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XISeeHopeInYourEyes on October 1, 2006hey how have u been lately?
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Mentally Speaking on May 13, 2006
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Wrench-X on May 1, 2006I was going to say that if you feel certain feelings for one then the other you should be very careful with your decition because even the one that sounds the be you may have put too much thought into it, listen to your heart not mind
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XISeeHopeInYourEyes on February 4, 2006i just wanted to thank you for commenting on my poem. not many people have said to what u did! and i appreciate that! i will take into consideration what u said about "not all preps are the same" maybe i can figure that out for myself someday! i think that u sound like a really cool person 2!! messege me sometime!
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Mentally Speaking on January 27, 2006I just had to add you to my favorites like I said I would! I like your poetry, its really nice. Imma always continue to check up on you. Go to my page and read some of mines or read up on my page about me, you know. Some of my comments might seem detailed but I'm just tryna help you and make sure you get every ounce of help possible to build you into a great writer because comments and criticicism helps in tha long run. I am 16 but I turn 17 next Wednesday. Which is February 1st. Yes I will be 1 year from grown. And I noticed you ain't in no groups, join my group Poetry Virgins, and I Just Wanna Write, Soulpoets, UrbanPoets.. That's all I am in but I'm sure you will find some that fit you. These ae great groups. They will help you get seen in some way.
Just the other day actually I received two notices, that there is a college that wants me to perform at their open mics, Delstate University and University of Delaware. I will be going to their sessions and performing with others. Which will strengthen my name. And I will soon be gettin published eventually. That's what I want, just to make it. But if you check out my page, dome that favor.. Then you will learn a lot about me.
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TruthHurtsDenial on January 10, 2006Your poems are really good and you should definitely keep writing because there's always someone else out there that will relate you what you wrote.
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