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And thank you for so much. You helped me learn to love, to hate, to live, to forgive, and to grow. I owe a lot to you. Here's to hoping we'll stay in touch till we can only write about the brakes on our wheelchairs [or the fumes of our jet packs... who knows?]
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I'm a bit worried you've fallen sick or something...it's been awhile since AP has seen you.
Let me know when you show your face again.
-Levi
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Hello.
Hope you haven't died, and that all is well.
Rather odd how we both seem to have discovered Silversun Pickups. However, I do enjoy Lazy Eye quite a bit more than your apparent favorite. Maybe that's just me.
Well, anyway, good to see you're still writing. You always had a gift.
Maybe one day you'll decide we can bury the proverbial hatchet?
Georgie
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Hey, thanks for the comment. It's fine if you don't recognize your own talent, because I don't like big egos
Anyways, I just wanted to post a guestbook entry as a sort of post-it note to remind you that you need to post some new poetry...whenever you like, as long as it's soon
-Levi
P.S. If you honestly ever want to know more about me, I can tell you, but you probably won't be that interested. You seem much more fascinating.
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Your profile says you have 65527 Contest Poems, which sounds a little high to me
Anyhow, glad to see you're still writing!
-Levi 
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I love this..."when I'm not writing I'm a line crosser." only poets would find ways to write everything but what's expected.
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I love this poem continue the great work.
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I went to the URL for "Words Unspoken" only to be greeted with an error message...I thought for a second you had left us. Glad to see another cool username, but it's too happy for me  Although, it is nice to see the "sun" shining through some of your previous frustration, yes?
Anyways...I'm still away from home but I'll be going back tomorrow only to leave again the next day. Sorry I haven't been on much, but it's been hard while I'm away from my faster internet connection.
Someone (if not multiple people) promoted my stuff pretty heavily, so if you had anything to do with it, let me know. If you didn't, that's ok too, I'll still have suspects
-Levi
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Yes I know you you are, you're Kiwiiwik...and I did notice a name change in your poetry also. I'm sorry for the confusion and that I wasn't considerate in notifying you, I promise if by any chance I desire to change my sceen name again and you are an audience to my poetry, I'll gladly tell you. Meaning behind it? Um, firts off, I notice a style chnage in my poems, and I thoght maybe a new name was in order. I keep many journals and one of them is a memorabilia journal. Sometimes my poems reflect that journal. And I've noticed also, that most of my new poems are hopeful, like sunshine. Sunshine makes me happy sometimes. So I thouhgt it was original. I like your name too. I like Evenings and the thought of it falling is there a meaning behind that?
-Skyelle
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Next time you change your name, TELL ME!!! you probably don't know who I am, but I do read your poems, and I've had no idea who you were for several weeks...I will always remember you as, "Words Unspoken". lol...it is a great new name though...is there a meaning behind it?...~Kiwi
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I'm flattered to have my words worthy of being written down is awesome. So thank you.
I think my favorite Snapple is...I can't think of it they're all awesome! Um...but if I would only obligated to live on one flavor alone, Ice Tea Lemon...diet. Yeah.
Don't worry about taking time to respond, but I'm glad you did.
-Skyelle
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Thanks  I love snapple, too. Strawberry Kiwi. yuummm... lol
I love your motto, too. The Sky is God's canvas and Life itself is Art. I actually wrote it down and put it on my pin bored thing the first time I read it.
and sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I barely go on here, anymore.
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I like your username. Its tight. I think ppl should put more effort into their names. I changed my name 4x before I got Mentally Speaking. I was many more faces. Ppl knew me as someone who changed their name every mth..lol but now I'm settlin for this one. Your name is good, can tell you put a thought into it. But alright
Jus showin some love
M.S
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That song rocks...let's see...I think maybe, "So I Thought" or a close seccond "All Around Me". Yes, defenetly!
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Flyleaf rules!! My fave song is probably "Cassie." What's yours?
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Oh you too? That is so awesome. It's the first poem I read of her's too.
Thank you for the compliment. I'm sure you do too.
-Skyelle
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I saw that you told somebody else that your favourite poem of Emily Dickenson's was "I'm Nobody. Who Are You?" That is so weird, because that's the first one I read, and it's my favourite too! Yeah, you seem to have good taste in reading. (  ) ~Kiwi
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I agree, I read "The Notebook" by him as well, I was going to read "Message in the Bottle" but I didn't finnish it.
I'm not a slow writter, well now I am anyways, I had stopped writting and my las poem was the first thing I've finnished. But I see you are my push to keep posting. Anyways thank you for the comment.
-Skyelle
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and the book 'A walk to remember' is a great book. It is so much better than the movie. I've been meaning to read his other books, but I never got around to it...
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Hey Levi!!!
I'm fine. Actually I'm great; busy, and that is good for me. But I have lost my inperation...I haven't written a poem since last September or November? So yeah, that's the only thing I haven't been able to keep doing. I'm trying to keep a journal, to see if the melody of lyrical poetry flows back to me. I hope I can write soon, before I loose my growing talent.
Anyways... I haven't forgotten you either. Once Holy Week rolls around I'll read and comment on all the works I've missed.
I hope your doing well and keeping hope alive.
God Bless you
-Skyelle
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Wanted to stop by and let you know that though you may be slow to write, you are not quickly forgotten. I hope all is well with you.
God bless,
-Levi
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long time no talk... I hope your doing good. just thought id drop in and say hi. be blessed. <3 joy.
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Well, there are very few poets that I've either been able to relate to, enjoy watching develop, or treat more like a friend than just anyone I'd stumble upon. Anyways, I really hope that you do come back here sooner than later, as your comments are as well appreciated as your poetry.
-Levi
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Why are you sad??!!!
Oh please don't be....I'll be back eventually....you'll see.
I'll keep an eye out for your things and maybe in a few months....I'll repost my edited things and new pieces...but don't be sad. Why are you sad?
I'll keep in touch Levi...
-Skyelle
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Wow...that's really sad...I came here to comment on your poetry and thank you, but now I feel...even more sad than before...*sigh*
I'll come back when my thoughts sort out so I'll have something more sensical to say...
-Levi
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Bones on October 22, 2005
I really appreciate this.
Good luck with what you're doing, and where you're going <3.
From Canese aka In Your Lungs
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Oh hey, I was bored and looking for something to do....but probably by next month I'll change it again. So you'll have your name back don't worry.
Hope your doing well.
-Skyelle
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why did you change you name back to words unspoken?
~Alexia~
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What can I say? I'm an creative person. I'm not sure. It's sort of a back and forth pattern of screen names. I hope you don't completely loose track of me. Then I would loose my ever-so-faithful audience.
So Levi, huh? I'll call you that from now on, (if it's ok). It's better than "Everyones Dead" (as awesome as the screen name is and everything, it's better).
-Skyelle
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Are you not happy under just one title?  Ah well, name changes are fine, as long as I can keep it straight.
-Levi
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Awsome music!!!!! I can't pick just one poem to comment about so I'm just gonna say generally that all your poems (they really do sound like lyrics - very cool) are incredibly good! Keep writing man! I'm excited to read a lot more!
Love Always,
.::Hannah::.
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Thank you for commenting on my poem, In the Wake of Wildfire. In answer to your question, "When did it become four lovers?"
Each of the cheating lovers had a lover, and so now, all four involved people are joined in sadness where before they were somewhat separate due to the lies that they mourn.
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Underoath, Eisley, Chevelle, and From First to Last? You have made some interesting choices in your music...nice  Great work from what I've seen, and your musical choices show where some of your inspiration may come from!
-Everyones Dead
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Now THAT was a good critique! If you aren't already on my favorites I am adding you. I need more critiques from you and your honest opinion. I will keep those thoughts in mind. Thank You! I will return the favor when I can get around to it, even if I'm not that good at it.
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heey thankz for commenting on my poems, i will do the same to yours soon i promise, and i am not a good speller, and i will try to fix it soon, get really odd when it comes to spelling once i was really tired and typed the word olding instead of an old.... i am strange sry for my rambling
AWSOMENESS
-theartzgrl~*~
p.s.-so your name skye, cuz one of my friends names is skye actually my best friend I didn't think many pple had that name!!!!!
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hey there, thanks for reading all of my useless poems you sure do have patience to get through them. hahaha yes, i was on a romantic rage when i wrote fast-food pickup who knows. About Jack Dane.....it's about Jack Daniels- a beer [i dont know if that helps to explain anything]. hahah i can never tell if these stupid writes just don't make sense to people other than myself. It just explains why people...why people turn to beer as like a "temporary fix" as stated. well thanks again for the critiquing (sp.?), always needed and useful
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Oh I know what you mean, about the art, anything that can produce emotion in some way just intrigues me and draws me in, you know? The odder the better...I like anything with a cloudy sky or a beautiful portrait and a beautiful painted landscape. I like a few scuptures and some comteporary art, it depends. Like gas tanks in tutus won't cut it for me. Anyways, thank you for reading and wow, inspired? well, your welcome. Though I'm surprised, honestly.
-Skyelle
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first of all i just want to tell you, you have like all my effing favorit bands on that list of yours, youve got good taste in your music, and i am also vry interested in photogeraphy and many other arts, i love things like this that can be very sybolistic, that have this odd beauty about it, now im just rambaling, well anyway, i like all of your peotry ive read so far and i am sure to read more, keep it up!..(makes me proud to see people like you steping out and taking a stand for your religion and for your friends and interests alike, you've somwhat inspired me)
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I love every band on that list of yours.. you've got great taste in music. I also have to say that you have a lot to say for yourself in your writing, which is really impressive. It's nice to see someone around my age who knows what they're talking about.
Awesome..
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Thanks for your encourament, I'm barely a beginer. Though poems i've posted are old I haven't had much expirience. That was the whole point of becoming a member, the constructive critisism. I'm hoping to get better. But I'm still not sure what direction (I don't have a atyle) should I go in when I write. Uncertainty is a bi**. Thanks.
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You are a human, we all have our ups and downs, and you can't really do anything to stop them. You definetely sound like an extremely nice person, and a very compassionate one at that. Thanks for entering the contest.
♥ Eve
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You sound like a really sweet person. I loved reading your bio and I, too, am a Christian. It's a rocky road, but well worth it. Now I need to get busy reading your poetry.
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Nobody will get ideas...so don't worry but jealousy is a real turn on...so its good to know.
I love you too.
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i <3 The Used too...plus the majority of the other bands you listed. We've got alot in common, ((adding you to my favs))
*Love
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My heartiest appreciation and sincerest thank you for your wonderful comments on "Pledge Of Allegiance, Revisited." You and the other young poets on this site are what make it the best on the net. Thanks again.
Mac
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hey thanks for your comment on my author page.. yeah it's been alot moving since it's practically changing your whole life. i like yours. really cool. i also noticed we like the same authors. i like your way of writing.
F.R.
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Hey! I'm Jessie, I'm in the Drummer Girls group and I wanted to check out your profile and poetry. I just read your profile and dude, we have so much in common! IM me if you wanna talk!
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