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Sky Princess on November 23Hey, hows it goin?
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Kwalk on August 18hey, i love your page.
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Misguided Truth on August 10I. FCUKING. LOVE. GREEN. EGGS. AND. HAM!!
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redbarchettadrive on July 2Hello friend!
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Misguided Truth on May 2I like green eggs and ham
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white stone on March 24I do not like green eggs and ham, I do not like them...
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Star-of-David on August 29, 2008have i said or done something wrong? you just gave me really short/blunt one liners on msn, and whenever we talk, you're never like that. We always talk like really good friends do...but that just seemed weird =[
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Star-of-David : Hey on May 29, 2008Left you some comments on your poems, hope the feedback is useful =]
David
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celestial : Hi on August 31, 2007I just wanted to say that your poetry is great and a pleasure to read. Keep up the outstanding work - Arati
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Star-of-David : Thank You Midnight on July 16, 2007Thanks, i'm glad you liked the poem Far Away. You are actually right.... I had intended it for a male perspective at first, but when I read it on final draft, I saw it was from a female perspective.
It's the way i've written it, it just doesn't seem right for a mans POV, but I guess others will interpret it differently Glad you liked it 
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Star-of-David on July 10, 2007Hey! im online too hehe =P how are you? x
Dan has your paraty invite
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Star-of-David on June 23, 2007haha.....yeah go for it. I like new pieces =] Actually no, it isn't about Hollie *SHOCK SHOCK* *OMG*, !!!! you got it wrong there hehe =P its about another someone i wish id met ages ago lol hehe I wasnt sure about the poem at first.....but now I like it that I have feedback =D
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Star-of-David on June 23, 2007heyyy =] =] did you enter your poem Silence Before The Storm into my contest? i got a message saying you did....but it hasn't appeared on the contest page :S
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Star-of-David : HEEEEEEEY!! on June 22, 2007Hey Shell, your latest poem inspired me to write a new one revolved around Final Fantasy VII characters.....its pretty awful, but oh well lol =P
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Star-of-David on June 20, 2007hehehehehehe...........see, my advice was good =] glad you decided to stay, keep writing!!!! Davey x
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Star-of-David : Please Don't!! on June 19, 2007Shell, i'll say it nicely first. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do not leave allpoetry, we need you on here, i kinda need you on here (who else will tell me my poetry is good or whos goin to give me the feedback i always get a buzz from and feel happy). You're one of the best (if not the best) young poet I know, and it makes me proud to say you're on my favourites list and i always get inspiration from your poetry.
I mean, if i don't have that sort of friend on here inspiring me to write, how am i going to produce any good poetry? i'll end up writing worse than i do now!!!
Now the mean approach.......SHELL!!! PUT YOU POEMS BACK ON HERE NOW OR I'M COMING OVER THERE RIGHT NOW AND PUTTING THEM BACK MYSELF!!!! you cant leave the site, you're too good to leave!!
Anyway..........please Shell, don't leave the site. I know you probably have a reason too.....please talk to me about it coz its just weird, you were writing some of the best poetry i've seen, and then you just pack it in? Theres gotta be a reason.....leave me a message on bebo/msn and we'll talk, you were there for me when i needed someone.....least i can be is a semi decent mate and make sure everythings ok =]
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learn2luv4real on June 19, 2007you are a realy good poet and every of your work inspiers me pls dont stop doing wat you do cus you do it the best...cheers
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Star-of-David : thankies on June 6, 2007thanks Shell, i'm happy you like my poem. What do you mean 'one day?' hehehe i write great all the time jokes of course i don't lol hey, i can see you writing something really amazing someday too, you're more talented than me!!
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Star-of-David : I'm feeling better..... on May 26, 2007Dunno what id do without u and dan lol im feelin much better now, still down a bit though. i wrote that poem just after we finished on the phone....its exactly how i felt, and still sorta feel.
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Star-of-David : hiiiiiiii!!!!!!! on May 12, 2007hey there =]i posted two new poems, let me know what ya think!!!
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Star-of-David : Hi on May 1, 2007thanks for commenting the song i wrote michelle, hehe. its not that good, but its not bad either =] I have 2 new poems now!!! yay!!!
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SeaWhisper on September 25, 2006Thanks a lot Gaylene...Am glad you liked my poem, and i'm flattered that you think it was the best among so many wonderful others!
lots of love
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FifthDove on September 21, 2006I am sorry if my entry is the worst thing ever. I just couldn't help myself. I have brain freeze too
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night49500 on August 21, 2006thanks for the comment....lol, he's done that to every one of my poems....one of my most loyal....and usless critics
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Omichi on August 3, 2006hey! If you ever make a new contest, please tell me! I liked the other subject, and so i'd like to try again ..
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Vera Rich on August 2, 2006Thank you for the change of colour. It is still not as good as black on a white or pale background would be... but it is now at least readable - though rather painfully dazzling... However, I am not in good shape today... I have just come from the cancer clinic where I had my latest chemotherapy infusionwhich affects everything in the system - including making my eyes even worse than usual..
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aslanlight on May 30, 2006Hi I just came to your page cause you read my 'River Voyage' poem, thanks! I see you're a fellow Brit and student, you must be at school still. I'm studying with Exeter Uni but not for long. Glad you liked my poem as it's the best one I've written, or one of them I think.
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vocalanarchist on May 30, 2006Thank you so much for leaving such a lovely comment on my piece of poetry "Waste". It means the world to me that I have found yet another beautiful individual that can relate to something I created. You're awesome !
Alex
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