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Hi Melodies. how are u? what u up to?
long time since i been on here, i wrote another poem, pls read it and tell me what u think.
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wow....you've given a lot of comments. you sure have a lot of trophies too. but you only have 2 poems? how do you have so many trophies with just 2 poems? lol. anyways, nice page. very impressive!
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Stopping bye to let you know we are doing good hope you are also take care ,
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Pablo Picasso Feels Blue
Today I am feeling rather blue,
the sun is not shining very bright,
perhaps I will paint my shoe
before I go out on the town tonight.
Humanity sews its creative self in
tattered poverty's torn pocket,
some art then I will begin,
not my shoe, but a space rocket.
I am feeling extremely rosy now,
for I went to the circus for inspiration,
a brush stroke captured a cat's meow,
then I waltzed off to the train station.
I think that I will go and visit Paris,
my friend - Georges Braque still
has my Rubik's cube, he's heartless,
maybe I'll leave it him in my will.
I'd better get dressed first though,
well, I like painting in the nude,
it makes me feel artistic you know,
I am a genius and a real cool dude.

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Griswold : Knock, knock, anybody home??? on September 4
I was just sitting looking at stupid contests and thought to myself: Self I wonder where all the fun Melodies contests went to? So I came to have a look.  One poem? I'm thinking I must have read one poem of yours at some point somewhere. But then again maybe not, I really am remiss in that category for everybody.
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Hello stranger how are we this morning/afternoon/night??
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i remember often your kindndness and the joy you have brought to all you meet. i see your mission here has been an honorable one.
much peace to your eternal soul.
Darin.
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Hey whats happenin ...ahvent seen yah fer awhile and yah poetry only one to read ....hope yah not leavin us ..just when i found a great friend
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Another one who will miss your wise words and wonderful poems
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I too will miss you, you are such a positive, fun loving, good natured soul, you have single-handedly made AP a much nicer place! God bless you in all you do.
Brother dennis 
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I already miss you 
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i will miss you. 
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Hey there Melodies. It has taken me too long to come here and sign your guest book. I apologize. I truly thank you and appreciate all of the comments you leave after reading my work. Please forgive me for taking so long to return the favor.
Doreatha
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You have really good poems that I've enjoyed reading on your site.
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Tqop : I love your background. on May 15
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Hide in your shell cos the world is out to bleed you for a ride
What will you gain making your life a little longer?
Heaven or Hell, was the journey cold that gave your eyes of steel?
Shelter behind painting your mind and playing joker
Too Frightening to listen to a stranger
Too Beautiful to put your pride in danger
You're waiting for someone to understand you
But you've got demons in your closet
And you're screaming out to stop it
Saying life's begun to cheat you
Friends are out to beat you
Grab on to what you scramble for
Don't let the tears linger on inside now
Cos it's sure time you gained control
If I can help you, if I can help you
If I can help you, just let me know
Well, let me show you the nearest signpost
To get your heartback and on the road
If I can help you, if I can help you
If I can help you, just let me know.
All through the night as you like awake and hold yourself so tight
What do you need, a second-hand-movie-star to tend you?
I as a boy, I believed the saying the cure for pain was love
How would it be if you could see the world through my eyes?
Too Frightening- the fire's getting colder
Too Beautiful- to think you're getting older
You're looking for someone to give an answer.
But what you see is just an illusion
You're surrounded by confusion
Saying life's begun to cheat you
Friends are out to beat you
Grab on to what you can scramble for
Don't let teh tears...
... just let me know
I wanna know...
I wanna know you...
Well let me know you
I wanna feel you
I wanna touch you
Please let me near you
Can you hear what I'm saying?
Well I'm hoping, I'm dreamin', I'm prayin'
I know what you're thinkin'
See what you're seein'
Never ever let yourself go
Hold yourself down, hold yourself down
Why d'ya hold yourself down?
Why don't you listen, you can
Trust me,
There's a place I know the way to
A place there is need to feel you
Feel that you're alone
Hear me
I know exactly what you're feelin'
cos all your troubles are whithin you
please begin to see that I'm just bleeding to
Love me, love you
Loving is the way to
Help me, help you
- Why must we be so cool, oh so cool,?
Oh, we're such damn fools...
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To a special friend ...Happy Belated Birthday ...
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i know ur really gunna like my bg...but no stealing it lol!
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here in haiku land
spring bounces an easter egg
chocolate curls melt breath
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I started a group for LDS poets and friends or people who wanna know more about our beliefs 
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O Dear General Can I Wipe Your Windpipe?
I think I’ll have a bagel
Or maybe blow a bugle
Perhaps I’m being frugal;
But I like ‘cos my name’s Dougal.
Some cream cheese for me please,
It will put me at my ease,
I know I’ve got this wheeze,
But I’ve got no mad disease.
Let me play my bloody pipe,
All I want to do is wipe
The general’s pleasant stripe,
O’ it’s all a load of tripe!

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this background IS Gorgous!!!!
You have a lot of trophies here!
Have a great Day
Rosey 
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I love your background!!!
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you've left some lovely comments on my work so I came to visit your house. . .and found a gorgeous background and a friendly person. . .  will definitely read some of your work, poet.  hope you're well 
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Tqop : Hello there, on March 5
I love you page.
Evemauy.
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Aww haha thank you!
Glad to meet you too. 
<3
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Pretty page! I love your name 
Love from Summer Honey.
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Happiest of Holidasy wished for you sprinkled with lotsof smiles! 
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Puppydog : MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!! on December 24, 2008
I hope this Christmas will be all you want it to be!  's

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Pamela A Lamppa : Wishing you a Christmas as Beautiful as you are - for all that you do. ((hug)) Merry Christmas!! on December 24, 2008
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Merry Christmas Melodies!!  -Slick 
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It's a little early but ~
Merry Christmas
David & I hope the New Year of 2009 brings you friendship, light, love, happiness, wealth and health ♥
Stay safe & Have fun 
Lots of Hugs & Love from Australia,
David and Manda
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