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HolyCrow : bloody hell on October 2Your poems are brilliant, you twisted bastard.
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Angelshadow on October 27, 2008Lawls your poem on your page is just so fucking random. XD
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poetryality on October 18, 2008You've been a member for a while. Hmm...
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One Angry Monkey on September 27, 2008So you take great pride in being removed from the general crap that gets spread around this site and labelled as peotry. Good to hear, in a way. But what about your own work, real work of course. Where, if anywhere can i read it? If it's free verse, which i sincerely doubt it is, i'm not interested, but if you genuinely have something worth my time or which i might enjoy, then i do want to read it. Not because i agree with your take on the standard of poetry on this site, but because i want to read something different to sludge. Also, becuse i'm yet to find a poet on this site that enjoy reading frequently, if you've found someone on here who actually does conform to your standards, be it yourself or anyone else, could you let me know. Or would you be too proud to admit it if you did like someone on here?
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On-Borrowed-Time on June 27, 2006allpoetry.com/poem/2081679
any help with this one? i've gotten some comments about its flow and things like that...some i don't know if i agree with. anyway, can you take a look at it and tell me what you think and how to improve it? thanks
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Porcelain Shark on February 1, 2006Hahahaha you are funny... I agree with what you have to say about the shitty poems and comments and such... But I loved The Cigarette poem, having been a smoker (yes I quit) I liked the way you captured the moment of the smoke... I'll have to peruse the rest of your work.
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o c t o b e r on January 8, 2006James, you've made me sad.
You are, quite possibly, one of my favorite poets here on AP, not only because you aren't afraid to actually critique people but because your work is absolutely eventual.
The last time you posted something new was November 16.
I AM GOING THROUGH WITHDRAWLS, AS IS THE REST OF ALLPOETRY!!!!!!!
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MrsDobbins on December 3, 2005ahaha nice last line...
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Ostara on November 17, 2005Nice books you got listed there. Catcher in the rye and The Great Gatsby.. aahhh, I love those... Makes you see the crap in society
And I agree on the commenting thing. I just don't comment on shit, I don't wanna kill anyone with my honesty 
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TheDrip on November 7, 2005Hey, thanks for the reads
After high school, I was thinking of going into the Marines (Marine Band). As for college, well, I'll gladly go wherever they send me. So yea, thanks again for taking time to read my stuff, I hope with the Thanksgiving Break, you're given some time to chill out.
See ya when I see ya.
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sidewalksolipsis on August 20, 2005Pssst! James! I know the last thing you probably want bugged with is more college stuff (really coming down to the wire, eh?), but I was wondering if you were still considering taking Political Philosophy. I really don't care either way, but I have all the books you need for class...just not the space to bring them up in. So if you want to take them up, let me know. Well, there are really creepy thumping noises coming from outside, so I should probably go before someone breaks in, ties me to a chair, and makes me tell them the whereabouts of your house so they could rape you. Night!
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TheDrip on August 12, 2005Hey, I'm hosting my last contest on AP for a good while (I'm leaving) and since you're on my favorites because you are an amazing writer, I wondered if you might check it out. If it's not exactly your cup of tea, then that's cool, but I'd really like to see something from you
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SoulScythe on August 10, 2005I agree about the sugar-coated comments. It's kind of sick, the way you can read the shittiest poems and find the fuzziest critiques.
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Sint on July 18, 2005You are the shining beacon of allpoetry. You are what the site stands for these days. Why the hell write rational poetry when you can just write a bunch of shit down and people will love it anyways? I've checked the other 'feedbacks' that you've had on this particular poem, and there happens to be one other one. And yes, what a positive feedback it is. It's one of those insanely vague feedbacks that a person could write without even having read the poem. Congratulations, somebody didn't want to hurt your feelings.
There is a difference between putting symbols in a poem and just making it random and mostly senseless for the simple sake of doing so. Oh, young chap, next time you decide to tell somebody to 'analyse' your work, try to formulate a sentence that isn't a giant typo in itself.
I think if you spent more time putting 'ur' thinking cap on and taking actual critiques seriously instead of being offended, your poetry might improve.
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zimzam on July 18, 2005hi sint, first of all it's is what it should have been it is a typing error. then my poetry is not all rhyme for sake. it is simple lucid style of poetry. not to boast but i have received all positive feedbacks on this except yours. it does have an hidden meaning. you have to analyse deep , put ur thinking hat on young chap.
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