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xenocide on April 28we shall see if there's a part 4...
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BearWoman : I believe you have given me my most thorough public critique' to date on April 3And I therefore state:
My magical quill I must find
For I now have to save my behind
From the critical thrust
Of who said, "needs must"
Or else rise to the challenge in kind
Hehehe. Watch out you; I have a red pen, too.

Thanks for your detailed critique’. I look forward to digesting it when I have the brains to do so. (Yes, I know, excuses, excuses.)

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amaranthine lover on March 26thanks for signing my guest book then lol
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GotLilt on March 22Wow I never expected such a long reply. I'm honored or dishonored.. LOL
Thanks for your very long, very thorough explanation. I do tend to go off half-cocked when I think someone is being attackes.
have a good one -
Desire : Much love and light Sweet One! on December 23, 2008
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penguin78 on December 10, 2008or even your first name is good
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penguin78 : hey on December 10, 2008i dont want to sound like a creep but i am doing an essay and i am including your poem...the obvious it is not. the thing is i need your last name. e-mail me at chattychick2@hotmail.com please!!
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aeolia on March 13, 2008Yeah, I know about the whole Standard English thing. It just pisses me off when people are too lazy to spell correctly. Blame the Internet and the overall laziness and stupidity of my generation.
And "bubble" is an awesome word. I didn't know Shakespeare invented that one
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Desire : Sending Love&Light Your Way Sweet One!! on February 14, 2008
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Desire : Stopping by Sweet One to say~~ on December 24, 2007
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JadalaStar on December 4, 2007Hey, I was just at you're other ID on here. I'm now checking this one out as you suggested. ^.^
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TexasMomma on October 7, 2007Hey hey I sure have missed you lately!
I hope to hear from you soon! -
Raven Contest on August 3, 2007
This author is a 2007 Raven Contest Qualifier bronze trophy winner. -
lovelustre on February 16, 2007I hope that poetry around the world becomes liberated with freedom of speech...especially there were you are...so that you may express your self as no one else may do so exactly and exquisitly, and leave us awestruck at your words of wisdom and passion.
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requiempoet : thank you kind sir on January 20, 2007My tears have long since dried!! but I do appricate the thought of wanting to wipe them away!

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RIP Whoever : brillience on January 19, 2007
ok. one look at his word usage i was instantly hooked.
it looked and sounded so intelligent i was afraid to post any comments on it. yes yes, because i'd sound SO dumb in comparison. but hey, i'm only 12.
someone should really feature this guy. major genius.
PS: your name rocks too -
requiempoet : **cries** on December 1, 2006I don't know well I don't understand...explain please?
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backlog : Title can't be blank on November 25, 2006Lexis-withdrawalus may allow a more comprehensive comprehension as per you and ye literary documentation.
Yar.
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brilliance corp on November 15, 2006(that odd mess of words is alliterated hebrew)
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brilliance corp on November 15, 2006from the two I read the second one held a deep and vigorous message, way more vigorous than the first (which was anarchy is dead), and that message was you rock. and then the third message which is mine to you is !!!!esuoh etihw eht bmob s'tel
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E t e r n i t y on November 15, 2006Thank you for the honest critiques.. These peices.. well.... I speak from the heart. My age has nothing to do with it and... I dont redraft poems... I think the poem comes out more honest and with more readible emotions when simply exposed like that. Error or no error. I've only been writing for a bout a year now and I expect many more.... It means a lot to see someone critiquing honestly. Thank you again. <3
-Amanda
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shastadaisey123 on November 13, 2006welcomw to Ap and thank you for your critique of "in a cat's eye" evidentally the title was not an appropriate one for my intent...but there you go..some days ya' win some days ya' lose
I really appreciate an honest critique so I have added you to my favorites so I can drop by this week and read your work...feel free to hash mine about....I can always use a keen eye...have a great week
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cafegroundzero on November 7, 2006Hullo, mate. Thanks for the note, although with all that's going on over here, I'm not sure to what it is in reference. Aha, now I see, the poem with the Gaelic title. What's that mean, anyway?
Today's Election Day. I'm almost burned out with the campaigning, and I haven't done half as much as some.
I take it you're enjoying a pleasant spring. We're approaching our winter, as you may well know.
Tarik.
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grannyeri on November 6, 2006Welcome to AP. Loved your comment, critique on my poem Don't Extinguish the Light. Made me look at it in a different light (?). Took one comma out at the end of the first line; didn't really notice there was no other punctuation. Will see about the rest as I go through it a few times before contest deadline date.
Hope you enjoy yourself here - writing, commenting, entering contests and maybe taking some classes offered through Old Poetry. Thanks again for commenting earlier. -
Master Anarchy on October 30, 2006Has the Intro comment been read of thee?
It seemeth its accessability lies
Only in the crypt of the Group List.
(*Whistful sigh*).
Thanks for the signature though (
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C ya round like an arabesque (
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seillean on October 28, 2006Ah, the undead poets' society. One of my unfavourite films.... x
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