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Symphony : Hallo! on June 4

hallo LB, Im not sure will you remember me as it's been a year since I last logged on - but I hope you are well and still writing daily [unlike myself] - take care - symphony!
Shorty Ray : Loveboots... on April 7, 2007

Why Loveboots, I finally come back to find you haven't been around since 03/19. I love your new pieces. Lovely.
We'll have to collab.
Frodofan on February 16, 2007

I am inviting you to participate in The Random Rounds. For more information, click here: http://allpoetry.com/group/show/The%20Random%20Rounds
Kiglorion on September 5, 2006

for you boots..i started writing something in the same way you did, about the "loveboots" name. here is just a piece....lol
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sexy black boots,
worn up to the knees,
with a five inch heel.
a black leather tease!

give me a little time, and i will post it.
Loveboots on August 7, 2006

J-ay Rose.
Thanks very much for all the smiling beasties - I'm not sure what prompted them, but they are nice to see - brighten the place up a bit!
LB
x
Edited on Aug 07, 4:28 p.m. because ''.
j-ay rose on August 6, 2006
Loveboots on August 2, 2006

Thanks Lyndon, have you been able to have a look at "Shipwreck" yet? No worries if you don't have time.
LB
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Edited on Aug 02, 2:06 p.m. because ''.
Kiglorion on August 2, 2006

hello loveboots, on that "verbal suicide" i pulled out that one line from the second stanza, and replaced it with something better. ( i hope lol ) and did a little touch up all around on it. let me know what you think.
love Kig.
Winklings Account on August 2, 2006

Want to know about meter? Just IM me. Ron
Kiglorion on July 25, 2006

ok, who can argue with that? LOL no, i'll feature something of yours if i can.
Loveboots on July 25, 2006

Kiglorion - Hey, thats sweet, but you don't have to that, it's your piece, I just tightened it up a bit.
LB
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Kiglorion on July 25, 2006

hey boots. i put pull the plug rewrite in a contest, if they keep it, and dont boot it for bieng a colab write, and for some stroke of luck it wins, i'll figure out a way to split the winnings with you..lol
i'll let you know whats going on.
love charlie
Kiglorion on July 23, 2006

hey boots, i won bronze for that little box of rocks contest!! woohoo for me!.lol
Loveboots on July 22, 2006

Kiglorion - Thank you for this! No, I didn't know you had done it.
It's a really sweet gesture!
Take care,
LB
x
Kiglorion on July 22, 2006

hey loveboots, i'm not sure if there was a way you could have known but i featured your "four by four by.." poem after i saw it this afternoon. i only ran it for 3 clicks. lol ..thats all the clicks i had.
Loveboots on July 18, 2006

Kaialise - Thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate the notes you leave on my poems as well. I will try to check in at your author page soon.
Take care,
LB
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Gone2007 on July 16, 2006

Hi Hun..i just added you to my faviorts so that you can blow my mind more with your amazing writing talents. You have a perfect way with words if anyone was to ask me. I'm very happy i read your work. I'm very impressed.
Loveboots on July 12, 2006

Hi Lyndon,
If you are hanging about looking for things to critique, I would really appreciate ANY input on "Shipwreck", just posted.

Let me know if you have a piece of yours in mind so I can return the favour.

Thanks.
LB
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Winklings Account on June 29, 2006

Dear Loveboots, it is Ron. I long to have you back in the Winklings. Your poem I saw just now, really got to me. You know, I do not expect wonders from you. Just IM me and I shall critique any poem for you. And, if you wish, invite your friends or mine to help. Especially with contest poems. Do IM me if you still feel uncomfortable if I re-tick you in the Winklings. There are 90 of us. This is not the point. If a high principled and direct poet leaves I feel that loss. So, do re-consider, deasr LB x. Ron (Lyndon).
Loveboots on May 19, 2006

Robbwindow - thanks for this, I went to the site and found my name above someone elses work? Any ideas? I cant see my poem anywhere on the site, but I'm sure I was told it would be included. Don't really mind, just a bit confused.
Cheers.
LB
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Robbwindow on May 19, 2006

robb.moonfruit.com/ This a link to Darkwrite credits.
It has been a pleasure to read your submission, thanks. Check out now I have ammended yet not deleted the wanadoo
Edited on May 23, 12:13 because 'update'.
Symphony on May 1, 2006

Hey LB! I've missed seeing you around the place; and reading new stuff by you - Hope its not anything too serious that's keeping you from here, rather hopefully just a lack of muse or interest, or time. Looking forward to your return though!
Loveboots on February 12, 2006

Nocturne - thanks for your continued support.
I currently have an idea in mind but I can't bring it to life. I want to write about, what I feel, is the horrible injustice of Valentines day. Valentine was a tortured martyr, he died for his beliefs and was imprisoned and put to death simply for having a religion that didn't fit that of his captors.
I cannot understand how his message to a kindly prison slave, thanking her for her good deeds during his captive times (which was signed "Your Valentine") has become the basis for a festival of soppy hearts and pastel flowers and fluffy bunnies. It sickens me. I don't agree with his beliefs, but I believe in his right to hold them. That is what I want to convey, but at the moment I can't find the words.
Sorry, I'm jibbering now.
I hope you are ok.
LB
x
Edited on Feb 12, 1:25 p.m. because ''.
Nocturne on February 12, 2006

I'm glad to hear from you again. I hope to see some of your work soon. Post something, you've the talent!
Loveboots on February 10, 2006

Nocturne - Hi, thanks for this. Pretty busy right now - got a new job, and trying to get back into swimming after the pool was closed for 2 months! Also a lot going on with more personal stuff, got my bloke here this weekend, (he's just on the phone right now, so I have a few mins to log in).
I also had an idea for a novel, so I am considering spending some of my writing time on that (although I don't have a lot of confidence in it and it will probably die the death).
Hope you are ok and your birthday competition went well, might check that out now actually. I'm still here though, havn't disappeared!

LB
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Nocturne on February 9, 2006

Hey LB, how are you? I haven't seen you around in a while. I miss you. :]
jaunty pill on January 22, 2006

I've sometimes used rhyme, but never in any form of finished work. I see rhyme as only able to be done well by other people, because when I see it in my own work I am not satisfied with it at all.

And I agree, our differences help to make speaking with each other very fun indeed. We can debate ideas rather than agree on everything with each other.

Take care as well,
James
Loveboots on January 22, 2006

Jaunty -
Thanks for this, I was thinking something similar. But I don't feel that poetry needs rhyme or form, I am in the process of learning how to rhyme and form at the moment because it is a skill I would like to have (which is why pieces posted here generally fit that style).
I think where we really differ is in the view on concreteness and clarity of images and ideas.

You seem to want people to have to unravel your poems, to work at them, and you want your readers to find that stimulating so that your poems are not forgotten. You don't want people to find your work predictable, or to get bored because ideas are presented too simply.

I feel that poetry should be clear - at least on the surface, so that readers understand it, and I feel understanding helps memory. I want my readers to go away with a solid idea of what they read, and then to be able to question the message it carries in their own time. I don't want people to miss the point I am making or to get bored trying to find it.

I would love to have your opinions on my poems - contradiction is how we learn, and you seem to give real opinion, rather than just passive comment - I value that very much. I am only here to learn.

Take care.
LB
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Edited on Jan 22, 5:18 because ''.
jaunty pill on January 22, 2006

I think the main reason we won't see eye to eye on most modern day poetry or poetry now , Is because you stand firmly behind the belief that rhyme and formats do something for poetry...And I for the most part , Disagree that most rhyme or sonnets , Etc do much of anyhing but sound too predictable and tone a piece down. It shall be fun exchanging comments...Coming from two very different beliefs in what a poem should and shouldn't do. It shall be fun. Maybe we will both learn something new , Maybe we won't.

Happy 2006 and all the best ,
James

Edited on Jan 22, 3:34 because ''.
Shorty Ray on January 17, 2006

I've read some more of your work but I haven't been able to comment, But great work all in all.I cannot wait to read more.
-Shorty
Loveboots on January 12, 2006

Hey MFS, no worries, I'm currently hiding out in the Midlands, but I don't know how long for, I get very bored, very easily. Cornwall huh? Drink a lot of cider? I love cider! Is it true that everyone down there has their own combine harvester?? LOL

Let me know if you want me to have a look at anything else.
Could you check out "what's the point"? please. It has no form what so ever right now, just random scribble, but wondered if you could do something with it - I keep trying to give it a shape, and I don't think it appreciates that.
I took it off my page a while ago, I'll stick it back on.
Take care.
LB
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touchaboy on January 12, 2006

hey thanks for yor comment again but ive now put this as a collaboration and your input is greatly reseaved this is a shared poem now so whats mine is yours. i showed it round the pub tonight and people loved it some men went away thinking i should treat my women better and some women went away thinking i wish mfs was my fella. one women kept it to show her friend. i didnt mean to get to personal with where abouts are you from in the uk it would just be nice to know which county your in as im from cornwall (which is actually a seperate country). but any advice you give is greatly appreciated as you know your tutor on this site (which is the only one i visit) i think me and you could become great ap friends (sorry about the language)

M.F.STEVE xxx
moonling on January 9, 2006

Hiya, LB, where's the party then lol Seriously tho how are ya?
I hope your doing ok but if not, you know where to shout. Take care and talk soon.
Loveboots on January 4, 2006

Shubs, many thanks for your comment on my author page, not sure what you mean by "but no I wont like you to read them,perforce." Let me know if there is anything you do want me to look at.
I know a little about Hinduism, but I know much more about Christianity, I agree with what you imply about it, it is something of a hateful organisation, unfortunatly there are Christians who buy into it unwittingly and honestly believe it is practicing what it attempts to preach. I have nothing against any religious belief, but I do object to the corporation that Christianity has become.
Take care,
LoveBoots
shubs on January 4, 2006

Thanks for visiting and I am glad you liked my "stingy" story.
You can always read my poems if you like my writing,but no I wont like you to read them,perforce.
Hinduism breeds compassion,nurtures love,spreads hospitability,converts no one and therefore is not so popular..unlike Christianity.
cheers Shubs
Shepherdess on January 3, 2006

Hi LB thank you very much for the time you have spent on
" FEMALE of FLORA " I am glad you like it I have read your comments and i can see what you mean.
Thank you Again
Karen
PrabhuDayal Khattar on December 21, 2005

Wishing you a wonderful Christmas in the spirit of love, peace and hope - may beauty & joy shine in your heart. Thank you for your kindness, love and support . God bless!
prabhu dayal khattar
olddrivelandrubbish on December 8, 2005

thank the stars we have concious heads in the uk... your good u r... x tj
grannyeri on November 24, 2005

You're fairly new at this, so welcome aboard. Thanks for the suggestions on my poem - will take you up on that. Sometimes takes an outside look to rectify things. Appreciate that. Have a great day!
Shorty Ray on November 12, 2005

I'd like to show my appreciation for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and that you can relate to it. I'd just lie to say that I intended to put stay , but save came out lol. I'll fix that - but thank you for your honest judgement. Much appreciaited.
Shorty Ray on November 12, 2005

I really enjoyed reading your comment and getting it. You were right about my poem GIVE ME. Not a lot of people can decipher poetry like so, But i do appreciate the comment, and the critiquing. It helps me out. Thank you.
Symphony on November 6, 2005

Loveboots,
I love your poetry and I hope that you keep posting it up - I just went through all the poems and found my jaw dropping with each one, they are so easy to read and like I said, I identify with so many of them - you have a great gift, please don't stop it.
Symph xx
JustADutchie on November 3, 2005

I've read some of your poems too and I really like your 'style', simple but to the point, using just enough words to say a whole lot. I see you're my 'neighbour' LOL only the North Sea is separating us. We could almost wave to each other.
Thanks again for your lovely comment.
Titia

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