Guestbook entries for Runawaytrain

• asymmetry on July 9, 2006

  I remember you. Danna Hobart sent me to your page when I first joined the site. Hi again!
• AgeofAquarius on June 24, 2006

  Great writes...looked thru your collection..I THOUGHT I saw an anigif here on your pages of a train racing by...was it here???
• poetryality on March 7, 2006

  Hello there lady. I just had you on my mind and thought I'd stop by and say hello. I hope all is well with you. Give me a ringy-dingy when you log on to let me know you're okay.
  
  Much Love,
  Renee
• Runawaytrain on January 24, 2006

  Who was it that said a poem is never finished, simply abandoned? I feel that way about my poetry.
• Carole Dudley on January 23, 2006

  R.T., thank you for this thoughtful contest. But especially for critiquing my poem. Your observations got me to go back and take a second look. Don't know if you are the same, but I am never really done with a poem. It seems to evolve and grow over time. I would love it if you had time to reread the latest version. Maybe I am posting my poetry too soon. Much of my stuff needs work. Thanks again, RT. You made my day.
• MarkMyWords on January 14, 2006

  Hi, I am contacting you because of the Contest: Allwrite Magazine Poetry Contest (young adults/teens, 19 and under) Prewrites Allowed. I was hoping you would be willing to critique a couple pieces of mine that I am considering.They are on my poetry page, and are called Like the Lightning and Forbidden Innocence. I would be so thankful if you could do this for me.
• Aurielle on January 10, 2006

  A real gold trophy
  To bring my heart anew
  To braid my heart in unity
  To replace this baleful cue
  
  To become publish
  Only an gold trophy insist
  For an exquisite applause
  Can not bracelet my wrist
  
  A true trophy to exalt
  My heart with great poise
  To enclose my ears to my heart
  Then to other’s noise
  
  As the path is shorten
  My whistling impede
  Such a gold trophy my heart
  Will surely take heed
  
  A medal to applaud
  For my long year’s lore
  To buff my poignant chest
  With a glaze of valor
• Aurielle on January 10, 2006

  Hey my name is Aurielle and writting is everything to me as long with art and crafts performing and music but mainly I do alot of writting. Please have a look at my portfolio at my site poet/aurielle. Please do because i want to get published as a well-known writer. My dreams is to be like Edgar Allen Poe as well as Shakesphear which my birthdate is alike APril 23 though they aren't sure if that's his date lol but please have a look. i have about 50 other at home I will shortly put it up also.
• Runawaytrain on January 10, 2006

  It doesn't suck. I think it would make great song lyrics, but it doesn't fit the theme for the month. We are looking for poems about poetry. I don't see how this applies to the poetic process. Sounds more like a party to me.
  
  The excessive caps that you use would automatically disqualify you. The winners of this contest will be published, and I won't publish something that uses caps excessively without purpose.
  
  The rhyme works well for a song. Songs thrive on forced rhyme and cliche, but as far as poetry goes, those are the two big things a writer needs to stay away from.
  
  The third line is what is known as forced rhyme because it really makes no sense and does not add to the congruency of the poem, it was simply chosen as a rhyming line.
  
  It has a very steady rhythm to it. It looks to me like you have a true talent for lyric writing.
• radio-panda on January 9, 2006

  i may as well just give you the poem cus its really short,
  
  Partied All Night To the Duke Box Machine,
  Played With the Guys on my Tambourine,
  Found In On The Floor With a picture Of The Queen,
  Made Me Feel Good Like A Hit Of Morphine,
  Can you believe I was only Seventeen?
  
  see, its only five lines,
  
  thank you so much!
  from radio-panda
  
  
  
• Runawaytrain on January 9, 2006

  I clicked on the link, but if didn't work. I will be glad to critique the poem. Please try posting the link again.
• radio-panda on January 8, 2006

  Hey train,
  
  I would like to enter the Allwrite Magazine Poetry Contest and was wondering if my poem 'Can You Believe' is suitable or not. If it is could you please revise it for me?
  
  I know it sounds dumb, but I don't want to waste your time with something that sucks.
  
  heres the link allpoetry.com/Poem/1657789.
  
  Thank you in advance,
  From radio-panda
• RollingStone on December 25, 2005

  have a very merry christmas, train
  and may your stockings be stuffed with naughty things
  ~travis
  Edited on Dec 25, 2:08 because 'typos of course'.
• lordoftherings on December 24, 2005

  I just stopped by today
  Hope you are having a wonderful day
  That's festive and really gay
  Because I would have it no other way
  
  Champagne at midnight...bootie call,
  watch out for St. Nick, he ain't that tall
  Drink moderately so you don't fall
  And if you're quesy--lean against the wall
  
  What started out as a little note
  Became a poem the size of a boat
  My head is medically afloat
  My dog has now turned into a goat
  
  Happy Holidays Gregg
  
• just rob on November 24, 2005

  Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family. I trust It's warmer there.lol.
  Have a groovy day!
  Peace
• throwing the rocks on October 14, 2005

  Hello. I'd just like to say I like your name. That's all. Peace out, rock hard. -Tori
• on July 30, 2005

  nah you aint old, dont be silly x
• RollingStone on July 4, 2005

  
  
  Happy Fourth of July, train!
  
  ~travis
  
• E A Collins on June 30, 2005

  Hello. I submitted a write for consideration. When do you respond? I would like to know if this suits, or perhaps I could edit, or resubmit?
  Peace,
  Ed
• just rob on June 23, 2005

  Thanks to your suggestion and help one of mine came out in events quarterly on tues. Thanks again.
  Peace,Rob
• Runawaytrain on April 23, 2005

  I am sort of overwhelmed right now with the poetry contests. Please remind me after they are judged to look at them. I think that autobiographies are very interesting.
• Think on April 23, 2005

  Would you please take a moment or two to look at my first draft for your AllWrite Magazine contest. It would be greatly appreciated. I await your critique. Thank you!
  
  http://allpoetry.com/Poem/1212686
  
  Lisa Ann ~ ~
• Lovely Luci on April 23, 2005

  I hope you don't mind me asking, but since I saw you offered to critique poems that were going to be put into the Allwrite magizine, I was wondering if you could read my piece "Visiting the Free." I put in my author comments to give a detailed critique, and all I've gotten so far is "good poem," which is really annoying. If you could critique it, I'd be in your debt
• Andy Stephenson on April 23, 2005

  I've started an autobiography. Doing biographies on Dad and Grandfather. Sis, Mom and Grandmother.
  
  I have just featured "White Knight isn't apathetic anymore". I write about anything.
  
  Andy
• asymmetry on April 4, 2005

  Hi blue eyes. Just stopping by to say hello and to thank you for being so nice, that applause was unexpected. Last month I was going to enter your Fire and Ice poetry contest, but decided to enter the Allwrite story contest. I'm looking forward to this month's poetry contest though. ciao!
• Beatrice on March 29, 2005

  I just want to say, that even by just reading your poetry, not only do i think you are an awesome poet! but an amazing person! i am in awe of your strength and your spirit! and i have no idea how i would of coped in the situations you have. I just wanted you to know how much respect i have for you.
  
  I do not wish to sound cheesy or like a suck-up, i have jsut been completely honest! keep writing!x
• on March 28, 2005

  woooooooooooo hoooooooooo
  
  just doin a flap by
• Mickie27 on March 25, 2005

  Thanks for adding me.
• wbiro on March 20, 2005

  I see you write on a variety of topics and in many combinations- angst, personal, society, with a touch of humor and hope- very real combination! Glad I could transport you into the world of sci-fi for a moment with 'Doomed Missions to Mars'! Yes, a radioactive giant baby would have been an interesting end to one of the missions!
• Zahhar on March 19, 2005

  hey we have something in common, i spent age 15 through 17.5 as a runaway on the highways of america. when i was 17.5 years old i ran into some members of an organization that helped me seek emancipation so i could begin living my own life as an individual and not a runaway, and they succeeded in helping me. they were members of the st. vincent depaul charity organization.
  
  anyway, oddly enough, "Frostbite" was written in memory of my time as a runaway, drawing from the time i spent in north of the country during the winter, homeless and penniless and afraid. but, the bitterness over my life and the circumstances of my life let another sort of cold in... the soul destroying kind.
• choke-on-the-truth on March 10, 2005

  hey im a runaway teen now. ive run away a few times before, the longest was only 4 or 5 days thought. im 14 now, the 1st time i ran away was when i was 11. its kind of becoming a habit that's getting worse and worse as days go by. im seriously thinking about permantantly running away, or at least going further away (the furthest was 20 miles about). how did you stop your runaway problem? i rlly need help with it. i have nowhere to go but i can't stay here
• Keegan A Combes on February 25, 2005

  Sorry to waste your time. If you ever come up with another one, I'll try to make better, and follow the directions carefully, and write carefully.
• Midnight Lace on February 1, 2005

  I just got done reading and commenting on your "Why?" collection. I think you do an amazing job of expressing yourself. My hat is off to you. I hope that your finding the strength in your friends and family to help you through your pain. Best of wishes to you and yours.
• The Phoenix Returns on January 24, 2005

  check mine plz..
  
  allpoetry.com/list/11821
• just rob on January 21, 2005

  Thank you so much, again.[from a hotel room on the frozen Mississippi], I would like to use my real nane, Rob Ganson, Hailing from Washburn,Wi nice to meetcha!
• sleepysmile3 on January 21, 2005

  Eeeek thank you sooooo much for gold on 'Speech' in the Allwrite poetry contest!! I am so excited right now! So everything needs an exclamation point!
  
  And I am going to see my James from the poem today after not seeing him for 3 months! Woo!! I love Friday!
  
  ~Rosey
• Kitsune-Tears on January 11, 2005

  its supposed to be forgive... not orgive
• EstherG on January 10, 2005

  Hey! Happy New Year, and hope you had a great festive season. Sorry I'm still not around much...I've finally got my own computer, but I can't get the internet connection installed until the end of January, so bear with me! Thank you so much for reviewing my poem in AllWrite - unfortunately, I can't view the magazine at all! I tried the link you sent me, but it comes up with an error message, and I tried to access it via the magazine itself, but I get a red page saying contents and next, and then 'the page cannot be displayed' comes up. I don't know if this is a general problem or if it's because I'm not currently a preferred member...? Speak soon XXX
• C J Weatherholt on January 8, 2005

  I was on AP and I looked to the left and saw your name, I LOVE THAT SONG!! I don't know if it has anything to do with the song or not, but it's still an awesome song. Off to read your work because anyone with a name like that should be an awesome writer! Much luvs~Crys
• C Barnes on January 8, 2005

  May you and your family find peace and harmony this new year.
• Absynthia on January 6, 2005

  Ugh, late merry christmas and happy new year, dear
• JadedWanderer on January 4, 2005

  Merry christmas to you too! Sorry for the slowness, viruses tend to slow down my AP-ness a bit. Happy new year as well.
  Jade
• zara on January 1, 2005

  happy 2005, train. hope the year brings you great joy.
  
  
• jaunty pill on January 1, 2005

  Happy 2005!
  
  I hope all the most wonderful moments are captured forever. If that is possible , It is poets who will find the way....
  
  
  
  And be well...
  
  Love ,
  james
• santori on December 25, 2004

  Merry Christmas
• Blondita on December 25, 2004

  Merry Xmas Runaway Hope the ny is filled with all thats beautiful XX
• maryannde on December 25, 2004

  Merriest of Christmas' to you! May you and your family embrace the day and each other!
  
  
  Mary Ann
• Cisco Kid on December 25, 2004

  
  Merry Christmas, Train!
  Hehehehe
  
  ~Cisco
  
• RollingStone on December 25, 2004

  
  a most merry christmas wish to you!
  have a wonderful holiday season
  
  ~travis
  
• Pamela on December 25, 2004

  Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!
  Please stay safe & take care..
  I send you much love & peace for yourself & your family
  Pamela

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