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Alright buddy, apparently you're a little slow on the uptake. Your little dilemma is a piss poor one. First of all, I said it was a contest for up-beat, happy songs about love and enjoying life. Yours was borderline erotica and just flat out sick. In all honesty, it was lowbrow, degrading to women, disgusting and a detriment to read. I dont really care if you think your poem fit the guidelines, but I'm a judge and it's up to me and my co-judge as to who wins and neither one of us liked your twisted little poem. Dont get an attitude with me cause you cant write within guidelines. Oh, and two...love isnt about sex, you stupid shit and sex is definitely not the best representation for love. If you're too immature or too blind to see that, you need to grow up fast. Love is about emotion and happiness and the joy you bring each other. Love is waking up every morning and having your heart skip a beat when you hear your girlfriend's voice, not wanting to rip her clothes off the second you get her alone. You honestly are one of the dumbest people I've met. And I hang out with skaters, surfers and rock musicians. Think about what you're saying, even if you're using sex in a symbolic way, the way you worded it made it seem like you were using what ever poor woman had the misfortune to come into contact with you. I suggest that you take some time to learn what love really is buddy and take a class on constructive criticism or anger management or something. Love=feeling and emotion, the happiness and joy of being together. Not banging someone's brains out.
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AndStarsDoShine : YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs on May 31, 2007
You twong my thong.
Love ya!
Marisa

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Why don't I have a special place on your page?
You're my effing lover!!! I don't even get a special thingy...Lol
I put your poem on my page.
Joran, I'm angry
but I still love you.

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 OMMFG!!!!
WHY AM I NOT ON YOUR PAGE?!!!
 [cries in corner] I am seriously hurt, babe. Geez, I thought we had something going on!!!!  I guess not...
Awww man...
Postscript: I put "Joran" because I love your name and just thinking of the word "Joran" could give me an orgasm on the spot.
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On myspace. ^_^
My url is
myspace.com/pinacolada070
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I love you too. I miss ya hunny.
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Hey hunny,
How are you? I'm not doin good. I feel like shit right now. I wish you were on msn...so we could talk...I really need to talk to you. You always make me feel better.  I just want you to know that I care about you soo much and that you are sooo effin sweet. 
♥Alyssa♥
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...hey lovely!!
i am bored
Ya...
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sure you can what would you like to be??
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Hey babe. I changed my name. Just thought you should know. Love yew.
Love,
Alyssa 
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im 16, i was 16 in may 
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Okay, thanks a lot. My birthday was last month(the 25th) and I'm 16. How about you?
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lol, ok, well send it me when you can, and ill see how i can help, ss_morgana@hotmail.com thats me, lol how old ru?wens ur bday?thats ok, ill sort out that comment later lol i just got angry wen i was readin it so ill re comment
laura
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Just be lucky you don't have that many to contend with. Thanks a lot by the way for the wonderful comments.  And thanks for wanting to help me. When I get home I'll e-mail you. And just to make sure, you can send me an E-mail at joran_always@hotmail.com I can be your older AP bro if you want. But yeah, tomorrow when I have access to my computer (this is my friends' laptop I'm on) I'll send you the page I got for the story.
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i only have 3 ap family  lol 2 sisters and a bro lol
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grrr i have tried to add that bunny 5 damned times and it fecks up my author page 
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Hey. OMG!! I haven't talked to you in a long time babe. I miss ya. Well I guess I'll talk to you sumtime.
Love,
Alyssa 
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Hey baby. How r u? I can't find you on myspace. Are you still on there? Well ttyl. I love you!
Love,
Alyssa 
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Hey babe, How r u? Just checkin up on you. I miss you. Well ttyl maybe.
Love ur ap g/f,
Alyssa
P.S. I can get on myspace now ok?
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I HAVE posted something, just not here. It was a philosophy.
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Hey ap baby. How r you? I haven't talked to u in a while n I think b'f n g'fs should talk more than we do. lol! How bout you? Well im me back plz.
Love,
Alyssa 
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Hey my ap b/f. How r u? What have you been up to? Well hust thought I'd check up on ya.
Love,
Alyssa 
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People, the homepage is actually two:
www.myspace.com/joransez
That's my real one. My band's page is:
www.myspace.com/wecannotgoon
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I can tell by your name that you're a SLIGHT Metallica fan. If you haven't yet, check out MY name.
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Rammestein and Metallica kick ass.
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Metallica is my favorite band of all time and it kicks ass!
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And the rammsetin song engel
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I like when you added that part of the rammstein song.
rammstein is awesome dude.
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Hey sorry bout that i love the poem Setting sun... sorry!  come and see my poetry anytime and please leave comments bye 
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Yea, I have MSN. animerican91@hotmail.com That's my address so add me anytime if you have one.
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Hey it's Nikki...I said i said my favorite poem was "Real" by ME. Sorry for the confusion  come and see my poetry anytime! Bye 
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I added you to my Yahoo. I hope you haven't changed it since I last knew it.
-Lacy-
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What part of my AP family would you want to be?
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Hey Published Poem - What part of AP do you want to be?
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I want to be part of your ap family dude
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Here's Alter Mann, translated (mostly) by my friend (in his words, of course):
This is a rough translation... and some words I couldn't figure out... and some parts are in chopped english... but here it is...
It waits comes and puts makes itself for the noon wind the wave dully with a specialty every day the old the
water smoothly
I the water start sees itself the stone to my joke in the circle moved the old me sadly and again smoothly
swept it
In the white sand the old man trembling its pipe only the water smokes and I know needs why he these
specialties
The premonition sleeps have like a volcano zogernd I then asked the head tended it protected it sleeps has it
before it said died
Your mirror should be the water first if it is smooth, will see yet remains you how many Marchen you and
around Erlosung, you will implore
The specialties at the body the fingers pressed had to break remains the hand in the death cramp hardened it
it the specialties back in the sand
The old call I it liked selected can read me yet here every day I shelter zuruck in the noon wind and in the
specialty I
Your mirror should be smoothly is see yet remains the water first if it wist you how many Marchen that and
around Erlosung, you will implore age man
Well, there's almost 98% of the song...Sorry it ain't 100...
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As I find them, I will be posting English versions of the Rammstein songs that I put on my profile, just to let people know!
-Sword
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WA washington right??? what part???
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Guess you really like Jessie. Why? is it cause she is soooo sexy? or her beautiful personality. personally i adore both!
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Hey!! lol will you be my brother? lol dramaqueen469 and Lady of Sorrows are my ap sisters so in a way i guess it already makes ya my brother? lol.... anyway how old you whats ya name? etc.... i'm 16, live in new zealand and my name is kendyl!
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thanks. that poem was just random. at first it seemed as if i was on drugs, so i changed it into a guy problem.
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Hey! I'm your sister's sister's sister (OMG!!) Lady of Sorrows has an ap sis brainyblonde who's MY ap sis lol. Wanna be my ap brother?
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