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Draig aine : thank you on June 1for addig me as a faveroit,I am honored!
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Mari Goes on May 17ah and ik dacht dat je een nieuwe haiku had
Grab your pen and write
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Sandi Alford on January 12Hiya Wim!
popping in to see what you've been up too and hope life is treating you kind my friend
I can't wait for Spring, I wanna come and fly a kite!
Have a great day! love and blessings, Sandi
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klassy lassy on May 23, 2008Wim, just dropping by to send you a and wishes for a rose filled day. Have missed you because I've not been as active as I was due to health issues. : Love to you and yours, ~Karen
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Mari Goes on January 4, 2008dat is nu echt lang zonder een nieuwe gedicht!
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Arkbear : Nice work ~ on December 16, 2006You joind on my birthday....a few years off of course
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Sandi Alford : Peeking in...hello??? on December 15, 2006leaving a
for you to find....
I can't wait til ya open it! 
I came to see what I could do
to make you laugh and giggle too
so when you take the ribbon free
and lift the lid look out you'll see
it's waiting there to jump with glee
Vivacious hugs to you from me!
You've just been sent a Santa Sandi hug-o-gram
Happy holidays! -
Nicolette on October 21, 2006
I see my dear friend Karen (KlassyLassy) also here on your page - such a beautiful one she is. Just wanted to say thank you for your wonderful comments on my poetry, Wim. You have such a keen eye and pick up on the essence of my poetry so well.
Many blessings to you and yours!
~ Nicolette
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purplebubbles on September 28, 2006Hey!!!
Great niews, ik verhuiz deze week naar Arnhem!
Yeah lol, very suprising yup!
Neway i got to get some sleep
last day at school tomorow!
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klassy lassy on July 13, 2006Wim, I'm missing seeing you on-line, but am sending wishes your way for a good summer, memorable blue skies, and hopefully time to join us with your poems, observations, and friendship again soon. ~ Klassy
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purplebubbles on June 25, 2006Ah wat leuk! Denemarken, ben d'r zelf nog nooit geweest! Ik hoop dat je rug beter word, ik kan je geen
geven dat gaat pijn doen, dus gewoon een bos bloemen ! Beterschap!
Ik heb nu vakantie, en het einde is ... ja weet ik niet want ik ga mischien terug naar nederland, en dat gaat het 6/7 september worden [7nde is mijn verjaardag dus dat is dan ook weer lekker!]
Nogmaals beterschap!
*flower*
much love wim!
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Iohagh on April 27, 2006Darling
Thanks for your comment but I am no longer in that group. I cut back just to take care of my Pixie. Smoosh before I whoosh.
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Reina on November 20, 2005did u ever read part 2 of i hate you u should if u didn't
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Reina on November 20, 2005Me and my father dont think a like his way of solving something is with an angry additude or violence and my way is by talkin it in a peaceful way
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SirPort on July 23, 2005Thank you for you many wonderful comments. You have an interesting author page. I must look more closely.
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Mari Goes on March 24, 2005Hi Wim, hoe gaat met jou? Ik zie u hier niet zo vaak als vroger. I hoop dat alles is OK met u. Kusjes, Mariza
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skinwalker 2 on February 21, 2005grapple summers wind
through winters shadow of death
long may your kite fly
((Bows))~my friend ~ that is from the heart.
I used every syllable that came to me in my way
of saying to you ~Thank You for all your kindness.
I am not educated in the use or methods of combining
languages as if most haiku poets seemingly think this is of
great significance or worth ~ I don't , ???
I think life and season are connected by mother earth (??),
as if a moon of black cherries could be any sweeter across time zones. ((Big Smiles)) and much respect to you ,most of all its fun to me ..Thank you for your kindness Kitesen .
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Mari Goes on February 14, 2005Hi there! Happy Valentines
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Angel-Amethyst on January 19, 2005Hi thanx 4 ur advice on my ku's i'v made them seperate and it looks alot better.
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Kitesen on November 24, 2004well he is very difficult to translate (don't know if he didn't this himself already) his very own use of describing all kind af human parts in many of his poems makes it very dangerous. One easely loses the sense that his language comes with. The humor behind it. But I hope this small piece that is so incredible intense may speek for his quality.
thanx for the pluim
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anyonita jenea on November 24, 2004you translated from vroman? i'm impressed...
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Kitesen on April 1, 2004*
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AndrewHide on April 1, 2004Hi Kitesen,
s you were enjoying Don's suggested reading, I thought you might like some more.
Andrew
Matsuo Basho
oldpoetry.com/authors/Matsuo%20Basho
Hokushi
oldpoetry.com/author/Hokushi
Yosa Buson
oldpoetry.com/authors/Yosa%20Buson
Kobayashi Issa
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Siyau Ziyau on February 16, 2004Hello.
I do not know "Billboard's Haiku".
Tanka is a song.
Tanka writer sings a huge quantity of a song.
It is omnibus.
Tanka is nonfiction.
So, the phrase is figurative.
The wind of spring, chocolate, a mustache. say yes.
Not only Tanka but all works are a reader's things.
It changes by a reader's heart.
Is a theme to live?
Is a title in existence of man?
If you recognize it as "It is", it is religion, is art and is life science.
Tanka is nonfiction.
oh! However, my Tanka is the fairy of alcohol.
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Kitesen on February 12, 2004IT is like they say here wenn the weather becomes that shiny. THe streets are getting more and more beautiful these days.
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Kitesen on February 12, 2004had to reply earlier. Seems AP is realy world wide. Good to see it realy works came here by a tip on another site this is realy a living thing. Lots of pleasure.
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Siyau Ziyau on February 9, 2004My user agency cannot look for a response button.
Therefore, it uploads to this page.
In my childish vocabulary, it has not expressed well.
It becomes in spring and water is warm.
"I go to a town cheerfully."
Thus, possibly it should have written.
I became the fisherman of "the fish of paper"[a book-worm = a book].
I became the "bird [a beauty] watcher ".
It is the responsibility of the sun of spring.
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bareisyo no
hati ni sazameku
haru no hosi
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of a potato
laughs merrily in the pot
the star of spring
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Siyau Ziyau on February 4, 2004Please allow, if my understanding is wrong.
Tanka is three line plus of two lines.
Three lines of the beginning call it the first phrase.
Two lines of the end call it the second phrase.
As for a haiku poem, the first phrase becomes independent.
I borrow the season word of a haiku poem to tanka.
February 4 was the first day of spring.
Therefore, "Welsh onion" is winter. "a mountain laughs" is spring.
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phatalvision on January 28, 2004Hi Kitesen, welcome to AllPoetry. I see you're from Netherlands. Glad to meet you.
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leannewales on January 8, 2004Hello Kitesen! I would like to welcome you to AllPoetry, this is a place where you can feel comfortable in posting all your own work and at the same time receive constructive and encouraging feedback.
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