They were written really well... Im a little confused though...

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