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Topnotchsy on August 18The page looks great!!
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Topnotchsy on June 14Write something new !!
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e911 : yes... she is only 14 going on 40 on February 19I am only on here in pursuit of my daughter's best interests. She is constantly chatting about the friends she has on here and the talent she reads, so I figured I would sign up. What I found... is that an incredible poet has been living in my house.
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Tirrell on January 20Just visiting your page, Thank you for the great compliment. Come join the winklings group
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Topnotchsy on January 18Hey, you keep getting better with each of your poems!! Have you ever tried a aabccb rhyme scheme? I use it where the "aa's" and "cc's" have 4 "beats" per line, and the "cc's" have 5 and it works great for longer poems. It also seems to inspire me to use feminine rhymes (where two syllables rhyme) and even work with words where 3 or more syllables rhyme, making for far more interesting rhyming. I haven't posted anything in this form on the site yet, but it's a great form.
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loudlady : hey its lola on January 3hey its lola you and i seem to have alot in common i listen to practiclly what you do but with alot more i play 4 instruments and sing and music is my life as well couldnt live without it or i might die accually i would
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DinkyDiver : 14!!! on December 22, 2008I expected someone older sorry.wow your writing is amazing for your age..you have to keep it up and I am going to add you as a fave so I can read more of your work xx
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superstition on December 12, 2008Thanks for all your nice comments on my poetry! I really appreciate that. I hope you're having a nice holiday season!!
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spirit rising : hi on December 7, 2008"The Raven" awsome poem, to memorize it? wow!!
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Chazz on November 22, 2008Hey! I just thought I'd stop by and check out your page! I love your music selection. I listened to almost all of those in middle school through high school. I loved the poem I read of yours and I'll definitely check out some more by you!
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Snow White Queen on September 29, 2008I love all three poems! The Lady of Shallott is one of my favorites! The Raven is my all time fav! My gramma used to say it to me before I'd go to bed at night when I was little...Kinda creepy but Okay!
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stylization on September 28, 2008heyy. I've got Lady of Shalott and Raven memorized (:
But I havn't heard of your other favorite poem... *looks it up* lol (:
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Luckintheshadows : Just saying hey :) on September 24, 2008
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Topnotchsy on August 31, 2008Hey, just wanted to say thanks for the comments on my poetry.
I see you posted your favorite bands above. While these may not be your style, Billy Joel and the band "Rush" both are pretty incredible when it comes to lyrics, and listening to them may provide some ideas for poems, and new ways of saying things to keep them interesting. Some incredible rhyming as well.
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Justin on June 5, 2008Ahahaha... I have got to meet your rats some day. They sound absolutely adorable... especially with names like those! Anyway, keep up the excellent poems!
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