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j-ay rose on August 5, 2006
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Poeticlives on February 18, 2006I LOVE that poem in your "about me"...
Very effective to tempt readers into reading your poems- I surely will...
The last two lines are my favourite, because I think they are the smoothest
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But I think,
"Enter in my loony thoughts,
Boiling like cauldrin pots."
Is extremely cute.... forgive mne that isn't condescending. I have a soft spot for that word "loony" because I don't think its a bad adjective in the least- It denotes a clear charm.
Of course there is personification, "boiling", similie, and allusion to witchcraft fantasy in that too... awesome!
As the last line warns, I hope I am not late.
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Timothy Cameron on January 3, 2006Thanks for reading my poem.
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cafe0lait on September 19, 2005Not event hardly but thanks for the compliment. I have to be going some to blow you out of anything Dahling (smile). Thanks again
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art.e.miz on August 24, 2005no, i have not read the Forgotten Realems series. if its good then can you plz give me the author?
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ThepoetQueen on July 31, 2005No we are not married yet we have been talking about it we have been together like i said seen i was 14 we are only 22 and 24 now we do have 2 kids a 4 year old and a 10 month old I want my wedding to be great So took a long time doing things even if we were only 17 when i had a kid we still waitted 3 years before i had her at 17 but anyways no not married yet but will be still very much in love
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hearttouchedfool on May 3, 2005I love the poem on ur page great welcome!!!!
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just rob on February 18, 2005Welcome to this site.I became aware of your work, in the judging of my contest.Your work has a gritty reality that becons me back.You have a talent that you must nourish, and not waste.Never stop.Peace,Rob
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