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  • lukes on September 5
    Thanks for all your feedback. We have quite a bit in common as far as poems are concerned. I also really like Queen. Anyway thank you and keep writing amazing poems.
    Luke
  • Sam-I-Am : Hey on March 24
    Hai Davie, It's been ages where you been? I haven't even had a comment or a message from you
    Sam
  • Marc-Andrews on November 28, 2008
    Heyyy!!!! DAVVVVVIEEEE!!!! When you publishing your next one???? I've been waiting for a good few months......

    Comeon, you couldnt of run out of inspiriation
  • Marc-Andrews on September 22, 2008
    Hey David...... I just looked at Exmortis and you've changed the notes..... What was this copyright thing about??? Were you challanged about it?
  • Sam-I-Am : DAVVVVIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! on July 14, 2008
    Davie, I haven't heard from you in forever I've written loads, and I'm so used to your feedback, it seems weird without it
    So...have a look at my page whenever k?
    love ya!!!! (and you tatoo!! ;P )
    Sam
  • lowercase prelude on July 6, 2008
    hey there. just stopping by profiles, saying hi to people. how have you been?
  • Marc-Andrews : Hummmm on June 5, 2008
    Oah! You don't regard with the highest recognition anymore......Thats sad......
    Eh well, my poetry obviously isn't up to standard anymore.
  • Sam-I-Am : my poem :) on May 30, 2008
    I know why you found it difficult to read, and why you felt the rhyme was off. It was written in the pre 1914 style of poetry I've just finished English literature, and it inspired me somewhat
    The rhyme is not in the last syllable of the word, but in some cases the first, making it difficult to spot if you don't catch it to begin with It's more complex than anything I've written before, which is why I think it is one of my personal favorites
    The structure is in rhyming sentences, you see, in one like, a sentence will start a rhyme, and finish the sentence and the rhyme in the nest. You'll need to take a look to see what I mean

    Hope you understand it a little better I know it may be hard, lol it was hard to write
    byeeee!!
    Sam
  • Sam-I-Am : Hai Davie :) on May 27, 2008
    Hai davie I have been writing more, I'd really appreciate your feedback see you soon davie oah yeah, check your emails
  • Sam-I-Am on February 8, 2008
    Well, you were partly right Davie I wrote the song myself, and wasn't even thinking about the Phil Collins version, even though I've heard it Yeah, it is about Dan, I'm glad you liked it Davie
    Thanks for the applause
    Midnight
  • MlilAngel : =] Nice to Hear from you Again on January 19, 2008
    Thank you so much on the comment on my poem. I had to combine my very first and very last poem I wrote into one for a contest though unfortunately I didn't even get a recegnition. But it happens sometimes right? I'm not too bummed about it, there are always other contests to enter.
    So how have you been!? write me back sometime when you're not too busy

    *M'lilangel*
  • MlilAngel on July 1, 2007
    *smiles* Thank you, I'm trying to move on. At times I wonder if getting someone else would help me move on since the only thing I seem to miss about him now is that he was always there for me no matter what... but then again, it'd feel like I'd be using the guy and I've never done anything like that before, & I don't intend on starting now *huffs a laugh and smiles* And I thank you for your poems, they were very good, I did enjoy them very much. I'll have to look into that artist names that you sent me bcause once I looked over them I onlyg recegnized one, the song from Coldplay, I listen to them every now and then. Thanks again *smiles softly*
    *M'lilangel*
  • MlilAngel : hello there! on June 30, 2007
    Just wanted to drop by and say hello and thanks again for the poems!

    *MJ*
  • sca on May 7, 2007
    There's no other store like... Day-ayvid Jones, da da dum.
  • Marc-Andrews on May 6, 2007
    Yeaa lol his name is really David Jones
  • sca on May 6, 2007
    Is your name really David Jones?

    Or are you just taking off the retailer?
  • Marc-Andrews : Pie on May 3, 2007
    Hi Davvvveyyyy haha i've looked at your work!!! Its pretty good! Click on my name!!! Come have a lookie at my crappy poems!!

    lol lol lol
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