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  • bachelorette on February 7, 2006
    So I'm not angry any more (not that I was ever angry at you, jynx). I got 3x as many good reviews as I did bad reviews. And the bad reviews spurred me to do some editing, and I'm happier with the poem, now. So, thank you.

    -Renee
  • bachelorette on February 6, 2006
    Grrr. Okay, now I'm angry. Have you any idea the kind of bs I took because you wanted to go and promote my poem? I was actually graded! My poem was GRADED! A C, by the way. Yep. It seems people either love it or hate it. Apparently, I'm too smart for my readers, yet I also use my words incorrectly. Yep. I'm pissed off, little man.

    -K
  • bachelorette on February 6, 2006
    All right, Mr. jynx. You can keep your points to yourself.

    I'm happy enough.

  • bachelorette on January 25, 2006
    Guess who shares a birthday with Scotland's most famous poet, Robert Burns? You do! As well as Alicia Keys and Virginia Woolf. Congrats! All I got is Reese Witherspoon and William Shatner (though, Bill's cool, I guess).

    (they need a Happy Birthday emoticon)
  • bachelorette on October 12, 2005
    Here's a little surprise for when you log in. The smileys. I wish gmail would do smileys. Anyway... I posted the story. It's ugh.. it's different. I don't think I did it right, speaking on cultural issues and all. I also think it might need a different title. What do you think? I kind of like "49ers" because calls to mind the gold rushers of '49, but also the football team (which I don't like). I don't know.

    Have you ever tried limericks? I've only written one, myself. I can't stand writing form poetry. Even those little senryu I did killed me. Have you tried senryu? Perhaps you could write a string of senryu based on your experience in the Marine Corps. That'd be cool.

    Yeah. I know you can't respond to this message. I'm just taking up room on your page. I want to monopolize your page, and kick leannewales off. And if anyone ever visits your page (for whatever reason) they'll see how important I think you are and will read your poem, maybe even glance at "Deserted." Have you thought of splitting it up into chapters on this site? It doesn't matter. Writing.Com's better for story reviews, anyway.

    Did you ever hear from your stalker again?

    Oh, and don't forget to remind me that there's something I want to ask you. I don't just want to ask it and that be it; I'd rather it be part of a reply. So... I've been meaning to ask you something. Okay. Curious?

    -Renee
    Edited on Oct 12, 11:08 p.m. because ''.
  • Monolith on June 8, 2005
    And a happy summertime to you! I'm so sorry I haven't been around much lately, but I'm out of town on business for a few weeks, and I don't get much internet time. I see you've been busy with Bells and Footfalls and a few others, and I promise to give your port all the attention it deserves just as soon as I get back.

    Cheers,
    -jynx
  • bachelorette on June 7, 2005
    Happy summertime to you.

    -K
  • Monolith on May 2, 2005
    Long time no read! I'm doing well, thank you, though the past few months have really been a whirlwind for me. I haven't had much time to do any reading or writing per se (I've been stagnant for almost a YEAR now). When all is said and done, I don't think I'm really COMPELLED to write the way you seem to be, for me the process is more akin to pulling teeth. Nevertheless, I do occasionally find time to peck at a sequel to 'Deserted' and a few other projects, but I wouldn't hold my breath if I were you.

    I hope things are going well for you, with college or lack thereof . . . higher education wasn't in my cards either, you know. Best of luck with everything.

    Anyways, thanks for stopping by. I'll be stopping by your port here when I get a chance.

    Warm regards,
    -jynx
  • bachelorette on April 29, 2005
    Heya. Just wanted to drop in and say hello. I don't know if you login anymore, but who knows? I hope things are well in CA and over at Writing.Com. I think if you've written anything new, you should inform me (I keep a dead account over there), but the last time I checked you were the same.

    Anyway... (when you get this) I hope you have a wonderful week.

    -Renee
  • K Renee on January 30, 2004
    jynx... as in user:jynx510 does not exist?

    -Renee
  • leannewales on January 30, 2004
    Hello jynx! I would like to welcome you to AllPoetry, this is a place where you can feel comfortable in posting all your own work and at the same time receive constructive and encouraging feedback.
    To make that feedback a continuing support we ask that you also comment on other people’s poetry, giving your opinion on four other poets for each piece of work you submit of your own would be greatly appreciated and is also a good way of getting to know new friends!
    Please remember to treat other members with the curtesy and respect you would like to receive yourself..thankyou!!

    There are lots of features you can check out too, you can add backgrounds etc to your work. Contest are run regularly in which you can win virtual trophies that will be added to your home page and points are awarded too (points are the monetary system in the AllPoetry world) when you earn points you can use them to promote your work and to hold your own contests.
    We have a special contest for new members too….check this month’s out here allpoetry.com/Contest/436085
    As a new member you have been awarded a free sample preferred membership, please don't worry when this runs out as you will still be able to post your poetry etc but do check out information on preferred memberships, as there are many benefits.
    If you have any problems or questions don't hesitate to contact any of the site helpers, they can be identified by different badges by their names and in the column to your right they are highlighted in green (greeters) and blue (moderators)

    You can find out about greeters and what we do by clicking on this link www.allpoetry.com/poets/AP%20Greeters
    Below are some other links that you may find useful
    allpoetry.com/Column/307514
    allpoetry.com/Column/306041 a column written by Barbara for emoticons
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    I hope you enjoy your new experience with AllPoetry, have a great time!

    Best Wishes Leanne xxxx
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