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Guestbook entries for Susan John Francis

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  • horus8 on May 8
    Why are you living in the middle east with a name like Susan Francis? Work, or war?
  • Keith Drew on December 16, 2008
    Oh my!
    You are beautiful.
  • sgking123 : excellent on July 3, 2008
    But yes all this insanity has to end
    Reality is not this mind said
    Heart as always a traitor
    Followed the insane ways that he has


    terrific and emotional...your choice of words was great too.scene,emtions blended to bring out the state of mind.do comemnt on others in my portfolio.
  • Rovingone on June 28, 2008
    Yes, you are! Fabulous sentiments and a excellently crafted poem! More please.
  • Susan John Francis : My First Poem on the community so please be gentle about your comments on August 22, 2007
    Just read on and lemme know if i am gr8.....

    Was it love or my senses wild that day
    Drunk or the drinks sweet in a way
    You were close or alcohol enough for the day
    You touched me or was I in the way.

    Never before have I felt a stranger to myself
    To be with you is all what I want to have
    Those eyes perfect for the glair that you have
    Close it before I loose a bit of grace left in myself

    Beautiful light and drinks by my side
    I hope it’s the drinks that had the effect
    Feet’s not touching the ground
    Yes I was walking in the clouds

    But yes all this insanity has to end
    Reality is not this mind said
    Heart as always a traitor
    Followed the insane ways that he has ,

    Sunlight followed me through that night
    Opened my eyes before I could realize
    Was that a dream or my imagination
    But yeah that night was a real sensation .

    Susan Francis -14-08-07

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