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I came to read your Nighhawk poem and it's gone! Should have kept a copy while I had a chance, I love it. Best of luck, I know you'll do well, look forward to reading you in print.
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Max? You're Leaving? *sniff sniff* I'm going to miss you. Good luck with *real* publication though, I know you'll go far. You are so talented. I don't have facebook...but I will try to keep in touch.
Best of luck,
Telisa
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you inspired me to write my own short-short-story
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Max, Glad you have decided to join our ranks, The Bandits are a talented and caring group of poets that look forward to encouraging fellow writers when they are down or just need a friendly smile and a few comments. Please make yourself at home, find a comfortable easy chair and join in the Bandit fun. If you have questions please feel free to direct them to me or -LiliacThOughts-
Welcome to your forest glen my Bandit friend.
Dennis 
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Hi Max  Guess what? You’ve been ambushed! The group, ‘The Poetic Bandits’ do something called Hood-Wink, where we all come together with one chosen poet and comment on their poetry. You were the chosen poet. Hope you were encouraged by this and found it to be a blessing. Keep up the great writing and thank you for your contributions through poetry on this site.
All the best...
-LilacThOughts-
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Long time since I've heard from you.
How are you?
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Hey how are you doing?
Luv,
Candy
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Thanxx for the comment on my poes. Will love 2 keep in touch.
cAndy

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I came upon your contest and thought I better check out the ghost, hmmm - host first. You really mean bussines when you mention arrogance, eh? I thought you were serious until I understood that in fact - you were. As one infected with chronical terminal low self-esteem as I am (well - at times, meaning allways)I was pretty much impressed.
Reading some more (not ALL your page, c'mon - you're not THAT good and + a poem was enough to make me want more.
So I'll visit again soon if that's OK and leave some hopefully sensible comments on your piece (I truly didn't mean that part...)
In the meantime I hope you don't mind if I add you to my favs. I want to follow your work.
best,
rachel
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P.S. Yes, I do realize that they are all philosophers and Goethe would be rather out of place. haha
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I think you should add "grotto of Goethe" to your "about me" section... haha... i just like the alliteration. : )
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thank you very much for you kind words
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Hey man,
I see that we are in the same Teen Challenge together. I just wanted to stop in and introduce myself, and say that I'm looking forward to gettin' to know ya' better and reading your work..
Peace man,
J
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Why did you write it if you were livid with her? Was it sarcastic? It didn't sound llike it. I thought it was good...but then again I pretty much think you can do no wrong with writing. And I promise I will eventually get those poems up...I jsut haven't had time yet.
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Lol thanks Max. And I didn't get them on yet...I'm working on it...
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That's because I hadn't activated it yet. I'll put them on this weekend. Please don't use my name on that account though...I don't want people to know it's me. Thank you.
Nice to know that you're still alive though!!!!
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I'm at summer camp so I can't post anything...it sucks. I have reacently gotten engaged though, so none of my stuff is overly dark at the moment...yes at the age of 16...don't ask. But I do have one or two disturbing ones, so I wil post when I get home. Luv yah Max
~!Telisa!~
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...Sweet Chirst on a cracker...? I must say...that's a new one. Sorry, I'll stop mocking your friends now.
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thanks for the good advice. maybe i'll try perusing a thesaurus for an hour or so, that oughta get the juices flowing.
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sweet christ on a cracker, i am here to stay!
my muse has been less than generous lately, or maybe i just haven't been listening hard enough. you know that horribly empty feeling when you pick up a pen and realize you may as well ram it up your ass for the all good it'll do you? yeah. i'll keep trying though. lord knows i've got enough time on my hands.
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whattup max, its jonathan. check out my one poem. love it.
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maxi??
is that you?
is it really really truly you???
because if it is, i may have finally found my way home.
you must be all done growed up by now!
you do remember your ol' mammy still, don'tcha?
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Damn you post some new poems....I need some new stuff to read...and I can't find any good stuff anywhere! Luv yah Max!!!
~!Telisa!~~
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i'm loving that Max Ritvo image
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i like your new motto, max
(i would, wouldn't i?!)
but tell me: what inspired you to change from a true, but rather unhappy sort of motto (re: pinnacles and lonliness) to one so optimistic about the minds in this world? if it was a book, or a piece of music....tell me, so i too can feel such hope at what the minds of the world hold!
love, c.
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Good to see you up and running again, chum. What happened to RuroniJew?
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In case I wasn't clear about it before: I definitely think you should keep writing, but definitely have fun when you write. I enjoy your writing, but your writing will only be enjoyable for us when you enjoy the writing yourself.
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You changed your name? That would explain why, when I looked for Rorouni Jew, I couldn't find it! Anyway, talk to you later!
~!Telisa!~
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I didn't know which poem to comment on because I like a lot. They are very meaningful and true. I hope you do well in the contest because I think you deserve it. AND POWER TO THE JEWS MAYNE! Even us who don't believe. We should start a Jew group. How funny would that be? Hmm I think Ill check if there already is one. If so, you should totally join with me!
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thank you so much for your comments on my newest story attempt! you are a very insightful reader and you totally got the main character's motivations. interestingly enough, this character is not representing my own opinions, he seems to be taking on a life all his own and i can't wait to see where it goes! thanks again, your support lends me the courage i need to see this story through to the end....i have a feeling this ghost hunter guy is in for a serious change of heart!
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Omg. Your totally right. But. I know i have powers, i know. I can do weird things. and im not going to over grow god. Everytime i talk to him or pray to him, he gives me visions. I need professional help. Omg. Im gonna pray to him tonight. Im so confused.
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I am amazed to read that you are 14. You have a tremendous depth to your thought, and you are really developing into a fine writer. You understand your story in great detail, and your work displays a good understanding of the mechanics of writing and story-telling. I hope you will continue. I know I will continue to look or your work. You will be able to accomplish a great deal with your writing if you stick to it.
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Oh shit, I didin't know you were thirteen kid, I really thought you were ust some imature adult who was upset cuz I wrote about the holocaust. Really kid I hope that one day you come to grips with it and understand shit happens, the holocaust isn't the only bad thing and certainly not the worst thing ever done. but whatever keep writing
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Hey Max!! You should add more poems, we all now you're an amazing poet!!! (Sorry, I'm dying for something to read, none of my friends have added anything in a while  ) Talk to you later!!
~!Telisa!~
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uhhh hi! i thought i'd check you out just because you're name caught my attention in an addline. I like to watch ruroni kenshin so ya it caught my eye. I'm gonna check out some of your stuff. ttyl byezzzzzz
Cheers
~Angel~
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Novae on November 7, 2004
You seem cool, mind if I'm your footstool for a while?
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That matters, Orph? It's philosophy!
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"...no excuse for existance" and the same applies for spelling errors. Existence is spelled with three e's, not merely two.
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I can tell that you're a wanderer. ::looks at your pen name::
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It would appear that out of r little group, were the only one's who actually care enough to keep going on, neh?
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wats up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MAN!!!!!!!!sike jus playin
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Is u awake now? I know u r!!!!!sike im just playing, what have u been up tooooooooooooooooooooooo?????????????????!!!!!!!
Very funny huh?!
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R u still online?written 2:54am
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Hi, im mindlesspoet. Just wanted to stop by and say ve got a new group for teens i think you might like to enter.anyways im going to read come of your poetry. Edited on Jun 11, 6:38 p.m. because ''.
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Hi long time no talk, sorry I've been so sick these last 2 weeks... anyways I'll talk to you soon,
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you are such a self centered, conceited, sexist asshole!!!!! die in hell u mother fucking bitch
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