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KayJay : May your day be filled with happiness and love... on November 26, 2008
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Phoenix Shadow on November 25, 2008
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Phoenix Shadow : Charming ^_^ on November 25, 2008I like your AP page, && you're writing is overall, brilliant. I hope you continue to write and keep doing whatever you can to improve!
"My poems seem messy and amateurish to me.
Tell me if you agree."
I don't. Messy is the POINT of poetry. Break the rules, however it suits you just have fun! It never matters what other people think, it's about what you think. && btw, I think you're stunning anyways =)
&& (maybe you're an amateur? but) you're not very amateurish. You're writing is good, SURE u can improve and I'm confident you will. The more you commit to improving, the more you will. =)
But hey we all write for our own reasons. Make your poetry your own, and enjoy it. Nobody matters but you =)
Peace,
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The Otep on September 8, 2008*huggies you* Hello and signing your amazig guestbook!
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Soft-Rain on September 7, 2008sssss
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storiesuntold : storiesuntold on September 6, 2008You are a very talented writer honey and you dont ever stop writing . You can find better people to communicate with on here that wont be rude to you and there are plenty of us here that wants your work on allpoetry to read and enjoy . I have gotten a few myself that were terrible but if they wouldnt settle down I would find others to be friends with .Learning should be pleasant and their is no reason to be hateful I am sorry you were treated like that
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AddictiveTRUTH : I agree with Xianaria on September 6, 2008I was invited to read your poem called "Sucker in Love" today, and I enjoyed it from start to finish. Please don't stop writing, everyone has to start somewhere...got me? So, what that your poems may seem Amatuerish...who's doesnt' Ive only been writing for over a year now, and I know there is a long journey for me as well, but I write how I feel and all that other stuff comes with time. If it ever does, I'm ok either way, and you are too
Keep being who you are with this talent, and Learn quickly to ignore those that beg to differ.
Like my Parent's told me,
It take a Genius to learn from their mistakes,
but Dumb asses only find time to talk about other people.
Hope this helps, keep in touch.
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Xianaria : hi~ on September 6, 2008please pay no attention to recent negative comments, there was no excuse for them. my family and i enjoyed your poem, keep writing!
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----michael---- on February 1, 2008'I'm a little spastic in my writing.' is probably the best opening line I have EVER seen on any author page to date. Bravo.
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