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New-n-Improved : You Are A Queen on November 24, 2007I just wanted to give props to the queen of All Poetry because I have read a few of your poems just never got to comment on them. Anyway, I am the King of AllPoetry and one day we should do a collab together. Think about it. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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Ogreatbaldone on April 17, 2006I see you got my email. glad to have yo back at AP... dont forget to change your password( if you havent already)
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Shoshan. on August 10, 2005Your poems have good meaning, and they are emotional, but your grammar and spelling are atrocious. I can barely understand your words sometimes. I'm not trying to be mean to you, but you should get some help with this problem. It will make a big difference in your poetry, a difference that everyone (including yourself) will appreciate!
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Angelfiregirl3 on March 16, 2004hey! thanxz for the comments on my poems. I read ur poems, they express lots of feelings....Good work! Oh and about the death of ur friend...u can't change the past but also, that doesnt mean u have to just forget about her...u can remember the times u spent with her and know that she is watching over u...anyways...just try to be happy if u can because ur friend might be in sorrow knowing/seeing that u r in the pain of her death. Best of luck to u!
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QueenofAllPoetry on October 22, 2003How Can I be Happy when I am fill with hurts and pain in my heart,like losing my best friend Whom was keeping me alive and depress free. She is gone and i still can't believe it.
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NurseChilly on October 22, 2003Move on from the past
Write into the future
Choosing yourself before other's
Walk with pride in knwoing it's all yours
Be happy
Be yourself
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John Ratliff on October 22, 2003Thank you for your comment on remember, but Im no woman. I have a penis and everything, (wow).
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forget-me-not on September 14, 2003very unique name.....i shall read your poetry
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Tears Of Blood on August 29, 2003hey your stuff is really good keep up the work
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Deke on August 18, 2003Hi,
I am not a greeter or anything like that, but I can give you the names of a few people that I think are good. You might like to check out these poetesses; I am listing them in no particular order just as they come in my head. AnnD she is good; she lives in the UK aka Britain. Gemini and Angelica are good and both live in Australia. PoetrySmiles is good; she lives in AZ and is approximately your age. WaryDreamer and Maureen are both really good; one of them lives in PA and the other in NM. Lurie is also very good as well as Rubee; RedStormy is another good one that you might want to check out. Symitar is another good poetess that you might like to check out. Lots of us leave comments on our own poems to answer a comment left by someone else. I am one of those. If you go to critiques that you have left on your authors page, you can click on the different poems that you have left comments on and it will take you straight to that poem to see if the author has left any comments to answer your commnent.
Damon D. Brewer
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silverxlining on August 13, 2003thanks for the comment on my poem!
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Nam on August 8, 2003See this up above to the right hand side of your screen:
yours | add | ims | options | logout ?
See the 'add' button, you can 'add' that poem above into the site.
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symitar on August 6, 2003Hi, and welcome to All Poetry, I hope you enjoy this site as much as we all do! Please allow me to tell you a bit about our site.
Take time to check out the different kinds of membership, and see the differences between Uber and Preferred Membership. You have been given four (4) days Preferred Membership as a free trial, but don’t worry, after the trial period you will still be able to post your poetry. For help, our Moderators, (their names are highlighted in blue), will be able to help you, also Greeters (highlighted in green) or go to the ‘Help' tab for more information. Don’t be afraid to ask for help, just make contact and we will help you find your way around.
There is a monthly challenge you may enter as a newcomer to All Poetry. Click the Contests tab and look for the challenge headed for New Members only. You could win 300/100/50 points by entering. You may also click on http://allpoetry.com/poem/299689.
For each poem you post please try to critique 4 other poems. This is a matter of courtesy, and you will find the more you critique, the more people will read your poetry.
This site does not only offer modern poetry, but as you find your way around you will find many interesting places to visit. ‘Old Poetry’, ‘Story Write’ – if you feel you have a story to share. We also have ‘All Philosophy’ site, so please feel free to join in the discussions there. There are opportunities available where you can learn more about writing and improve your skills, too.
Promoting in the Chat Box is not necessary as we have a ‘Shameless Promotion Area’, as well as a ‘Featured’ area, where you can promote your work so others may see, read and enjoy.
This site continues to grow and prosper and I’m happy to be able to welcome you to be a part of it. Just relax and have fun, this is a great place to hang out!
~Becky~
Oklahoma, USA
p.s. For more information or if you have any questions, you can also try these links:
http://www.allpoetry.com/poets/AP%20Greeters
http://allpoetry.com/Column/297499
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QueenofAllPoetry on August 6, 2003
"Release"
This pain deep inside
It burns and it aches
My addiction overcomes
My will and it breaks
I feel like I need
To release all these thoughts
I try to relax
But now I feel lost
I look for my tool
Which seems like my friend
In the end I'll regret
My relief is a sin
Right now I don't care
My mind has turned numb
I turn to this pain
The release is welcome
Sharp silver glimmer
As I grasp it in my hand
It moves across my flesh
And becomes all I have
I stare at it blankly
The incision on my arm
I never imagined
It could cause so much harm
The blood starts to swell
And run down my skin
The pressure released
Again I gave in
I don't know what to do
Because this habit won't end
The scars form to remind
And my feelings don't mend
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