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Kahliya on July 1, 2007For a friend and a poet!
Your words spoke to me clearly and with such understanding! Your good, true and kind heart shone through despite everything you had to deal with in your life! You remained a true and good person where so many others would not have.
You were a wonderful poet and your work will live on in the mind and memories of those who had the priviledge to read your work!
I truly hope that you have found your peace and the happiness you so deserve.
You will be missed
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Grimlathak on April 4, 2007I take this moment to pay tribute to a dear friend of which whoms strength of will I admire. Phoenix has been dealt a harsh blow in her life and even in the depths of deep depression and insurmountable odds she has survived to tell the tale. A tale of deep loss which nearly killed her and you can feel her pain clearly in the details of her writes of which I strongly reccomend all who see this testimony to read.
Phoenix, in spite of it all you are prevailing. Even more you are on the right track to a better and brighter future of which you so deeply deserve. Your strong will never ceases to amaze me and with your ambitions you shall go far in this life and also touch the lives of others who walk in similar shoes with an impact of undeniable significance. That you should so selfflessly desire to help others in the aftermath of your trajedy makes you a great woman in my book. SO clearly in my mind I can see your dear mother smiling down on your with her featered wings of white and a deeply proud look upon her face as she watches over her daughter. A pride I similarly share when I think on you. Rise from the ashes dear Phoenix, begin life anew.
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Grimlathak on March 28, 2007Im very glad things are taking a happier turn for you my friend. Let there be blue skies forever in your future and know that Ive been thinking of you and found this for your enjoyment. I hope you like it!
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Patience15 on March 20, 2007Wow... I'm so sorry about your mom. I have a feeling it has to do with something in your letter although i don't think i should give my opinion since i don't the situation. Really i don't know what it's like to lose a mother and that's way you have really touched me because even though my mother abandoned like 5 months ago it's not the same really and i really do feel for you. I admire your strength and i know you will be able to move on in life. I pray for you. Lots of love. Emily
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Kahliya on March 20, 2007Hi - i'm really loving your poetry
You have great skills when it comes to rhyming and such amazing ways of getting your point out there!
A lot of your work seems so poignant - i love the feeling in it!!
your piece 'the bogey man comes out to play is amazing!!
Also - cool screenname!!
definitely one of my favourites!!!!
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Grimlathak : Budding nicely on February 28, 2007I'm enjoying your work so far. Flow is definitly your strong point and I see that you are capable of great diction as well as emotional expression. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future. You've got talent and the potential to go far. Your skills are already budding nicely.
Oh and also after reading this autor page I did a little research on the origin of that name of yours. Seems that show was based on a series of children't fantasy novels . Here's a link if you are interested in learning more.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Phoenix_and_the_Carpet
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grannyeri : Welcome on January 31, 2007Welcome to this great AP site. Thanks for commenting on my poem earlier. Hope you enjoy writing, reading, commenting, entering contests and maybe taking some classes while here. The most important thing is to have fun. If you need any ehlp just send me a message and i will try to assist in any way I can. Have a great day...
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