Guestbook entries for Lady Patricia

• Karon : Lady Anna on December 19, 2008

  It's been a good while since I've seen or spoken to you. I assume your life has been just as hectic as mine (much as I hope it hasn't been). I'll be heading out for a while, so I'd like your new phone number, since the one I have someone else (I believe your father) has. I'd rather speak with you than leave messages with someone I don't know. So, if you desire, my number is still the same. Have a wonderful time, sweetheart, and we shall speak once again later
  -Karon/Menthrin'kuth
• Writing2Escape on November 21, 2008

  Consider this my unofficial return to the freelance writing realm. Perhaps if and when inspiration strikes me, I'll find myself contributing once again, but until then... I'll merely marvel at your own works M'lady, and thank you for presenting such beauty to me.
• smonte19124 on November 13, 2006

  Hi Again, Per your request you are the first to see part 2 of "To Be Continued" I have decided to make it a 3 part poem series. This one is titled of course "Continued Once Again" and the last will be titled (not written yet) "Continued No More - Thee End" LOL Well, Here Goes, let me know what you think.
  
  Continued once Again:
  He was heard to exclaim “What the Heck”
  As he tore the crucifix from his steaming neck
  Like claws his hands had become
  Around his neck burns from the silver chain had begun
  
  The summons that always tormented him so
  Was as if no more and off he did go
  For he had given in and chosen his path
  God forgive him for he cared not at last
  
  He stumbled in the darkness following the voice that
  Continued its maddening caress
  His mind, his soul, his heaving chest
  His chance to enter the gates of heaven
  Had he completely divest?
  
  Heaven cried openly that night
  The skies opened up with lightening strikes
  Tears of great, great despair
  While the Devil was heard to cheer
  
  For when the righteous falls from grace
  Another minion is born to take his place
  Already to many they number on this earth
  Evil spreading as they rise soulless, hungry
  From the dirt
  
  At last into her presence he has arrived
  Mouth open wide with lust in his eyes
  Floating just beyond his hungering reach
  All inhabitation totally breached
  A voluptuous beauty with glowing skin tinged with blue
  Lips like black cherries glistening covered in honey dew
  
  Once again it has come to pass
  For this moment in time I’ve written my last
  There’s one more segment of this tale to be told
  I‘ll let you in on a secret as it continues to unfold
  I have no idea where the story will end
  Will it be “Good” or” Evil” that’s destined to Win……
  
• smonte19124 on November 11, 2006

  After reading "Join Me My Love" I had to stop by to say hello and became entranced by your bio page. It is absolutely stunning. Did you do the artwork yourself? Your poem was spectacular and I wish you much luck in the contest. I have entered as well with a continuation of "Come Die With Me" Called none other than "To Be Continued" lol I will continue to read more of your work. God Bless
• cutiepie on November 6, 2006

  I have dropped by to admire your work. The graphics are wonderful and I also prefere friends to enemies
• blueyez on July 7, 2006

  You are an ever so talented writer and it is a pleasure to read you works. You are inspiring and very deep. The pictures you paint with your words unfold like a dramatic play unfolding before our eyes. It is not very often I find poems that touch me so. I am very glad to have found your page.
• Pamela on June 21, 2006

  Hey beautiful
  
  ~Pamela
• AceySpadey on April 4, 2006

  it has been sometime has it not or perhaps it hasn't. who can really tell upon the internet. perhaps you have remembered me or not. we can only see.
• Z--- on March 19, 2006

  POP didily pop pop, how ya dooin missy?
  
  been a minute since I've seen ya, I like the new look a lil...I've been tinkin to change my page, but my creativity has left for a little...(when I catch that bastard, he's gonna get it...) and well, same ol same old, hope you've been taken care and stuff...see ya and all
  
  
  later.
• unknownfrailty on March 4, 2006

  You're home for the weekend? I had to find out from Ashley's friend?
• Z--- on February 9, 2006

  thank you so much fro the awsome critique, and I went back and re read my piece and found what you spoke of, it was the rhythem and how I switched up the mood of the piece about half way through, but changed it back...I didn't attempt this, actually I don't attempt anything with my poetry, 98 ta ninety nine percent of my work, is just strait from the heart and strait to paper, I could honestly correct this piece and make it a work of art, but since not many people look at my work, I honestly don't try to change it, I just give it what I do, thank you so much for your comments patty...smiles....I love your name ha ha, I bet you you probably hate patty though ha ha, umm back to the subject, yes I would just like to thank you for your work and time...and should you ever wish me to look at a certain peice, just give me a holla k? thanks and take care.
• poetryality on February 6, 2006

  I love the beautiful visual on this page. STUNNING!
• poetryality on February 6, 2006

  Just dropped by to say HI! I haven't been by your page for a while and you suddenly came to my mind. I hope all is well with you.
  
  Much Love,
  Renee
  aka
  poetryality
• Lady Patricia on February 5, 2006

  I am fine, love... thank you. *hugs*
• Z--- on January 18, 2006

  I hope you are better now, are you?
  I am sorry it took me so long to respond to what you asked, but I still hope everything worked out, keep your head up dear...
• Z--- on December 27, 2005

  thanks for all your comments, yes I guess writing is like an orgasim, and I do feel right when I do write...thanks for all your lovely comments, and I will try to keep up the good work. hehe...I'm working on a dark story for a friend, but it is a decent litary work, and you might like it...thanks
• Z--- on December 25, 2005

  wow...cocksuckers...?mmmm....hey my adress is ##### ah hahaha, just joking I love your page...now let me take my lil ignant eyes off yours and read some of your work
• vampira1665 on December 22, 2005

  Just dropping by to wish you and yours a Very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
  
  Blessed be, Lady Raven
• brokenheart33 on December 19, 2005

  Hey, I just wanted to say hi. I'm going to Fresno tomorrow and I'm gonna miss you so much. Call me when you get a chance. Bye.
• agazeley on December 10, 2005

  If you want my approval you have it – together with my admiration – Beautifully done – I have done some large pictures of African women in my time – I love the colorful customs and dances
  
  Have a look here it might give you some ideas -
  
  www.art.com/asp/display-asp/_/ID--23616/African_Fashion.asp?ui=81DCD107006C4FCCB54612F3B952D031
  
  Albert.
  
• HollyWood on November 21, 2005

  wow, you're writings are really good! hey thanks for commenting on my poem in your contest. but seriously! I really like the one you wrote to your mother, very funny ending, but meaningful at the same time.
• lonelylover on November 20, 2005

  i love your page its beautiful and i love the backround
• Lady Patricia on November 13, 2005

  er
  Edited on Nov 13, 6:07 p.m. because 'sd'.
• The MisSin Truth on October 27, 2005

  i like your author page. the quotes were funny and i agree "its less painful to be alone"! i will be checking out your scriptures.
  blessed
• brokenheart33 on October 22, 2005

  Hey! Thank you so much for all the comments!!! I loved reading them!! I hope you write more poetry soon!! I hope to see you soon!! Much love!! Peace!
• brokenheart33 on October 7, 2005

  HEY FREAK!!! Excuse me....sexy freak!!! I wrote some new poems. Check 'em out!! Peace.
• pointlessdayz on September 27, 2005

  your bio makes me want to know everything about you!!!!!!!!! i dont know why... but having someone put their entire person up on a website for all to see just makes me feel that they are someone that i want to get to know!!!! ya know?? im gonna go read some of your stuff now!!
  
  -alex-
• brokenheart33 on September 11, 2005

  Thanks for the comment on my poem. You always make me smile when I read your comments. Thanks for thinking my poem was.... me. I'm glad I can write like me. LOL! I miss you too babe. See ya soon. Peace.
  
  P.S.-I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WROTE MELANIE!!!!!! GRRR!!! It's cool though.
  Edited on Sep 11, 4:20 p.m. because ''.
• brokenheart33 on September 10, 2005

  I miss you like HELL!!!!!
• requiempoet on September 6, 2005

  Aw you're damn cute
• requiempoet on September 6, 2005

  You are SO AWESOMELY COOL!!!!!!! <33333333333 you friggen rock! i wanna see what you look like!? a goddess perhaps
  
  I'm addicted to Law and order SVU its the only one I watch...and disturbed!!! <3 david dramain is hot....ha ha Alicia keys can sing! wooo! you rock
  
  
  Rosita!
• requiempoet on September 4, 2005

  HEYYY BEAUTIFUL whats goin on my soulful sista? hit me up!!!!
  
  Rosita!!1
• brokenheart33 on September 4, 2005

  Hello. I just got your comment now. LOL! How weird is that?? Anyway, your backround fucking rocks!!! It's so pretty. Your new poems are awesome too. As are all the old ones. I haven't much time to write comments, but I will soon. Talk to you later babe. Peace.
  -Kate
• pattyann4500 on August 18, 2005

  Hi! I just had to see your webpage. Anyone named Patricia has to be incredibly wonderful and has to have a beautiful personality. Don't you think?
  
  Your page is wonderful. I love your attitude, and it's wonderful to see someone with such a beautiful heart. It's obvious when I read your page. Hugs, Patricia ♥
• requiempoet on July 30, 2005

  you definately rock and intrigue me! I edited the poem " domination" and my mistress was pleased!!! lol re read it please?
  
  
  
  xxx
  Rosita
• requiempoet on July 30, 2005

  what a beautiful background! I will be adding you to my favorites list! and since you liked my domination so much! lol we should chat!
• Lady Patricia on July 14, 2005

  Go away Kate
  
• shizuka shi on June 13, 2005

  wow, thanks for the win! im glad to see that people finally started to join. i kept lookin at the contest every few days, and it was just me and one other person entered, but now that its over, im shocked to see that i was up against so many other people! thanks for liking my stuff. if you do write anything from my piece, please let me know, i would lvoe to read it!! thanks! -shiz
• unknownfrailty on May 24, 2005

  Lol. You crazy fool! I am already studying and getting ready for the GED. I'll have it before the next school year starts. No worries... I am not planning on forgetting about it. Lol. I'll graduate before every one of my friends, save for you. XP
  You know my number, right? Well, I have a new cell number!
• Lady Patricia on May 10, 2005

  hey love my email is soulessrobin@yahoo.com. send it to me. do you want extremely dramatic? comedy? horror? let me know and i'll get you a hellva monolouge love.
  
  i'd gladly help
  trish
• unsexypenguin on May 10, 2005

  Hey I was wondering if you could help me out with something. I have to perform a monologue in front of 500 people in two weeks and I was wondering if there's any monologue you suggest. Haven't you seen Eve's Bayou? If You have the part where Mozelle is talking about her husband and her lover, I was thinking about doing that, but if you know a reason I shouldn't or can suggest something better please tell me. Sorry for popping up out of no where and asking this huge favor of you, but it'd help me out greatly. Thank you soooo very much.
  
  -Miranda
• brokenheart33 on April 27, 2005

  Hey. How are you? I'm pretty good. I'm just messaging to make sure we're still on for Friday. I can't wait! Ok, well call me soon with the plan. You know the number. Peace.
  Edited on Apr 28, 10:51 because ''.
• brokenheart33 on March 25, 2005

  Hey. Just sayin wassup. I wanna hang out soon. I'm so bored. Anyway, I've got poems on here and stuff so check em' out. Ok, gotta go. Peace
• unsexypenguin on March 20, 2005

  I just wanted to say hi and see how you are doing. I still love your stuff you're an amazing writer. I haven't talked to ya in awhile coz I've been busy. I'm making a short film out of one of my short stories, if you'd like to read it it's "In The Breaking Light." You're actually the one who inspired me to make it into a movie, thank you so much.
  
  Keep Truckin' and thank you for everything.
  
  -Miranda
• zehnten on January 30, 2005

  Hey there sugar!!! hehe, how you doing trish?
  Been a long time (yes completely my fault) heh, thanks for continously commenting on my works, will one day, soon hopefully, return the favor. All is well with me, just busy. Latest big news is I applied for a university and got in, it's in England so ye pretty excited, start in september. HOw's everything? tell me, tell me, tell me.
  
  love
  
  -chris-
  
  P.S. btw babe, you did spell it wrong (author page) he he MWA!
• trynstopme89 on January 4, 2005

  hey its me u sent me a comment and im replying i want to talk so IM me at lost cause23505 thats my aim s/n or just e-mail me at lost_cause23505@yahoo.com well later
  
  -ben
• Pamela on December 8, 2004

  Wicked page! Looks like my eyes when i cry...LOL..no kiddin! cept fer mine are pale green..not blue
  I IM'd ya...it's important...read it..TALK TO ME GIRL! LOL
  
  ~Pamela
• on October 13, 2004

  Hey Patty. Guess who?
• omega hate on September 22, 2004

  thank you very much for the silver. you just made my day! thanks again and see ya around! tootles!
  
  reiche
• Ashley Bright on September 17, 2004

  holy shit
  i love the background!

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