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TheRamer on November 21, 2007I'm a not so horrible warning myself!
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TheRamer : hi! on October 16, 2007Hi, how are you?
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sidewinder on August 21, 2007pounces allllllllll over your authorpage
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youdontexist : mark this day on April 29, 2007Ladie Lee, Inara Kate, Greatness of Great, Goddess of the Pen, etc etc... mark this day.
For this day, is the day that a Big Darn Hero, nay, the BIGGEST DARN HERO, has critiqued all of your published poems, and even some of your unpublished works. Now can you please unchain me from the keyboard like you promised? -
youdontexist : song for Ladie Lee's guest book, take 3 on March 18, 2007oh my, Ladie Lee
where could you be
sitting up late writing new poetry
complex thoughts, expressed so deeply
the uniformed reader might think you're really creepy
"Rabbits" with "Fashion"
written in latin
some strange "Gourd Songs" and "Forgotten Maps"
and who can forget the "Acrostic in B Flat"
a "Monologue in Explanation," hun you are
the latest sensation
"Vincit qui se vincit,"
please don't quit quity quit
you've "Examined the Opaque,"
while you're reader's minds ache
and who could forget your piece called "untitled"
to read all your works, it truly is vital
i know this song stinks, and i know the rhymes are jank
but i know that you love me, so you wont make me walk the plank
i'm getting kinda tired, and i know i'll think of more later
so maybe one day, i'll edit this greater -
Frodofan on March 10, 2007http://allpoetry.com/contest/2341680
Please check in with the group as well. This is the only time I'll be putting out reminders that are not in group messages. -
Frodofan on January 12, 2007lol. You're in. Welcome to The Random Rounds!
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youdontexist on November 9, 2006oh and ps
please remember
if i have a band you're always back up vocals
you can write those words and provide real chuckles
our music is wild
our music is crazy
we may not have talent
but at least we aint lazy -
youdontexist on November 9, 2006hey hey hey my favorite georgia friend
do you think that you could write more with your pen
i just got home from the meeting
the society ditched VHS now its only DVD-Bling
the meeting tonight was great
got my new wt's and awake
i got them in plain text and mp3
here's the original song because thats the way you want it to be
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Continuing the "song's in Ladie Lee's guest book" thing I did before:
so here we are, a few months later
i'm not that good so don’t be a hater
just kick back as i write a new song
and this sentance is gramatically wrong
last time you wrote one back and this time you should once again
it doesn't have to be as long, so whip out that pen
i'm really, really bored lookin' up some poetry
at allpoetry.com readin' words like i'm on some kinda spree
just got back from service, the campaign is good
preachin true religion just like i should
i hate those poems that are all about love
and all the tough times when push came to shove
my poetry the acceptation cause i'm just that good
i know that was choppy, man i hope you understood
now that i think about this one's kinda a rap song
man this just isn't right, no no this is wrong
i'm not a rapper, and i'm not smooth
i be writin’ these words like i got somethin' to prove
i aint really cunning, i aint real smart
but look at these eyes and say i dont have heart!
so that's it, i'm done now, your profile is filled
i hope this song left you somewhat thrilled
because when i'm real bored and all important stuff is done
i like to do somethin' unproductive just to have fun
ladie lee writes poems, all of which are constructive
i hope she likes me after this rap is done.
on a side note i'd just like to say
i love to rhyme i could do it all day
oh i hate this rain, i hope it doesn't stay
because right now i'd be outside at play
cause right now, i've got, too much time on my hands
and its a boring thursday, and i aint got no plans!
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rixi on October 30, 2006Hey, no worries, my writing is exactly up to scratch anymore =)Look forward to reading something soon.
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sidewinder on October 18, 2006pounces thru your arthorpage with skull mask on
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youdontexist on September 17, 2006I'm singing you this comment right now like an emo kid or something
"heyyyyyy. i'm bored. watching batman beings
oh snap loook at the way that the scarecrow grins
la. la la la. im on a couch. with a laptop... la la la lala
man i hope, the sequel, isn't a big flopp.. flop.. flop.. YEAHHHHHH
reading poetry from you and some strangers
la la la laaaa i hope bruce wayne lives through dangerss
im watching bat... bat... batman begins
la lal ala la. bat. bat.. batman beings
man he looks cool with that mask on his chin
ooo that outfit.. its tight to the skin
its gotta chafe.. sooooo bad... so. baaaaadddddddd
la la a la... la... la
etc etc... la la.. etc etc
feel better... im bored.. la la.... "
wow. i can't believe i just typed that out.... i've seen this movie way to many times -
Kendall Campbell on January 5, 2006Invited - allpoetry.com/Contest/1738038
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rixi on December 14, 2005rawr ¬_¬ first time ive seen you online for ages and I think you've buggered off again lol. You need to update! I miss being confused by your poetry!
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Rott on March 3, 2005Thank you so much for the comments for the sake of commenting, and the enjoyment for the sake of enjoying in reading, without considering website ethics or whatever.
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SoleDiavolo on December 28, 2004HEy sweetie, I'm sorry I kinda kept dying on u in the CB.. I have missed you though dude..no one can serve me a martini like you did... Where have you been dear? It's lovely to see you again, love you, ciao.
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Runawaytrain on December 10, 2004I noticed your comment on one of Edna Millay's poems, and the I looked at some of your poetry and thought thay you may like to enter this month's Allwrite contest. The theme is mythology. The winner gets published in January's issue of Allwrite. Here is the link if you want to check it out: http://allpoetry.com/poem/910403
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Inscrutable on August 30, 2004Hi.
A terzanelle is a cool hybrid of terza rima and a villanelle.
Terza rima is a rhyme scheme that basically goes ABA BCB CDC DED, etc.
Here's a link to a poem I had in a form contest that explains the villanelle: allpoetry.com/Poem/718001
Terzanelle is made up of elements of both, since they're both three-line stanzas.
The meter I used for "Prometheus" is three feet lines of three syllables each (I like how all the threes go together), where the middle syllable is accented, if that makes sense.
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catsigh on July 25, 2004Thank you for your comment on my poppies reply. May I ask wich part you found "horrific"? Was it how everyone trys to make things fit or that poetry isn't rhyme? Do you mind me asking what you thought of the poem? Please don't take this as sarcastic. That's not my intent. Just making conversation.
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Poetic Fanatic on June 5, 2004The pen was not only bitten, but the ink has run all over me,
but hey, cleaning up and going forward is a must be for me. Thanks for dropping in.
Tommy -
dittysri on April 16, 2004Thanks for inviting me to enter your contest Ladie Lee. Hope you enjoy the read.
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Flaming Sky on April 12, 2004Hi, just wanted to give you the pantoum outline:
"A pantoum is a poetic form consisting of interlocking four-line stanzas. Lines 2 and 4 of the first stanza become lines 1 and 3 of the second stanza, lines 2 and 4 of the second stanza become lines 1 and 3 of the third stanza, and so on. Lines 2 and 4 of the final stanza are taken from lines 1 and 3 of the first stanza, making the entire form circular." -
Seraph1885 on April 11, 2004Happy Easter!
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Ladie Lee on March 21, 2004MJJ?
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M.J. on March 21, 2004Ok Lady Lee and I'm happy that I've stopped by
And I'm happy I was the judge of your write too M.J.J. -
Seraph1885 on December 31, 2003Sending you the warmest wishes of the New Year.....
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dittysri on December 19, 2003I appreciate you commenting on some of my work Ladie Lee and welcome you into the midst of All Poetry. Hope you find good friends and much pleasure here. jean
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shamoke on December 17, 2003it is a great book
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Ms McGuiver on December 14, 2003my thoughts on "Riddle on a Tower Stone":
I'm going to take a shot in the dark, and assume this is a piece inscribed on a stone from a long ago minstrel or bard. I would tighten up your rhyme scheme, and get a consistant flow going. it sounds more melodic and musical that way. The whole poem can fit to a "- 7, 6, 7, 6, - 7, 6, 8, 6, - " scheme very easily, with only a few adjustments to each stanza.
these are the changes I would suggest for stanzas 2,4, and 5:
"The king is in his keep," for "The catamount in his keep," and
"whispered message to the masses" for "whispered message to man and maid"
"‘Fore the child will arise" for "Till earths child will arise,"
"Scorning all that makes man proud" for "Scorning women’s weal and woe,"
"And liars he’ll despise" for "Thus mankind he'll despise."
"One last time I will proclaim" for "Once more just I will tell out,"
"He’ll love is not the norm." for "Though by his love is torn."
I hope all of this helps without changing the content too much! Let me know if there's any more you'd like help with...
ALanna
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Talia on November 29, 2003The one on my page is off a singer called KAtie Melua, it isn't a poem it is a song. A very good song. I don't know the insperation of it, but I like it. I will be back soon to return the favour, but for now. Thanks for the comment.
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rixi on November 15, 2003Hey, no offence taken to the comments on Need, I'm here to learn not get my ego inflated (which is nice tho...) if you wanna suggest changes to it, feel free, ill take 'em onboard and change it if i feel it should be changed. i think though, im going to bed... with it being half six in the morning.. i shud really try to sleep. g'nite
Be lucky
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DarkPoetKid on October 26, 2003Hehe, no problem! And I actually am glad that you don't share my beleives. It means that you find it ok to disagree with people and believe in what you want, which is the way things should be. I believe what I beleive... because I beleive it, not because anybody else does. And you believe what you believe, because you beleive it. Lol, but enough of my crazed ramblings, thanks alot for commenting on my works! I really enjoyed yours, and will probably undoubtedly read more in times to come!
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Cocytus on October 23, 2003i also wanted to thank you for your comments most people are just like nice write keep it up... very fun.....blah blah blah.... its good to know theres a perosn out there that feels the same... keep it up
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*brushes past musical notes, smiling knowingly* Why, how are we today daaling? You be getting a bit head over heels with poetry, yes? You write eva so prettily. Such purrfect flow with your dainty little words. Bewtiful, if I may say so myself. Well, I shall be seeing you later, yes? Remind me to bring roses, which would you rather daaling, red or white? I was thinking red, red is very sultry, yes? Then again white is eva so sweetly innocent.
Anyhow,you enjoy yourself little one.
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ArtFullyMe on October 15, 2003Pleased to have found your work, it is thought provoking, which I like. If it were me, I wouldn't post a plot summary simply because I like mystery and don't wish to always know where something is going, I would rather work it out, or think on it. That's me though, if you think it would be easier than explaining I can see why you would..
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Monkei on October 12, 2003Lol, is finding out what that piece about incentive to leave word in your guest book? Quite an excellent idea for filling it up. Ingenious if you ask me, lol. Sometimes, when you really haven't been here long, it feels like no one is reading your stuff simply because they don't know you exist. I do, and I'm glad I found you. I did really like your piece "Once We Were Dancers," and I would really like to know what it was about. Drop me a note when you get a few minutes.
-_Katie_-
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Its-Me-Death on October 1, 2003Even though you only have three poems, I can tell you have a lot of talent. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. And thanx for your nice comment!
~Andi -
poisonsilver on September 28, 2003really cool poems! keep on writing and u better tell me when u've poested another! lol great job!
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