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acoustical on May 13, 2007i think i might finally get your writing.
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PetrifiedAfforded : guess I should ask here too for your skill that could linger... on May 11, 2007Thank you for various emphasizing messages, yet as I've had by my poem recently my preference is not over icons as there's too much chance with history I'm uncomfortable with.
Nature matched ones without connotations crayoning them usually go well with me, but I'm not out to build a palace out of purple flowers either?
10:06 I angle to color clock though, at side I should be asleep, oh, while red mark on skin can be from correct squeeze or recoverable mosquito bite and paper reads can show repellants by lifestyle once in awhile -
detectivediana : i cannot afford to be petrified on this sandy day on May 11, 2007i love your poetry. i hope you'll keep writing!
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sublimewriter on May 11, 2007
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To The Pointe on April 20, 2007I'm so glad to see you posting poems again! I truly do enjoy reading them, although I sorely lack the time to stop and comment. But, just know, I am reading and applauding each one. Keep up the wonderful work, friend. Hope you're well.
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sublimewriter on April 18, 2007hey, thank you for writing such original and fresh poetry.
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FallinUpTheStairs on February 15, 2007Thanks for the comment on my poem, you put a lot of effort itno it, which I appreciate, though it will take me an equal effort to decipher your words.
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voices on December 11, 2006I agree language is flexlike not rigid for fashon .
grasshopper sees multiple edging forward for linguistic skill.
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Long Road Home : there's structure to your randomness on December 3, 2006Took me a couple reads to read the message between the message and the spaces between them. Your style of writing is puzzling to me and others with jigsawed brains that fit square pieces together in round holes and if not for the cohesiveness of language languishing on the page my puzzle pieces would remain squarely boxed and sealed with paper-strip glue but not kisses.
Thanks for the compound comment on Joads & Zest
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waydownuponjoy on October 8, 2006I wanted to leave a brief comment about your favorite author and since I wasn't that familiar with the one mentioned, I did a thorough search and came up with the best interpretation (one that clothed my nakedness)of aforesaid scripture: Please delete the instant message after reading and I thank you for mentioning it as it was my early morning breakfast! joy
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roxix on September 6, 2006I appreciate your words and breakdown? If im wrong correct me. You've taken time to read and gently pull apart my words at their seems, though Im still trying to fathom all of what you've writen. Not often to you come across someone who writes so profoundly and poetically; admirable.
Again, I appreciate the time you've taken to glimpse at the little emotions of my life, the words though as lovely as they are, are never justly enough to discribe the pangs of love, or life, or death.
Though as timeless as they may be, will never do justice to anyone's thoughts or emotions; or at least mine. For me, I write becuase I love to, but I am still left with some empty feeling of unjustification to the remnants of emotions that never die. -
C h e l s e a on July 31, 2006Thank you though i'm sure you get this alot after you've read someones stuff. You are right about Last day of Commencment... it was just thrown together at the end. I've wanted to, though never taken poetry to a professional level. I feel as if i am inadiquite... heck i can't even spell correctly half the time. But i do appreciate your critism! most deffiantly. Thank you again. I will have to put more thought and time into poems, so they come not so choppy, and with a flow, and a meaning. Thanks!
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Skippergirl on July 31, 2006hey, wow. thanks for leaving that comment on "the ocean"- it's pretty cool to have someone take the time to really look at your poems, so i appreciate it. i'm just going to read a few of yours now...
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fathom me on July 29, 2006Hi there!
I read two of your poems.. I think I'll need a very very long lesson in vocabulary and metaphoric language before I even attempt in commenting on any of your work
Keep writing
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PetrifiedAfforded on July 23, 2006Tabitha-Robin, not a tarry! Thank you for your prompt welcome as I can't make a milestone without an accumulation of geological terms of pebbles or people! Nice to know I didn't stumble across an uppity site. It may not be commendable how I write yet, but condemnable?
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Tabitha-Robin on July 23, 2006Nice to have you on this site. I hope you will enjoy AP as much as I do. I can't wait to read some of your work. Everyone here is so nice and supportive. I hope you will make your self at home.
If you ever need anything you can just send me a message and I will do my best to
you out.
allpoetry.com/Application/2132448/
allpoetry.com/poem/2139508/
allpoetry.com/poets/Tabitha-Robin/
AP is a great place to
out on poetry.
Have fun. You will like it better than a cup of
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