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Misguided Truth on April 29you love pie!
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James Holdaway : You on April 14I'll take part in your competition. If I'm wrong there's no telling what I'll do. Great admiration of you and the rest of the armed forces.
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kdom on March 25Glad I stopped by your page. I have the utmost respect for members of our armed forces and want to take this opportunity to say thank you for what you do!
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Sunkissed xo on November 21, 2008Hi there! Just wanted to drop by to say that I love your page, it's so lovely and well-presented. Your poetry looks great too! Keep up the good work, have a nice day
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aparnaagarwal : A COLLECTION OF GOOD POEMS on October 15, 2008I disagree with that conclusion.It was certainly likely enough to give rise to probable cause
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Going Forever on September 26, 2008WOW your page is great!!!!!!!!
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BrokenSanity on July 10, 2008Wow, your soilder thing at the beginning is very powerful! Nice page too.
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Aiyasha Avarus on July 4, 2008Nice Profile, what part of the Army are you in, the front lines or the Reservers?
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Great Cthulhu : H.U.A.W. !!!!! on May 9, 2008From a crusty veteran, I wish to extend a huge 'Thank you!' for serving. (I served with the 'the Bug' in Desert Storm)
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Aerden on May 9, 2008I wish I had met you back when I had my 'Citizen Soldiers' contest going. Glad to meet you!
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Arkbear on September 18, 2006ONE DAY LEFT!!!
I would love to have you enter..
Rainbow Children
I saw you visited the contest...would love to know how you feel about this topic...If not, I totally understand
Have GREAT DAY Poet!
Sincerely, Arkbear.
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Airborne Ed on June 2, 2006I stumbled across your page when I was browsing some contests. It is very nice to see another uniformed person here. It is a pleasure to be able to put a poem in one of your contests. I do hope you can draw some inspiration from it.
I was going to submit a poem called "She calls me home", but it is too personal for me to enter it, but rather I entered "A Battle" into your contest.
If your wondering, I have been a soldier in the Canadian Military for over 21 years now. So I share a respect for those who also wear a uniform. If you ever find yourself needing to talk with someone, I have good strong shoulders and an ear open if you need to talk..
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livingItup on June 2, 2006Hey,
Good luck with the USMC Officer Candidate School.
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TylerLee on June 1, 2006O we have the same motto! Except I shorten it! Just like the people in the marine corps do. Your poetry seems very interesting too! I'm not going to say the name of the poem or the writer, but there jes happens to be a good marine corps poem (not called that) around here^^. Semper Fi!!! Oorah!
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StrangerInThisWorld on December 1, 2004i really like your name..i love the word shadow and almost anything to do with it....
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Kerowyn on July 27, 2004Hi...I love your stuff! You're away now, aren't you? Working at camp for the summer, if I recall right. Well, write more when you get back!
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Island of Blue on May 19, 2004your poetry is mystical... i enjoy it. Im awaiting the next new thing u write...
Island of Blue
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Tsubasa on March 30, 2004just to tell I know
A Singing Gerbil isn't all that
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writonthebody on March 23, 2004Ah, you just missed my contest, calling all LOTR fans! Reading your author page, I think you would have liked it.
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SweetSurrender on March 2, 2004Hiya! I was just wondering...do you plan on writing more of your story Pursuit? I really enjoyed it thus far. Keep up the good work!
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darkqueen00 on February 23, 2004freaky...im obssessed with LotR...especially aragorn (viggo<3) and legolas (orlando bloom) both of them are *so* hot!!! AIM me gothika981...i love your works!
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Nam on January 3, 2004I have commented on all your work except for 'Five Seconds Too Late' I will get to that one at another time. Usually short stories bore me, including my own.
I feel that you do rhyme nicely, you could improve on your rhyming by not using so many simplistic words. You should mix it up, make them challenging for yourself and the reader.
Everyone loves a challenge, including myself.
Also, I feel you should dabble in syllable poems, doesn't have to be haiku or cinquain but one could always start there.
And non-rhyming piece, I think those could also be a benefit to you. One shouldn't always stick to one form of writing at a main. Should always mix it up, and then when the confidence is solely there in most or all other categories than one can focus most of their attention to one form.
In my opinion.
You have 1 great piece and 1 excellent piece. The others are good - nice and ok.
You do not have to take or even make note of my suggestions and opinions or anyone elses really. But, one should still see if they add up, and then make your own opinion on that.
I have you on my fav's list, if you wish to read and comment on my work that is fine, you don't have to. But, I will continue on yours.
Have a good day.
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phatalvision on January 2, 2004Hi, I read a comment of yours on someone's poem which led me to visit here.
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Pintsized on December 19, 2003I like Tamora Pierce too! She is a GREAT author! Keep writing!
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Moonbeam fairy on November 9, 2003AHHHHHH!!!! I'm in heaven - I am without a daubt THE BIGGEST LORD OF THE RINGS FAN IN THE WORLD (except for maybe you guys). I love the Elves, just everything about them are beautiful. One of my poems (Hamiel) is and imitation of the type of stuff Tolkien would write about in his poem-stories.
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black-ice87 on October 19, 2003o yay!!!! mercedes lackey and tamora pierce...got
ta love them...i absolutely adore their books...but anyway just decided to comment on that and becuz u like them i am now reading ur poetry...heh e shallow rnt i?
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