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Ah! dear bf... you look sooooooo... sweet...  s
well is this bike urs???  I love bikes...
just asking...
Luv
gf
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 s You're looking as handsome and sweet as ever Sau  s
I also like the ghazal too  I'm embarassed to say that it has taken me a LONG time to grasp the rules behind the form.
Another big  and best wishes...
~genie~
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Nice author pic! You look relaxed. 
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Good luck with your studies. 
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 s and all the best to you. I know I have been remiss in keeping in touch with everyone. Hope all is well with you my friend.  s and all the best wishes too...
~genie~
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 You had a birthday!!!??? I didn't know... lol... so a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY SAU!!!
Hmmm and now I know.. I won't forget  I'm like an elephant with birthdays 
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Edited on Aug 04, 11:07 because ''.
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Happy birthday Sau! 
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This means I missed seeing your Pic.. ;( ..I'll wait for the next "free week".....
I hope all's well at your end. I'm ok, was just caught up with extra work which is still NoT OveR!!
uhh..sorry for all that.. n i cannot msg u, I had tried a lot!
Best of luck with all that you do,
In complete awe of your level of grasping these beautiful poetic forms,
-kunj.
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I want to thank you for the lovely poem you gave me as birthday present 
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I haven't seen you sign in in a few days and so thought that I would stop by and see why.. and now see that work has carried you off! I hope you can escape and come back very soon! a week and you are already missed!!!
Sending best wishes adn big  s.. ~genie~
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ah free week means we get to see your handsome face! Talk to Margaret she can fill you in on how to keep it there even after you lose free week,.....
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well neha asked me to have a look at your snap
so hows going friend??? 
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Ohhhh! Ur such a hunk saurabh...
I'm not lying I loved ur pic... I'll miss u even more now...
Neha
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Hi Margaret,
Yes the verses of Hafez are inspiring and full of wisdom. Thanks for letting me know about the other book.
-Sau.
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How wonderful to see Hafez' wisdom here. They included that poem in their next book on Hafez as well, Hafez: Teachings of the Philosopher of Love. 
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Have a great weekend, I'm back on Sunday (Monday for you!). 
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Hi Saurabh, have you written something in Punjabi or Hindi too?
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are you online Saurabh? would like to talk to you 
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HI SAU,
I'm finally getting around to thanking you for your comment on my home page you left ages ago. I hope you dont think I was very rude to ignore you so. I've been ill and in and out of hospital for a month and so now I am catching up. I'm looking forward to reading some of your work today. Peace and love,
 Tara
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Hi saurabh,you r the person who led me to so many Indians in AP.Thanks for that.I recieved your previous msg,but sorry for replying late.I'm in your group now,so be in touch!
Luv
-Neha
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Crackers would light up the place, and also help ward off the silence with some exciting shrills. But be a little cautious, little bro... 
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I usually leave snacks out for my guests...also a drink of some kind. All I see is a glass of water and it looks like it's been here a while. Maybe a few crackers would be nice. 
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HI saurabh, I am happy to find yet another Indian on AP. I loved your writing style. its great. I think we can be friends.if u please. I am having a lack of Indians on AP. please inform if u know some more. visit my authors page to know me more & hey, kya dosti nibhane ke mood me ho !
-Neha (Another Indian)
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It is mid-day here...and you sent me a giggle as well! So I will have a good day! 
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tee hee! You made me giggle  !!!!
I can always use a good giggle.
I hope you are having a wonderful night!
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thankoo sho musch deear Ms Belzium!
love you lots 
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HUH.. so it is YOU.. when i typed the im i especially typed it for you, i was typing he old link, it said the poet doesnt exist so i had to do the im way. lol.. then when i looked back to my author page to check your messege it said sau, then i came to know it was you, kinda hard work..  .. anyways.. take cares and have a nice time - vic
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I feel ill, have this tummy bug thats going around, soo tired...  and  but only after I get rid of this bug, don't want you getting it........ still thinking of you
Your cyber mommy XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXx
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HAPPY EASTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Bless you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hi Sau, want to wish you a great weekend!
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Thanks for your coment....your haiku was really good too.
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NoIQ on February 19, 2005
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Hi,
Thank you so much for dropping by. I love reading and writing haiku, though I do not consider myself very skillful at the latter.
This is the first time I am hearing of the Pathya Vat. Well, if you think I can try one, I would be enthusiastic in giving a shot. Could you share a few examples of the form, if possible?
Best wishes,
Saurabh.
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NoIQ on February 19, 2005
Saurabh: I was reading through your poetry and was struck by your skill and love of haiku, including variations thereof. You might want to try your hand at the similar Cambodian form Pathya Vat. It has just four lines, each of only four-syllables, with the second and third lines rhyming. One major difference between haiku and pathya vat is that the latter is sung, and can (and is intended to be) strung into longer forms. It's just a suggestion, because you strike me as someone who could really impose your skills on the form (which is far less known to Westerners than is haiku). Anyway, just my two cents -- I enjoyed reading your poetry.
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How's life?
take care,
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Hello. I came to catch up on reading your fine pieces of poetry  .  s ~genielassie~
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You are defininetly a master of of the act of poetry.It is as if I should continue enjoying the pieces all through the eternity.well done.
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