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Guestbook entries for Shadowsong

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  • magikal fairy poet on September 26
    WOW your page is great!!!!!!!!
  • BrokenSanity on July 10
    Wow, your soilder thing at the beginning is very powerful! Nice page too.
  • BlackSadistic Angel on July 4
    Nice Profile, what part of the Army are you in, the front lines or the Reservers?
  • Great Cthulhu : H.U.A.W. !!!!! on May 9
    From a crusty veteran, I wish to extend a huge 'Thank you!' for serving. (I served with the 'the Bug' in Desert Storm)
  • Aerden on May 9
    I wish I had met you back when I had my 'Citizen Soldiers' contest going. Glad to meet you!
  • Arkbear on September 18, 2006
    ONE DAY LEFT!!!
    I would love to have you enter..

    Rainbow Children

    I saw you visited the contest...would love to know how you feel about this topic...If not, I totally understand
    Have GREAT DAY Poet!
    Sincerely, Arkbear.

    Nice profile page as well...would love to hear the thoughts of a younger Poet.
  • Airborne Ed on June 2, 2006
    I stumbled across your page when I was browsing some contests. It is very nice to see another uniformed person here. It is a pleasure to be able to put a poem in one of your contests. I do hope you can draw some inspiration from it.

    I was going to submit a poem called "She calls me home", but it is too personal for me to enter it, but rather I entered "A Battle" into your contest.

    If your wondering, I have been a soldier in the Canadian Military for over 21 years now. So I share a respect for those who also wear a uniform. If you ever find yourself needing to talk with someone, I have good strong shoulders and an ear open if you need to talk..

    Ed
  • livingItup on June 2, 2006
    Hey,
    Good luck with the USMC Officer Candidate School.
    *joey*
  • TylerLee on June 1, 2006
    O we have the same motto! Except I shorten it! Just like the people in the marine corps do. Your poetry seems very interesting too! I'm not going to say the name of the poem or the writer, but there jes happens to be a good marine corps poem (not called that) around here^^. Semper Fi!!! Oorah!
  • StrangerInThisWorld on December 1, 2004
    i really like your name..i love the word shadow and almost anything to do with it....

    ~Lonelyshadow~
  • Kerowyn on July 27, 2004
    Hi...I love your stuff! You're away now, aren't you? Working at camp for the summer, if I recall right. Well, write more when you get back!
  • Island of Blue on May 19, 2004
    your poetry is mystical... i enjoy it. Im awaiting the next new thing u write...
    Island of Blue
    PAR
  • Tsubasa on March 30, 2004
    just to tell I know
    A Singing Gerbil isn't all that
    good but thanks for the comment. I was sort of
    being crazy. Thanks anyway.
  • writonthebody on March 23, 2004
    Ah, you just missed my contest, calling all LOTR fans! Reading your author page, I think you would have liked it. Oh well, next time.
  • SweetSurrender on March 2, 2004
    Hiya! I was just wondering...do you plan on writing more of your story Pursuit? I really enjoyed it thus far. Keep up the good work!

    Peace

    ~SS~
  • darkqueen00 on February 23, 2004
    freaky...im obssessed with LotR...especially aragorn (viggo<3) and legolas (orlando bloom) both of them are *so* hot!!! AIM me gothika981...i love your works!
  • Nam on January 3, 2004
    I have commented on all your work except for 'Five Seconds Too Late' I will get to that one at another time. Usually short stories bore me, including my own.

    I feel that you do rhyme nicely, you could improve on your rhyming by not using so many simplistic words. You should mix it up, make them challenging for yourself and the reader.

    Everyone loves a challenge, including myself.

    Also, I feel you should dabble in syllable poems, doesn't have to be haiku or cinquain but one could always start there.

    And non-rhyming piece, I think those could also be a benefit to you. One shouldn't always stick to one form of writing at a main. Should always mix it up, and then when the confidence is solely there in most or all other categories than one can focus most of their attention to one form.

    In my opinion.

    You have 1 great piece and 1 excellent piece. The others are good - nice and ok.

    You do not have to take or even make note of my suggestions and opinions or anyone elses really. But, one should still see if they add up, and then make your own opinion on that.

    I have you on my fav's list, if you wish to read and comment on my work that is fine, you don't have to. But, I will continue on yours.

    Have a good day.


  • phatalvision on January 2, 2004
    Hi, I read a comment of yours on someone's poem which led me to visit here.
  • on December 19, 2003
    I like Tamora Pierce too! She is a GREAT author! Keep writing!
  • Moonbeam fairy on November 9, 2003
    AHHHHHH!!!! I'm in heaven - I am without a daubt THE BIGGEST LORD OF THE RINGS FAN IN THE WORLD (except for maybe you guys). I love the Elves, just everything about them are beautiful. One of my poems (Hamiel) is and imitation of the type of stuff Tolkien would write about in his poem-stories.
  • black-ice87 on October 19, 2003
    o yay!!!! mercedes lackey and tamora pierce...gotta love them...i absolutely adore their books...but anyway just decided to comment on that and becuz u like them i am now reading ur poetry...hehe shallow rnt i?
  • on September 26, 2003
    heehee... i too am obsessed with LOTR... my fave characters are of course Merry and Pippin... ive read some of ur poetry and have enjoyed it very much so... hope to see ya 'round!
    Love Food and Ale!
    Merry
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